Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/06/10 09:12 PM · On: Give Not Receive
Gripping chapter. I don't like DEan's idea but he would anything to save Lisa and got rid of Meg once and for all. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks. What can go wrong? lol How you enjoy the rest, Mary x
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 21/06/10 04:24 PM · On: Give Not Receive
Sounds like Dean knows all Sam's secrets now..or does he? Kinda scary what you have in mind for Dean..not sure how Sam's gonna handle this one. Can't wait to find out. Look forward to your next.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Hmm? Maybe not all of them! Thanks for the review, Mary x
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 21/06/10 04:08 PM · On: Devil You Know
Loved how Sam just turned around at Dean's call without even an explanation..they still have each others backs even though they been apart awhile, and it's about time they took care of Meg. Maybe Sam can do his whole demon killing thing on her..would love that.
Poor Dean..wanting to get rid of Meg, but not hurt Lisa. I'm anxious to see how you get him out of this one..Look forward to the next.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah Sam is going back to help his brother, he doesn't need to know why just that he needs him. Hope you enjoy the rest, Mary x
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/06/10 09:42 PM · On: Devil You Know
Dean is tortured by Meg, hope he'll hold on until Sam's arrival. Terrific story so far Mary, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks That he is and holding on for Sam is the point, he's waiting for his brother's help. Mary xx
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 19/06/10 08:11 PM · On: Devil You Know
This is terrific, I can't wait to read more of Dean being tortured or will it be Sam to the rescue?
Author's Response: Thanks I little light on the Dean torture but Sammy is on his way! Mary x
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 19/06/10 07:24 PM · On: Devil You Know
WEEEE! He's actually WAITING for SAM to come RESCUE him with his POWERS! Notice how I Caps locked all the really important words there? Holy shit this story has me gasping for air. You're doing a really really REALLY fantasmorgasmic job at capturing all their voices! You've got Dean down, Rufus, Sam, Bobby, Meg. Meg's probably the one you've just now impressed me most with. You're scary good at nailing her voice. I can almost smell the smugness oozing outta her pores. Fuckin' A! Bring on another one, I'm ready and waiting. If it'll help, imagine me hopping and bouncing up and down while I wait for another update. Will it help, cause I'll do it too!? There's that 'desperate' thing I mentioned last time. Or was it the time before last?... It's all so hazy... :( It's because I've got nothing more to read... You're depriving me of my sanity :( So pleeeeeaaase hurry. Cheers :P
Author's Response: You know I was having a crap day and this arrived and made my weekend! Fantsmorgasmic might be my new fav word in the whole world. Glad you liked the voices. Lots of dialogue in this one and it's driving me crazy trying to keep it in character! So that you can keep the little sanity you have left, here's ch10! Mary xx
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 19/06/10 07:06 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
*chants Meg Meg Meg* I'm actually vibrating with exitement. Small vibrations, but good vibrations never the same. That was some potent shit *cough*. Exellent talk between Rufus and Dean. Scary good.
Author's Response: Meg, Meg, Meg!!! Good vibrations - cue for a song?? Glad you liked the talk! Mary xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 09:09 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
That was a terrific chapter, it's getting very captivating. So something is after Dean, Lisa and Ben, I think I might know who is the demon. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks Yup something is after Dean and I think you might know who! lol Mary xx
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/06/10 07:46 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
Gulp, say it aint so! Is it Meg? She does seem to have an unhealthy fascination with Dean since she was sent to hell. Lordy, I hope Ben and Lisa are safe. You really made me care about their characters. Seems like Dean is going to need Sam's help keeping his family safe. I'm a bit miffed at Rufus because he has put Dean and his family in danger. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey It's Meg! Glad you care about the characters, that's a big battle with some stories. Rufus will come good! Mary xx
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/06/10 06:54 PM · On: Brother
I really like Lisa's pragmatic view of life in general. She is determined to live a normal life without the supernatural invading it. Dean is going back to taking care of Sam (that didn't take long). I guess that is who Dean is. I loved reading the interactions of Ben with the Winchester brothers. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Glad you are liking this. Lisa is a take life as you find it in this story. Dean will always need to take care of Sam, you're right. Thanks, Mary xx
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 16/06/10 01:58 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
This is a very good story. One thing.. no one hurts Ben or Lisa.. right? right?!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nope, not seriously anyway! :) Mary xx
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/10 12:31 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
Poor Dean..trying to stay out of the hunt, but it just keeps pulling him back in..and Sammy can still kill demons with his mind..nice twist, but I still think there's more to his story than that.
