Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 29/09/10 11:23 PM · On: four days gone

I am freaking out for so many reasons about this story. i like it because everyone's view is there. Ben, Lisa, Dean even Castiel and they all come together because they affect each other's lives. I love that Cas though he is now 'the big bad angel' hasn't forgotten the human connection he forged with Dean.

When I watched the premiere it seemed that apple pie life like you tell in the story was just surface not that they weren't happy sometimes but i just don't see Dean as the type to forget everything and settle down.

It seemed to me that neither Dean nor Lisa was exactly sure of their feelings. But we good... And I like that you explore that here. {Freaked when the Impala was under the tarp and STAYED THERE!!!}

Great story!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/07/10 02:53 AM · On: month one

The strangest thing, at first, is how strange it isn't...  You started this chapter off with a bang.  I like that you put the situation out there so bluntly then explained it by comparing the discrepancy between normal life and the Winchester's lives.

...but they're real, somehow, realer than his picture of Sam is.  Great detail.  It always seems like those who have gone are fading from our memories no matter how hard we try to hold onto them.  They only apprear long enough to bring the torment of loss.

I like the perspectives from Dean, Lisa and Ben. They work together to give us a fuller picture of wgat's happening.  The language you use, the twisting, turning contradictions help to portray the fragility, confusion, and uncertainty in their lives now. 

More please!  :^)

Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for taking your time to review! It really makes me happy to see actual lines pointed out and what you think of them. I also like the specificity in your review. All in all it was very enjoyable to read. :)

I actually have chapter 3 (month two) already posted on this site, and I'll be posting chapter 4 (a place beyond time) very soon. Im starting to worry that chapter 3 is being recieved wrong. I know things do seem to change somewhat abruptly, but it will all make sense soon. 

Anyway, thank you again for the reviews, and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of this story. :)

Rose (Come2Me) 

 

Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/10 07:38 PM · On: month one

 o wow this is realy well written and so very real, it's almost like the reader can see inside Dean and his hurting soul, like you show us the inside from the outside...that's a gift you got there ! I love to see more of this so plz update sooon!!!! very well done ( takes a bow)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me! I'll be updating very soon, so keep checking back!

Rose (Come2Me)