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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 07:48 PM · On: The Answer

Hmmmm...if the dream was in the future, will Dean and Pepper have Ayla, and will John survive along with Dean their encounter with YED? Looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 07:43 PM · On: Perfect

Hmmmm... I was wondering about that. Mary seemed to understand why John seemed so sad and yet happy at the same time. Wondering what is really going on. When he wakes up will he be back to his reality? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 07:24 PM · On: The Announcement

I love how you use conversation from WIAWNSB into your story. I'm still sensing a bit of angst between Dean and Sam. Especially when Sam felt Dean was skipping out in helping set the dinner outside, using Ayla as an excuse. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 07:14 PM · On: Sam and Jessica

Is it my imagination or is their a bit of discord between family members here? Or am I'm reading things that aren't really there? I find it interesting that John hasn't changed a whole lot of diapers considering Sammy was only 6 months old when Mary dies. I guess Dean took over that responsibility. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 07:05 PM · On: The Bet

LOL! I can well imagine driving the Beetle would be horrible to Dean, the poor boy. I knew Dean would be great with Ayla and would want to spoil her, too. I too am curious as to what Sam wants to announce. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 06:59 PM · On: A Beer

I'm with John. I want to see Dean with Ayla. I'm sure he's great with her, he always seems to understand kids and knows how to relate to them. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 06:31 PM · On: Dean At Work

I thought it was interesting that you spelled the car like the Beatles (with an a) instead of Beetle, and the owner is Pepper (perhaps after Sgt. Pepper?). Anyhow...Dean seems pretty astute that something is off with John. I'm still wondering if something wicked is going to happen, I can't help it, it's Supernatural after all. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 06:25 PM · On: Pepper and Ayla

Hmmm...so Dean is a dad in this alternate universe (now that would be a kicker if the John from this universe woke up in the Supernatural world~oh, horrors!). Are Pepper and Dean married? I'm assuming that Pepper is with Dean since John is right about Sam being with Jessica. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 06:20 PM · On: A New Reality

I was holding my breath waiting for the other shoe to drop but at least so far everything seems ok. Is it really perfect or will their be cracks in this "perfect" world, too? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 06:17 PM · On: Dreams

Hmmmm...a very interesting premise. I wonder if it is a natural dream or something supernatural? Will it be like Dean's Djinn world where it looked perfect but there were glaring hurtful things going on as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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