This was a great story!  The end was kind of sad with John being gone.  I thought it was very interesting, the idea of constructing a story around being sick on the same road twice in 15 years.  Way to be creative! 

Ewwww!  Totally gross!  When Sam touched Dean with his slimy puke hand... *gag*  I have to stop thinking about it or I'll be vomiting.

He mumbled beneath his breath hoping his dad wouldn't hear it, but secretly wishing he would.  Just like a kid.  They have to tempt the wrath of their parent. 

Author's Response:

heya!

ahhaha, oh man... how many times have a puked on the same road... well... not exactly puked but I was this close to telling my dad to stop the car! :))))

yeah... I wanted to make the end like that... and the story; one part with them as kids, life being semi ok...and the next part with them being adults and seeing how much life has changed (John being gone, but the road is still there)

I love to experiment with different styles and story ideas and writing and stuff.... idk why , but I think that if you only write  stories in one style , the readers might get bored of it... hell, I will get bored of it... that is why I experiment! :)

ROFL! youas a mom, you've never held your kid up and got puke all over?? :) *looks at you* and don't lie to me!:)))

yeah... ahahha.. kids... absolutely right! :)

thank youuuuuu!!!

*hugs you*

S.