Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story.

I loved how you wrote the brothers.  We also got a hurt Dean, worried Sam and a big brother who was not out of practice and knew Sam was lying about the hunt.  But Dean also trusted his little brother to finish it, he just wanted to be there to watch Sam's back. Though I can't imagine Dean trying to get the tape off his ribs, that is going to hurt.

When the Impala stopped, I wondered if Dean wasn't behind it.  That was very good.

I enjoyed reading your story. 

Thanks for sharing it with us. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the R&R.

Phoebe

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/10 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked this story a lot.   I thought you got the boys just right with Sam thinking Dean didn't think he could do it, and Dean just wanting to be there to back Sam up but believing in his brother ... and Dean's own ability to teach Sam how to shoot the rifle.  :p

Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review.

Phoebe

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 09/05/10 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aww, I loved this!  What a great brotherly moment!  I'm missing that this season! 

Author's Response:

Thanks hon!  One day I'll get brave and write another S4 fic or a S5 fic. 

Phoebe

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 08/05/10 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved the Hurt big brother Dean!The duct tape/cab driver imagery .....very funny!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much - I'm very glad you liked it.

Phoebe

You must login (register) to review.