Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 12/03/08 08:51 PM · On: Hell
OMG, I totally did not see that coming but it made so much sense! how terribly... sad. But still really good. very much enjoyed!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 03:46 AM · On: Hell
Not happy maybe but no 'death' warning so you have a plan right? You do have a plan?...TELL ME YOU HAVE A PLAN...please... But seriously, the idea of Sam's death being Dean's hell is probabaly the most believable of all hells incarnations for Dean and you did a great job of describing it.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 03:40 AM · On: He should have known
Liked this drabble/poem a lot. Beautifully written and a very powerful image...and I loved the idea that the they are both the same yet so very different. Moving on to chap 2...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:21 PM · On: Hell
Your mind is full of twists! You always show me the other side of the coin. Thanks!
Author's Response: Yes, my mind is rather twisted :D Thanks heaps again. I hope to write some more soon. Nutty (off the edge, but learning to fly)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 06:18 PM · On: He should have known
oooh! completely unexpected! Luuuv it!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :D Thanks heaps for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty (with a grumbly newborn in the background)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 12:56 PM · On: Hell
Gee Gumnut, that's bleak and brittle and heartbreaking and yeah - of course that's Dean hell isn't it, seeing Sam die is Dean's hell. Bravo very clever use of few words. Thanks for sharing Bev x
Author's Response: It just suddenly occurred to me that it would be rather ironic and hellish for that to happen to Dean. Poor guy. We are so evil to the boys in this fandom :D Thanks for reading and posting feedback...with my writing gone all rusty, I need all the help I can get :D Nutty (getting there)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 12:52 PM · On: He should have known
Hey Gumnut! That last line is such a punch to the gut, a real soul stealer! Well done! Bev xx
Author's Response: I love a good last line and I'm glad to know that this one worked for you :D Thanks heaps for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty (exercising my rusty writing muscles)
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/03/08 12:27 PM · On: Hell
i enjoyed reading that,but oh it was so heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Yes, it seems that a great deal of stuff in this fandom is heartbreaking. We really put the boys through the wringer. Thanks heaps for reading and posting feedback :D You feed my pen. Nutty (exercising her rusty writing muscles)
Reviewer: Quindim (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 10:09 PM · On: He should have known
:D Loooove the twist! Loved how subtle you were, and that you worked with an idea that is an actual possibility for the show...
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 10:52 AM · On: He should have known
cool but sad twist. It's so ironic that what they hate each other doing is exaclty what they do themselves... I loved your words 'After all, their only weakness was each other" - this weakness is also their drive - no wonder they go to extremes. well done!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 09:15 PM · On: He should have known
Oh.. liked this. love the idea that Sam would be forced to the 'darkside' in order to save Dean - K
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 02:30 AM · On: He should have known
very cool story!!! i really enjoyed it!! thanks for the read...bambers;)
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 08:00 AM · On: He should have known
Oh! I love this! But the day Sam reached into the darkness inside him to save his brother.
That day.
Dean realised exactly what he had done. You really made me think with this ficlet. Just those last lines alone held a ton of weight. Great work! -Sojourner
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 09:39 PM · On: He should have known
After all, their only weakness was each other.
Loved that line Gumnut, it is so true. Very perceptive. I've been telling you how clever you are. You're listening, right? Well done!
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 02:43 PM · On: He should have known
Great reading. We know Sam will do whatever it takes, they always do. Can't wait to see what they come up with to keep us all so truly inspired.
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