Oh, how terribly sad. I could easily see the light turning off and on while Dean was laying there just heartbroken about Sam's leaving. I imagine this brought back memories and feelings of Sam's earlier runaway adventure when he took off for two weeks and left Dean holding the bag.  Thanks for the great little one-shot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment, it had made me very happy!

Oh my gosh, that was so intense. I love the way you timed his thoughts by the lamp. You could so go somewhere with this-like make it into a story. I really felt like I was there with Dean in the motel room and I really wanted to just reach and give him a hug. Great job!!! :)

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you :) You're also the first person that has picked up the lamp/thoughts timing, which I'm glad you did! I'm not sure about a story, because school leaves me no time, but I'd really like to actually make it into one. I have 2 on the go now, so I'll make this my next project, I think. Thanks for the idea! I want to give Dean a hug, too :( 

 

Thanks for your kind words!