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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 04:51 PM · On: In the End

I'm glad you worked out the kinks.  The whole chapter was worth reading!  Ususally the people they save accept (on some level) what happened.  It's great to see someone who continues to disbelieve!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 03:25 AM · On: In the End

This was a scarry ove for a reader to be so devotted to your writing, but it was worth it.

There are many heart felt guiltyness, love, happyness, comfort, and room for coforting sleep.

thanks, your still my favorite.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to scare you! i haven't written anything as dark as that since- i was 17 when i wrote that. im 10 now...

there is a bloc on my writing at the moment. i recently lost a clost friend and im trying to keep my head above millions of uni books.

kiara

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 03:12 AM · On: Dream The Dilemma, One Will Happen Then.

This is something that would completely drown the character of SAM. SILENT! Like DEAN.

This is a bit harsh, that you as a writer would mentaly place a character with such little strength to hurt a deon. I don't think he will be able to finish the task.

Then there is DEAN! in attack mode and as protective as he can to his sibling majorly.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:46 AM · On: A Whole Lotta Research

This is one mystery that in truth I don't think that the character of SAM may not make it . I do hope that I'm wrong.

He to me is looking a bit pale and the sickness is getting a lot worse.

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:30 AM · On: Dickheads and Doctors

"Common Sense. Let your upstairs brain grow a bit and you'll know what I mean." I will say that those where might defined words hopefuly they don't leak out the other end.

I do think that this " IT " is truly screwing with SAM and DEAN is getting a bit fidgit about it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:00 AM · On: Drunk under the table

Only DEAN would think "How close is close?"; of course think with lower regions of the content itself.

I do like the intreging setlement between both siblings decideing who will search what. It showd the civilized Winchester huan way.

Also, the keen antics of DEAN trying to support and help SAM w/ a drinking contenst.

This is one hot story, thanks.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:28 AM · On: A Pain in the ass

Funny very comedian in both of them . . . that is what I like about your style of writing. There is always pain of some sort and then coes laughter. That is GOOD!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:23 AM · On: Back to the beginning

Their father is a real DICK, and has porbably always has been since the incedent of their mother his wife and copanion.

Its understandable, but I would like to see a vivid image that their father would get that hard edged stick from his ass and go to the with no hassling nor questions.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:16 AM · On: Think... Remember...

okay this is not cool.

The syntex u use is great and it puts a lot of feeling to it. Along with vivid images that are haunting me to this time.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:06 AM · On: An Orderly Visit

I am feeling a bit scared, this should not have happend. I ean to me.

There are times that the wrieting I read from a writer I can feel intensly what the writer or character is feeling and at times it scares me.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 05:13 AM · On: Caught Pants Down

I so love this one already.

The inclouser of being a portective sibling can take a toll that is worth anything else.

The composure of reaction that Dean had pressured the father figure of stateing to SAM not to lie.

WOW!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 05:03 AM · On: Aftermath

Athough, I love trully the character of SAM . . . I do hope it was him. Sorry Sam.

The visual of tormant is starting to hit me seriously.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 04:51 AM · On: The accident

Wow, this is one that I shudder just by reading it and can feel the moistness of the liquid protruiding from where Dean slashed his brother.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 05:43 AM · On: In the End

Well I was wrong about anana, but at least the boys are them wild selves back. THANKS

Author's Response:

You weren'r wrong about anna she is just a major sceptic.

I've started a sequel to this set a year later with Anna now as a main character but I need a beta/co-writer becasue it isn't going to well so if anyone sees this check out Never a Winchester and let me know where I can use some help

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 05:37 AM · On: Dream The Dilemma, One Will Happen Then.

I think this will come to a good end. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 05:30 AM · On: A Whole Lotta Research

WHy in all HELL !!!!!!!! GAYS OF OUR LIVES, AND NOT GENERAL HOSPITAL? Yes, I am a fanatic so shoot me. In which Dean's character could have worked with a better cast of course!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 05:25 AM · On: Dickheads and Doctors

I seriously like Anna. No comment in regards to Deans small Brain. I also think SAM is trusting her.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 04:17 AM · On: A Pain in the ass

How sweet, but  a real JERk. It's not like he knows how to use it except for his DIRTY ASIAN BEAUTIES!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 04:12 AM · On: Back to the beginning

Its intreging of the remanacing.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 04:06 AM · On: Think... Remember...

This is seriously crap to hell he can't remember which is good and bad at the same time. Dean is screwed like the drink.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:48 AM · On: An Orderly Visit

OOOOOHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so going to hurt and haunt Sam. Very dipective of image that keep playing on this chapter. I like it. Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:38 AM · On: Caught Pants Down

A family moment, so PRICELESS TO A FINISHED KODACK MOMENT!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:30 AM · On: Aftermath

Very discriptive  events and emotions.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 03:23 AM · On: The accident

This is going to be a hellraiser of emotions.

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 11:27 PM · On: In the End

Welll...I like it!

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