Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 24

Good ending.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 23

wow!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 22

Lots happening here.  Can't wait to find out exactly what's happening.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 21

Good chapter!  I like the action.  I can't wait to find out what's happening.

Reviewer: sammarinade (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 24

I loved the story, and the ending fit well enough for my liking, I don't know about anyone else, but it fit nicely.  I really enjoyed the whole story, thanks for such a great read!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot...that makes me really happy that you liked the ending AND the story!!!

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 23

OMG that was sooo good!! keep writing i can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 23

Great update!!!!!!  But your evil with the cliffie!!!!!  Eagerly awaiting update.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh no!  Not a cliffhanger!  Ugh!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

I thought I'd missed something important at first. 

Sam in a Baywatch speedo---now that's entertainment!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

Lots of funny lines in this chapter---kind of breaks up the tension a little bit.  'Why can't I ever have a Plan B," and Sam disagreeing, on Dean's behalf, with the demon when he says Sam isn't a pain in the ass are my favorites!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 17

Geez, those visions just don't give enough warning!

Harry Potter---good line!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 16

Another short chapter, but you punched it up with mystery.  So what is Jay's secret?  Hmmm?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 15

The Impala sounds like the sherriff's car in Smoky and the Bandit.  What a picture!

Missouri doesn't take any sass.  I love her!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 14

LOL!  There's no place like home!

Oh good---Dean to the rescue!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 13

Short, but sweet.  I'm curious to see why Sam didn't get his powers back.  And how did the demon know he didn't when he saw the blue light enter Sam.  I'll bet if I keep reading I'll get answers.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 12

Good action.  I like the visions!  They seem to be a great warning.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 11

Yeah, why didn't Sam think of summoning Dean?  Silly boy. 

You might want to have a friend or a beta look over your chapters before you post them.  There are a few glitches, nothing serious, just need a little polishing.  :-)  I'd be happy to help out.

Who?!  A great cliffhanger!  Who is it?  I guess I'll have to read, duh!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awww, poor Dean.  What a sad nightmare.

Yay!  Sam brought Dean back.  Chalk one up for dumb luck!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yay Missouri!  Gotta love her!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 8

Good action, fast pace---good job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

Good chapter.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

It's so cool that Dean has visions of himself, but it's Sam.  and the parting line was perfect!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great!  I love mystery and a little bit of confusion mingled with hints!  The section with Dean's thoughts is really good!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter!  I always enjoy Dean's ailments.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL!  Love the idk...bff Jill!!  My kids go around the house saying that as a joke.  Glad to see its universal!

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