Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wonderful ending! the trip down memory lane while Dean explains to Sam how the game began was so cute! So many things start out innocently for the Winchesters. Too bad it doesn't get to stay that way.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 9
An interesting death for the Golem. " Pressing his weary body against the comforting familiarity of the leather seats, Sam pushed away the evening's horrors. Instead he breathed deeply of all that was his home and his family, the leather of the seats, the not unpleasant scent of coffee and his brother's familiar aftershave." That beautifully portrays Sam's feelings about the car and his brother. So sweet!
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love a story with plenty of action and humor, where I can "hear" the boys' voices and "see" their actions playing out - all the requirements needed for a good Winchester story. Excellent!
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love a story with plenty of action and humor, where I can "hear" the boys' voices and "see" their actions playing out - all the requirements needed for a good Winchester story. Excellent!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
Does anyone think it's queer that Ron's mom has no problem with him writing spells? Either she's off her nut or she's dabbled before, too. Pretty crazy character. We think she's June Cleaver and she is actually Samantha Stevens.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
Maybe the Winchesters have dumb luck besides their ususal bad luck. that golem is a hard one to beat!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 6
If you want a good laugh, hang with a stoner. This chapter is a riot! Especially love Dean's predicament at the bottom of the basement.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
The clerk is high and he calls someone else Stoner Paul. Hilarious! I love all the little quirks you put in your characters to make them interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed these guys as I had a blast making them up... watched a lot of 'stoner' tv to get them just right..lol - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I love how things are coming together in this small world. Former soap star---ha! I wonder who that would be? Geez, these boys have ties to everything! Kind of stupid to rob your own convenience store. But then these boys don't seem to be the valedictorians of their class.
Author's Response: Lets admit it Shannon, these boys wouldn't be nearly as much fun if they were smart..lol. So glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see how Sam's revenge unfolds. He'll probably make Dean so jumpy that he won't need to actually do anything.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
Good job! I can't believe this is a monster made of mud---just like the 40's monster flicks. Cool! Is Geno's a real place or did you make it up? I'm hungry for a midnight snack now.
Author's Response: Is Geno's a real place Shannon? Man the folks of Philly would hunt you down if they heard you ask that..lol. It is a real place and the list of famous people that have eaten cheesesteaks there is longer than my arm....lol. So glad you liked my mud man, thanks as always - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love this chapter! It's hilarious! I thought Ed and Harry were losers---at least they don't live in their mom's basement. "Like supervisor at Blockbuster isn't a real job"---it's soooo funny! Leave it to Dean to think of food first.
Author's Response: Hey Shannon, so great to see someone reading this one, and I hope you continue to enjoy. It's always been a fav, as it's funny and set in my backyard..lol. Enjoy - K
Reviewer: poohbear1234 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great story, I enjoyed reading this one.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. It's always wonderful to hear a story worked - Glad you enjoyed and Thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 10
great job with this last one K ! Nice discussion between the brothers. And two clouds of steam that left me a little dreamy... So, another project coming soon ? Return to the Guardian or something new ? Because we're very demanding people !
Author's Response: Awww... Fredo, glad you ejoyed. I'm not sure what's next. For today it's a list of chores, I've been putting off and to catch up on my reading. Guardian should be next, we'll see - K
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome story! I'm glad you explained why Sammy was never able to get close to Dean without him noticing. It made for nice backstory!
Author's Response: Thanks Sammygirl, it means a lot to hear you enjoyed, wasn't sure if it was even worth posting that last chap. Thanks again for the review - K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
kelly, what is this ??!! better half reading over your shoulder!! TWO showers and all we get are clouds of steam...then Dean has abs ..NO description ??!! again Dean in jeans ONLY ...NO description.......seriously though, a reaaallyyyyyy good story.....thanks so very much!!
Author's Response: Ahh, sorry Jude I'll have to bone up on my romance lingo, should his abs have glistened?? thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 10
You are my hero - three chapters in one day???? Soooo much to love here. Is the nursing home a shout out to the VS? Thank you soooo much for the image of Dean emerging from the steamy shower in only his jeans.... (don't feel he always needs the jeans...) And finally, the image of Sam curled up in the flower pot. We had a cat who hid in the hollow leg of my Dad's pool table once when we were visiting and we spent about 2 hours trying to find him. I didn't even know the damn legs were hollow - it was just dumb luck that I ran my hand over it and the cat chirped when I did... Sooo felt Dean's panic. Awesome story - thanks for the ride.
Author's Response: Iam, thanks for giving my story the time of day, I've got three kids myself, I have seen all the places kids can hide. Here's me waiting patiently for your next updat ;) K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
Love how Dean and Sam work seamlessly together to defeat Frank. I have to admit, part of me will miss Frank.... I'm curious as to what might be coming up in the next chapter - Don't get me wrong I'm thrilled there's more, but it seems that you've tied up the loose endings...? So now I'm worried about what I'm missing - God, I hope I'm not going to look totally stunned... ;)
Author's Response: Just wrapping up a few loose ends, Iam, Sam never did manage to sneak up on Dean - Anyway hope to post tomorrow - Thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
kelly...awesome ...neither one of them nearly hospital bound again...nice for a change....enjoyed it a bunch.......did the laundry get done ???
Author's Response: Thanks Jude, my laundry woes are never ending. I've gotten it down though, put in a load, write, dry, write, fold, write. At least this way I can manage to keep the pile from swallowing the house- K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
so almost done huh ? I know that stretching endlessly a story is not good, but from this one i'd have taken(god english grammary is my nightmare) a few more doses. Gonna savour the last one...
Author's Response: Fredo, you're english is wonderful, especially when it's congratulating me on a well done story - LOL Hope to have the last tomorrow. As always thanks for reading.- K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome! I figured it out just moments before the golem grabbed Dennis, but -sweet! Love them trying to cover over Mom. Can't wait to find out what Dean's plan is.....
Author's Response: I spent many years evading Mom's questions, glad to see it's now coming in handy. Though I gotta admint my Mom was a lot scarier -LOL Thanks as always for the read and review - K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/05/07 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
and on this possibly positive note...i will haed to bed......hope Dean can force feed that to Frank without getting too muddy....of course then you could entertain us with a 'shower' scene, kelly.... thought for a moment the head would wind up in the washer ......tell your family we all said thanks for sharing you with us.........
Author's Response: OHHHH, shower scene, there's a thought, if I add one in I'll dedicate it to you Jude-LOL. There you go, that's how I'll destroy the golem, shove him in the washer and press start. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. It makes my day - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
being smashed with a bat for waiking up in Dean's arms... could be worth it !!! Longer is good K, this story's so cool. I love it when Dean has a plan !
Author's Response: I'd stand in line to get whacked first Fredo - LOL Glad you're liking the story and I know I've got at least one more chapter (maybe two, this golem's been a bit hard to kill off) - K
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, I can see why Sam was pissed. These guys are so not worth saving. Loved Paul's Mom, the only one with a brain :) well sort of!! Don't think taking off the head will work, but may give them a chance to put the sheepskin in it's mouth, if they can find it. Only these losers would lose the incantation. Funny as ever, Jenny
Author's Response: Glad you're diggin it Jenny. Thanks as always for the kind review. - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
maybe... Sceptical grimace here ! I'd say that not much things can live beheaded, but heck, we're here in Dean and Sam's little world of weirdness so... And thanks for your kind words for us, your complete conquered admirers ! Said with plain modesty, I'm one hystericaly funny person, i'm just sometimes worried that my approximative english skills don't make it obvious !
Author's Response: No worries Fredo, we get you and we love you. You're english is terrific and I really do appreciate your faithful reviews - K
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