Reviews For DIVING SUIT
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/10 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lights out
Really glad you had both brothers POV's, it tells so much about them and in a very intense way. You give us a wonderful view on Dean and what's important for him in life, it's always Sam, and it also shows Dean is a true protector in every sense as he never could have killed this child. I hope this will be the key for saving him in the end. Loved the atmosphere you created and my heart skipped a beat at the end with the "Lights out...". Fantastic chapter!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/10/10 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4 Lights out
Yikes, that was quite disturbing coming from Dean's POV. Wonder what is up with the vampire and baby? I'm not liking the sound of Dean's neck being crushed. I hope he won't be paralyzed for life. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/10 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 Lady sunshine
What a flashback, Sam's nightmarish run through the dark towards his brother (and daylight and did I enjoy the images you created), this was fantastic and haunting all at once, a race against time and you could feel Sam's fear for Dean the whole time. Loved the title "Lady sunshine" and what it symbolized! Wonder if the Celtic sign will play an important role and the search for answers and a cure is what keeps Sam away from Dean. Grand, can't wait for Dean's POV now!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/10/10 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 Lady sunshine
Gulp, poor Sammy.I could feel his desperation here. Picturing Dean lying there all broken is so hard to take in! Yikes! Hmmmm...wondering what the Celtic symbol means? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 27/09/10 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 Scrubbed...
So intense it hurts, girl, you sure are back!!! Can't imagine what it feels like for Dean to be this helpless and what a beautifully worded but sad line this was - "Dean...felt like a soldier without a gun, without bullets that would hit the marks he was aiming for...but maybe the worst thing of all this was the fact that he even couldn't tell his Sammy that things weren't that bad...that he couldn't tell his brother that he was okay and ask him if he felt the same". I believe he only can bear it, survive it because of Sam and god, please tell me he will be back, he wouldn't leave Dean! Grand chapter!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/10 09:27 PM · On: Mind sighs....
Oops, sorry. I hadn't realized I already left a review for chapter 1! Sorry for the repeat review! I am enjoying reading your story!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/10 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 Scrubbed...
Well, I just want to cry after reading this. It is just so sad. All I can hope for is that Sam or Cas finds a supernatural cure for our boy. Looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 26/09/10 09:18 PM · On: Mind sighs....
Ouch! Poor Dean! What happened to him? Will he survive this type of debilitating injury? How is Sam holding on? One tiny little critique: the word "of" is spelled with just one "f". The word "off" is the opposite of on. Just I thought I'd let you know since I saw the "off" a couple of times. :) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 17/07/10 04:43 AM · On: Mind sighs....
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 15/07/10 05:02 PM · On: Mind sighs....
Yikes, poor Dean! I'm wondering if he would rather be dead than live like that. Will there be hope for him to get better and be able to move normally again? Where is Sam? I have one tiny, little critique: you kept spelling the word of as OFF (off is the opposite of on). Thought you might like to know. :) I'm biting my nails here to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 15/07/10 07:15 AM · On: Mind sighs....
Wow, very intense. Gripping first chapter. Poor Dean... let's see where you will take us. This should be interesting!
Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/10 04:53 AM · On: Mind sighs....
So wonderful you are back!!! Missed you so much and what a great start here, you could sense how terrible this is for Dean to be trapped in his own body, Dean who's always on the move. I only hope Sam is there with him but I'm worried about this line, "The face that was staring back at him and piercing his soul belonging to the one that called him bro. Little Sammy..."(beautifully worded btw). I doubt Dean could go on without him, can't wait to find out!
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