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Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 07:35 AM · On: 八 (Eight)

Ahh Chickee shoes! The kid is a totally cutie-pie.

Bev xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 12:12 PM · On: 七 (Seven)

Argghhhh!!! Methinks Dean must've caught a flying tool after all...

I really adore that little kid too... I can just picture him - his voice and actions... his face and panic as everything is going to hell around him.

Just loving this story... cant wait for more- not to mention, trying to figure out what's up with this crazy poltergeist.

Tree

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/07/10 10:10 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

Hey hunny

Now see that's why I have a gardener...its dangerous! Ooo you hurt Dean...you're a good girl! haha 

bev x



Author's Response: ROFL - if my gardener was Dean... well... possibilities!  ROFL  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 05/07/10 05:44 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! T'EH EVIL CLIFFIE OF DOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!

*sullks*

but oh boy, 'encased in Winchester.' Yes please!

 

 



Author's Response: Who wouldn't want to be encased in Winchester? LOL ~~ Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 05/07/10 12:37 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

ouch! poor Dean. They really need Chui-wai's uncle to translate. I just love the suspense in this story, I think it's one of your best so far.

Author's Response: Ngaaw, really? Thanks! I luffs you, man! :)

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 08:16 PM · On: 七 (Seven)

Souxie,

Dean is hurt Chiu-Wai is not going to handle this well at all.  can't wait to read his reaction..........

Hopefully the little guy will give Sam a piece of his mind too.

I think we need the uncle to translate what this little guy is saying and fast.

Really like this story and the bond between Dean and Chiu Wai.

Renee



Author's Response: Woo-hoo! Thanks! Glad you're liking it and it's not falling flat. Your comments are much appreciated. :)

Reviewer: sweetondean (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 11:31 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

Eeeeeeeeek!!!! That shovel got him? Talk about leaving me in suspenders!! Have I mentioned that I am loving this story?

 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 10:02 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

Holy crap! I didn't see that happening! Poor Dean! I can't believe he got hit by either a spade or something else. Is it still in him? Will they need to get him to the hospital. Poor little Chiu-Wai, his Dean is hurt! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Heee, poor little Chiu-Wai has Dean to worry about now, too! Thanks for reading and reviewing! You're a star. :)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 10:01 AM · On: 七 (Seven)

Holy crap! I didn't see that happening! Poor Dean! I can't believe he got hit by either a spade or something else. Is it still in him? Will they need to get him to the hospital. Poor little Chiu-Wai, his Dean is hurt! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 09:55 AM · On: 六 (Six)

I just love how Chiu Wai has completely attached  himself to Dean. He definitely see something good in Dean. Dean does have a way with children. So, Chiu-Wai can hear dead people talking to him. I wonder what the ghost is telling him now? Is Sam in danger? Or Dean? I thought it as funny how Dean knew a little bit of Chinese!! Or all 3? Looking forward to reading chapter 7!

Reviewer: DeeUnNatural (Signed) · Date: 04/07/10 07:17 AM · On: 一 (One)

Always had trouble reading subtitles.

Reviewer: sweetondean (Signed) · Date: 28/06/10 12:31 AM · On: 六 (Six)

I love it. I'm really enjoying this story. Is it possible that your story is making me love Dean even more? The awwwwwww factor is off the richter! But now I am a little scared for Sammy. So looking forward to the next chapter (no pressure)!  Nice work :)


Author's Response: Heheheheheee! Glad you're liking it!!

Reviewer: sweetondean (Signed) · Date: 27/06/10 10:51 PM · On: 四 (Four)

i meant to say before, I love this chapter. I love the relationship between Mini Dude and Dean. Really gorgeous, I am so enjoying reading your story.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 27/06/10 02:16 PM · On: 六 (Six)

Nice update. I like Dean's growing comfort with the little guy and there's just a hint of Sam's jealousness!

Looking forward to more.