Can't wait to find out. I was glad to see your next chapter..now I'm ready for more.
You were worried because this chapter wouldn't "play nice", but don't worry your doing a great job.
I look forward to the next. Let's hope Dean makes it in time to protect Lisa and Ben.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Hey Yup, can't escape what you are sometimes not matter how much you'd like to. I'm enjoying writing this story, glad you like it too! Mary xx
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 14/06/10 07:21 PM · On: Brother
I was thinking there was more to Sam's story and now after reading this chapter I'm sure of it. Not sure what you got planned, but I can't wait to find out. Of course, after your words at the beginning of the chapter, I'm not sure how much I will like it. LOL
So sad at the end. It broke my heart that Sam was so broken, but I'm glad Dean was there for him..in his normal big brother way. I may be a Sam girl, but Dean has a place in my heart as well.
I'm still hooked..Look forward to you next.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks Jane Sam and Dean are both a little broken in this one. More Sam and Dean to come but a little diversion in the middle! Mary xx
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 14/06/10 06:12 PM · On: Feels Like Starting Over
Glad the boys are talking again..but still not to sure about Lisa. She knows..obviously..what Sam went through, so it just don't sit well with me that she would tell him that about being left in Hell.
I'm anxious to see where your headed. I'm thinking there's more to this story than Sam just not wanting to upset Dean's "apple pie life" by telling him he was back.
Look forward to the next and where the boys are headed.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks The story is about to take a little turn for the worst for the boys!. :) Mary xx
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/10 05:01 AM · On: Brother
Ooh, there's more to it....and suddenly I'm scared of what you have planned in that evil little brain of yours. I had a feeling that Sam not wanting to shatter Dean's newfound life was part of the reason why he didn't let Dean know he was back, but there had to be something more. Hmm, still not sure of Lisa - lol. She's playing nicey-nicey at the moment, but I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. Have a feeling a flipping hammer is about to drop on the boys, though.... Is it time to cue scary music yet? Jules
Author's Response: Thanks Scared of what I'll do. I like that! lol Sam's hiding something, nothing too major, just something that he knows won't please his brother and maybe a little something else. Lisa is trying to be nice, honest! Drop a hammer on the boys, funny you should think that......:) Mary xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/06/10 09:13 PM · On: Brother
Awww...That was awesome, loved the brotherly moments. Mary, what're you going to do to Dean and Sam and think that we're going to hate you, you got me very intrigued here. Where the next chapter, I can't wait for it.
Author's Response: Thanks, From brotherly moments to some more usual fare now! Enjoy Mary xx
