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Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/10 10:02 PM · On: Conclusion to Page Eight

Oh, poor Sam, ending up in the river both times. No wonder he came up sneezing - lol.
And Dean got overheard - ROFL! That was such a sweet moment - gave me a case of the warm and fuzzies too.
Loved the tissue sharing. And Dean's line about cliche's when Sam went out the window with Mothwoman - lol. And Sam asking if the wharf was moving - nice mirror to Dean's questions when they first arrived.
But oh, the poor Impala, covered in guano! Oh, dear.....hope Dean remembers to buy that car cover he's put on the list.
Nice one, Karen.
hugs
Jules

Author's Response:
Dear Jules:

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
You are always there for me!
It is really neat to know the parts that struck you.
Poor Impala, indeed. You do know, don't you -- it's all about the car! LOL.
Hugs back!
Karen

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/10 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yikes!
Hopefully the mothmen can't swim...
Well, I think it really was one of their hunts after all - lol.
But things didn't go so well for Sammy - bitten and then paralysed before being whisked away to become larvae food. Thank heavens Dean found him before he was turned into a Samburger.
But somehow I think the Mothmen aren't going to be happy that Dean stole their kids' happy meal.....that's of course providing they survive not just the fall into the river but the journey back to shore.
Hope Dean's had his Wheaties - he's going to need all his strength to tow his brother to safety.
Great start, Karen.
hugs
Jules

Author's Response:
Jules...you are too good to me!
Thank you so much -- in the most none-lame way I can say it! Thank you!
And to chris...for imagining and creating and sharing!
I really enjoy doing these simple early show/ hunt type stories. They are fun to dream about. You make it so much more fun with kind reviews
Chapter two/conclusion is up.
Hugs
Karen

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