Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 08:35 PM · On: A House Of Cards A Mile High

Incredible!  It made me laugh and then stop to think.  I enjoyed every word!  "They're both silent for days, weeks, years;"  I love how you keep reminding us of the way time evolves in Hell.  In a normal conversation it would just be a few seconds or maybe even minutes between comments in a conversation. I love that bad-ass Michael the demon-kicking arch angel is the first one to break.  And all Lucifer's reminders that he was never too sane to begin with.  using biblical and world events to show Mikey's insanity was clever.  I hadn't thought of John only being a marginally better father to Adam than he was to Sam and Dean.  When we learned that he took Adam to a baseball game for his birthday, I hadn't thought about him leaving in the middle of it.  That's a little comforting but still sad.  God giving Lucifer and Michael a time out.  Hee!  And I loved the childish name-calling: Michaela and Luci.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was kind of nervous to post this story, but it's received quite a bit of positive reviews already. I'm glad it made you laugh.