Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/10 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lights out

Really glad you had both brothers POV's, it tells so much about them and in a very intense way. You give us a wonderful view on Dean and what's important for him in life, it's always Sam, and it also shows Dean is a true protector in every sense as he never could have killed this child. I hope this will be the key for saving him in the end. Loved the atmosphere you created and my heart skipped a beat at the end with the "Lights out...". Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/10 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 Lady sunshine

What a flashback, Sam's nightmarish run through the dark towards his brother (and daylight and did I enjoy the images you created), this was fantastic and haunting all at once, a race against time and you could feel Sam's fear for Dean the whole time. Loved the title "Lady sunshine" and what it symbolized! Wonder if the Celtic sign will play an important role and the search for answers and a cure is what keeps Sam away from Dean. Grand, can't wait for Dean's POV now!

Author's Response: ty hun for the review and the stars as always....BIG SMILE....i'm glad you are liking this ( whispers....so am I hahahahahaha evil grin) I'll update deans point of view pretty fast.....I think LOLZ tunggggggggggg xx

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/10 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 Scrubbed...

So intense it hurts, girl, you sure are back!!! Can't imagine what it feels like for Dean to be this helpless and what a beautifully worded but sad line this was - "Dean...felt like a soldier without a gun, without bullets that would hit the marks he was aiming for...but maybe the worst thing of all this was the fact that he even couldn't tell his Sammy that things weren't that bad...that he couldn't tell his brother that he was okay and ask him if he felt the same". I believe he only can bear it, survive it because of Sam and god, please tell me he will be back, he wouldn't leave Dean! Grand chapter!

Author's Response: hey you!!!!! so glad you liked it makes all the difference for me cos this story is so close to rl things instead of the supernatural ones it's a hard one to keep true to but i try anyways hahahahaha and without giving away the end of this i can tell you one thing our boy is getting some help when he least expects it, who from that's gonna be the question here. Next chappy  is gonna be a flash back , i don't like them myself but to fully understand the present i have to do one ( big sigh!) lolz ty for the stars and the review girl and keep hanging ;) xo copycat

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/10 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 Scrubbed...

Well, I just want to cry after reading this. It is just so sad. All I can hope for is that Sam or Cas finds a supernatural cure for our boy. Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: hey you ty for reviewing again it realy means alot cos like I said before i'm kinda of a freelancer and i'm never sure if i can put down a story the way i feel it in my head. I know some of you are wondering how the hell our boy is gonna get out from this one....devious smile hahahahahaha maybe it's gonna be cas or maybe it's gonna be sam or just maybe...it's gonna be something totaly different who knows right? Hopefully I can take you on along this journey that's mainly about another kind of fight then our boys are use to and in the next chappie i'm gonna explaine how this all happend in the first place like a flashback, fair warning tho i never did a flashback before so that's got to be intresting lolz ty so much for reading this and liking it to xo copycat

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 17/07/10 04:43 AM · On: Mind sighs....

Gosh that's an interesting but bleak start...our boy's not in a good way is he?

Bird x

Oh and you might want to check out your off/of usage, it's slightly muddled in places

 

Author's Response: Thanks birdie, I hope this story is one your gonna like when i take this a bit further then most people are used to, the intention is to take the readers onto a journey of bravery and the fact that life sometimes bring you, but don't worry It's still gonna be a supernatural one hahahahaha. I know i messed up the off thingy and i'm gonna look into that when i place the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing this first one tho and pointing it out to me. hugs copycat.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/07/10 07:15 AM · On: Mind sighs....

Wow, very intense. Gripping first chapter. Poor Dean... let's see where you will take us. This should be interesting!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing this and there's more to come, hopefully it will take you where you want to be taken hahahahaha evil grin, thanks again it means alot, hugs copycat.