Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hello Cass and welcome to UnGen and the wonderful world of Supernatural FanFic.

You've made an interesting start here and Rain is clearly a feisty girl. What a shock for the boys to have her turn up like that. 

Can I ask if you have a beta-reader? If you haven't I recommend you maybe find one as you have a lot of grammatical and spelling errors that could do with tidying up.

Good luck with your future writing 

Bird