Hi, hope you're still checking your finished storys for reviews. This one touched me more than I can say!! With Dean having this stroke and the boys struggling through it showes quite clear a stroke in many ways is like fighting an evil force!!

There were dear people in my family suffering strokes and it comes down the way you describe it, while the person is not changing inside, it's a continuing and painful struggle - mostly for dignity.

Glad Dean and Sam came out o.k. (this happy ending here still makes me smile) and what an extra goodie to involve the "real" supernatural hunt at the end.

Thanks again so much for this, great work; I'm really looking forward to read more of your storys.

I absolutely LOVE what you had them do to cassie. It was awesome! and the whole second stroke thing... work of genius! absolutely loved it and I'm glad that you gave Dean a complete recovery and I really like that you didn't put John in this story. Just brought home the fact he really didn't seem to care what was happening to his boys, like when Dean had the heartattack. Nicely done.

so far i agree with the assesment that cassie is a crappy crazy chic. and also, how the hell much do you hate dean? I mean first you do what you did in Hanging on by a thread and then you do what you did in phantasm, which still counts coz it was real for au dean and then you go and give him a stroke? seriously, how the hell much do you hate Dean? But as much as you beat the shit out of him, you always seem to make him okay in the end, even if it's just emotional and not physically, so i'm hoping that you can do both with this story, but i guess i'll just have to keep reading to find out.

Great ending to a great story Chica!  Loved the little con they played on Cassie!  I was totally giggling at the drool part...I so wouldn't have been able to keep a straight face...never can...I'd be a bad con lol...

I look forward to your next story!

Yeah!They got Cassie big time, lol. There're still lot of work for Dean to be top shape before the stroke but now he's fighting and he'll win that battle. Terrific ending to an amazing story. Thanks for the ride neonchica, I enjoyed it very much. I'm looking forward for your next story, Retribution, can't wait.

What a great chapter. Dean is back!!!After everything was said, there're no more anger between Dean and Sam, there're the best friends once again.And now, it's time for Cassie to pay, can't wait to know what's Dean plan. Amazing story neonchica. 

So glad Dean has completely recovered his speech...i really missed Mr Smartmouth....

Can't wait for Chapter 25 I do so LOVE Dean's plans..........

That's our dean.....determination conquers all.... good chapter, NC

LOL great chapter!  I was lost for a sec with the Cassie reference...it's been such a long road since her!  I totally LOVED Sam's rant it was great and so totally sam-like!

Can't wait to see what Dean has up his sleeve for that Cassie!

Keep up the good work!

 

nice chapter. i especially like the part about deans grin lighting up the room. looking forward to more.

The good news: Dean can move his hand. The bad news: Wrong ghost!!!Come on Sam, Dean and Bobby need your help. Terrific chapter neonchica, can't wait for more.

Great update! So happy to see a new chapter. Please keep them coming.... Happy to see them at any length!!! Hope you will be able to update soon though = can't wait to find out if the really pissed off spirit is Mrs. McCoy....