Reviewer: Deans Addiction (Signed) · Date: 13/06/10 06:59 AM · On: Brother
**TEAR** "I've got your back."
Its so sweet. I'm suddenly very nervous at what you have planned for the upcoming chapters. Whilst broken Dean always makes for a good read, the poor guy is only human after all. - Please be kind! :) Enjoying the story though - keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hey Thanks. I wont break him too much I promise! Mary x
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/06/10 10:01 AM · On: Brother
Great Chapter, especially the end. Really curious about what Sam is hiding though so update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll tell you soon, promise! Mary xx
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/06/10 07:09 PM · On: Feels Like Starting Over
Thanks to Lisa Dean and Sam finally talked and DEan invited Sam to stay, it's a start. I'm so loving this story, what's going to happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: She is trying not to get in the middle but she is in an awkward place. Dean wants his brother safe and to Dean that is with him. Glad you like this, Mary xx
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 10:10 PM · On: Feels Like Starting Over
Lisa's a bitch! Seriously...she'd make Sam wish he was still in hell? If I were Sam, somehow I wouldn't be looking forward to spending any more time in her company, thank you very much. Geez, things aren't great - and we still don't know exactly why Sam didn't tell his brother he was back. Hopefully Sam will get a chance to explain. Preferably before Lisa starts in on him again. What a hag, a bag and a nag. Huh - wonder if Lisa's going to end up regretting the no salt, no weapons rule....or whether Dean will... Jules
Author's Response: Hey Jules She was a little OTT with the boy but she is worried about Dean and it's showing. She will redeem herself slight in the next few chapters! Will Lisa regret the no salt rule? Hmmm....... :) Mary xx
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 01:11 PM · On: Feels Like Starting Over
I really enjoyed this chapter. Loved how Lisa let Sam know in no uncertain terms that she was not going to tolerate Sam hurting Dean again. Looks like Dean is going to forgive Sam (again). Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked. Lisa is really on Dean's side. I think Dean like you say, Dean will always forgive his brother, because that is just who he is. Mary xx
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 05/06/10 01:00 PM · On: Dream A Little Dream
Great chapter..Lisa better be nice to Sammy. That boy has been through enough, and (my opinion) she's an outsider and doesn't know the boys relationship. She did think she wanted to throw him back in the pit. Not liking that much. Can you tell I'm a Sam girl? LOL You got me on the edge of my seat..look forward to the next..can't wait for some mending to happen. Make it soon, please!!
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Lisa is just worried about Dean and she might come on a little strong at the moment but she will get a chance to redeem that. And yeah, I can tell you are a Sam girl - BIG Dean girl here but I love Sammy too! Hope you like where this goes. Surprise in ch8! Mary xx
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 01:21 PM · On: Dream A Little Dream
Ahhh...I thought it seemed familiar. Lisa really knows how to take care of Dean. I'm glad that Dean is able to open up to Lisa. Dean seems so fragile here, though, like it wouldn't take much for him to crack. I can't wait to read the conversation between Lisa and Sam! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: She does and she cares about him for all the right reasons. Hope you like the rest. Mary x
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 01:12 PM · On: Coming Around Again
Holy crap! That was one intense stand off. I can absolutely understand Dean's point of view here. I'm still reeling that Sam let Dean think he was in hell for 4 months knowing what Dean knows of hell. I guess Dean is lucky he didn't go into hell looking for Sam because Sam would have not been there. Ouch for Dean bringing up Ruby, but I can see his frustrations here with Sam. Sam's needs to give Dean some space and not try to force his apologies on Dean. Dean will eventually forgive Sam because that is what Dean always does. I really like your Lisa here. She is really good for Dean. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Dean is hurt by his brother's actions, it's something he wouldn't have done but Sam had his reasons. As for Sam giving Dean space, you are spot on, he will try to do this, might not work though! Glad you like Lisa! Mary xx
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 01/06/10 02:16 PM · On: Coming Around Again
Ok, had to read chapters 3 and 4 together because your so quick that I didn't get to 3 before 4 was posted..hope you keep this up. LOL
You got me worried about the boys now..I just hope my fears are just that..fears! Harsh words at the end, but Dean's really hurt..with just cause, but Dean tends to strike out when he's hurt and Sam seems to always get the brunt of it. They wouldn't hurt each other so much if they didn't love each other so much. That came through loud and clear, and loved how Dean..even though he's angry..still took a minute to look his baby brother over and make sure he was alright. So looking forward to your next chapter..soon I hope.
Take care,
Jane
Author's Response: Hey This story wants out! Wish my others were as forcoming! They always channel their feeling via anger don't they. Silly boys! Next chapter is Dean and Lisa and then I start to get the boys back on track! Mary xx
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