Yaaay! Dean walked! I'm so proud of him! Glad you did a little damage control and helped Dean a bit!

This was a really sad chapter! Very deep and angst-filled and heart-breaking. It makes a lot of sense, though, an I'm amazed at how well you seem to channel the brothers' characters. Very good job!

I really liked the Cassie stalking part! Made it funny! Then came the emotionally clogged burger fest...sadness...so much sadness! Dean can't even eat a burger...my heart is broken...

Wow, this is very emotional. I really hope Dean recovers! I like how you gave consequences to all their hunting, though. I mean, really...they do get lots of head injuries...

Thanks for this new chapter - again worth the wait! Love how you involve Bobby to deal with both Dean's and Sam's problems. Dean sure is a stubborn and determined person so I am hoping he really went out for target practice...or...???? Can't wait for the next update!

Oooh I'm at the edge of my seat!  Where did my Dean go?  Can't wait for another update!  I like the explanation of how Bobby was able to help Dean with the speech part of his recovery...He stuttered when he was a kid...so simple yet so perfect!  Keep up the good work!

 

happy happy happy for thenew chappy!  Boy that Bobby is a sneaky one *grins*  but Dean's ego is definitley his biggest asset!  I hope to see that Dean reaches his goal and gets to go on this hunt!  As usually I am hooked and looking forward for more!  Can't wait to see how you develop this further!  Great Job!

Bobby tricked Dean to accept his help. I can understand that Sam can be hurted. If in the end Dean can't go hunting, that won't be nice to see. Great update neonchica, can't wait for more.

Good to have you back! The chapter was wonderful. Love the insight on Sam's and Dean's feelings - you have a very sensitive way of writing. Hope there is a light at the end of the tunnel for the boys. Can't wait for the next update!

Glad your back, was looking forward to the update.

yay, Bobby...!!! thanks, NC for bringing Bobby in as a relief pitcher....    Poor Sam needs a break........

glad  you  had  a good  time camping,  been waiting  for next chat, of Stroke of Bad Luck, i like the thought and understanding,you are putting into  Sam and Deans , relationship, keep the good work up.         regards  Di.

Amazing as usualy!  You are truly amazing at torturing out favorite brothers...I almost hate to say it but keep it up!

 Watchout in Algonquin park!  Steer clear of any bear traps!  AN if you see Dean telling I'd love a visit for my birthday on Sunday! 

Enjoy the vacation and getting back to basics with writing on paper.  Many times when I write by hand I write even better (of course that's my opnion!