Bev xx



Author's Response: Even Dean cannot resist the power of Chiu-Wai for long, LOL. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 27/06/10 05:46 AM · On: 六 (Six)

So chicken means hooker in Hong Kong. Amazing the things i've learnt in this fandom! LOL

Chui-Wai hearing dead people is creepy. Sixth sense freaked me right out. Hope Sammy's going to be O.K. but it doesn't look good. Can't wait to see what happens.

 



Author's Response:

Heee! They do say you learn from your hobbies, LOL.

Would I harm Sam? Would I? Oh, ok, maybe a little... on occasion....

Thanks for your time and stars! 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/06/10 10:36 PM · On: 五 (Five)

I do believe Wai Jai is one smart cookie! I just love how Dean seems to understand the boys moods and knows how to handle them. I found it sweet that Sam seemed a bit jealous of the relationship between the two. It was quite interesting to see Sam surprised at what Dean was doing at age 5. Dean became a grownup way to early. I can see how Wai Jai would know about the poltergeist. He is very sensitive to feelings, moods, and visions. I hope Jerry will get better soon. So sad that he can't have the boy with him because he's grieving so terribly for his sister and doesn't want Wai Jai to pick up on it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Cor, that's a good review - always love to see people's reactions to what happens, and the characters themselves. :) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! Very much appreciated (and so are the stars). :)

Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 22/06/10 03:53 PM · On: 五 (Five)

Reviewed on FF so I'll give you your stars here!

Author's Response: Ngaw, thanks! You do look after me, don't you. :)

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/06/10 07:34 AM · On: 五 (Five)

Only Dean would think bad mullet rock is an essential item to teach his temporary ward!

Looking forward to further chapters.

bev x



Author's Response:

Bad mullet rock? *GASP* That's AC/DC, that is! SACRILEGE! (joking, lol).

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/06/10 07:25 AM · On: 四 (Four)

I'm loving the bond they are forming. There is always something endering about an adult cradling a child but especially in difficult circumstances like these. Youre voicing Dean's prickly discomfort really well and the kid is cute as a bug.

Was the Star Wars reference deliberate? ("Well laugh it up, Fuzzball...") Nicely placed!

Bev x



Author's Response:

Oh yeah - got to love Star Wars!! And Sam is Chewie, right? ROFL

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Feedback on chapter is always priceless. :) 

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/06/10 07:15 AM · On: 三 (Three)

Oh cruel...kill the baby's mummy AND daddy? You'll be salting and burning Bambi next! heehee.

bev x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/06/10 06:55 AM · On: 二 (Two)

Liking this. It's frustrating because I wanna know what the kid's thinking but compelling bacause of that ambiguity

Reading on!

 

bev x

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/10 03:12 PM · On: 五 (Five)

Souxie,

love the connection between Dean and Chiu-Lai  the bonding is excellent.  knew that Dean would be the one he would bond with.  Dean might act all tough but deep down he is the biggest softy especially when it comes to children.

Like how he is getting frustrated when Sam and Dean don't understand him and vice versa.

great story can't wait to read more.

Renee



Author's Response: Hee! Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far! :)

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 20/06/10 03:47 AM · On: 五 (Five)

love uncle Dihn teaching Chiu-Wai ACDC, can just see him doing that and knowing just how to comfort him while Sam stood by shocked. You do an absolutely brilliant job of characterization. I can always visualise your stories so easily. As for Chiu-Wai knowing about the poltergeist, I suppose it's hard to keep a secret from a psychic. Great job as always, can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response: Ngaw, thanks! What else would Dean teach him? LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing - and the stars! Heee!

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 02:17 PM · On: 四 (Four)

oh man the scene with Chiu-Wai and Dean asleep in bed together was priceless...cool idea for a story...good job


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It's always great to know how readers react. :)

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 12:14 PM · On: 四 (Four)

This is where I say AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

Just love the heart-to-heart between Dean and the little boy... and you had to know he was gonna confess to the little guy how he'd felt losing his mom. I knew there'd be a connection there...

I'm still wondering what that kid is seeing- how he's connected to this poltergeist and for that matter- wth is up with that freaky thing. I just know there's gotta be more whumpage in store... cant wait!!!

Tree



Author's Response: There's always room for more whumpage! Hee! Glad you like it so far....

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