Reviewer: leslie92708 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/11 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
ooohhhh! spooky!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/10 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wonder if that bird was a hag in disguise, trying to wipe out the tracks so that Sam couldn't find his brother. Thank heavens he did, though - Dean wouldn't have lasted long out there with no trews on. Hopefully now that Sam's seen the bruises, he'll believe Dean that the hags aren't gone. But with no weapons to speak of, how the hell are they going to defeat the creatures? Hmm......the plot, like the storm, thickens... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/10 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, gosh.....the hags lured Dean outside - he was their original target all along. Oh, this is so not good. He's only in his fol-de-rol's - he'll freeze his bum off out there! Hopefully Sam can find his tracks before the hag-induced storm obliterates them. *chews nails worriedly*..... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/10 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awesome description of the snow, the horrible conditions of the storm and the disorientation Dean was feeling. Loved Sam's Daddy Winchester voice and Dean instinctively obeying, even though his gloves blew away. Thank heavens they finally made it to the cabin, but it's not going to be over for them by a long shot, I feel. Dean was right - he could hear the hags, and the storm is still raging. Jules
Reviewer: moncitymom1 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/10 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Like where your story is going...when you going to update? It's been awhile.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 20/06/10 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ooooh, the hags aren't gone.....*cue scary music*.... I have to confess, I really love snow stories. Probably because I've seen precious little of the stuff in my lifetime, and it fascinates the hell out of me. Yeah, I know, I'm strange, and I can hear the groans of protest from people who live with the stuff all winter all the way down here - lol. But seriously, where I live is subtropical - palm trees and sun, and you can swim all year round if you want to. So snow is rather exotic to me. I've only seen it three - perhaps four - times in my life, and each time was about 17 to 20 hours drive away from where I live. So I'm completely on board with the snow stuff - bring it on! LOL. Hmm, Dean starting a walk in a supernaturally generated storm with a bad injury - this bodes well...not. Had to have a chuckle at his "Worst carnival ride ever" line, though. That was so Dean. And poor Sam peeling his fingers one at a time from the steering wheel, surviving the spin and crash only to dread his brother's reaction - lol. Thankfully - figuratively speaking - Dean was in too much pain to really go to town about the damage to his baby. Loved the door blowing shut just after he upchucked though - that was classic. Great start, Ness - and can I say that it's awesome to see you back writing a full story. I've missed you. hugs Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
ooooh! So did he really go voluntarily or was he dragged? Held down and choked? Kind of hard for Sam to deny the hags are dead when his brother has new bruises in three places on his body. Or it could be something totally different impersonating the hags. You do like to surprise us with scenarios we would never have thought of. Great chapter! My only complaint is it's too short. More please. :)
Author's Response: I hope I'm doing a decent job with the suspense. Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 4
Sam really needs to start believing Dean that the Winter Hags aren't dead, before dean ends up a casualty. Great chapter more soon.
Author's Response: So happy you're still enjoying it. Thanks for leaving a review and some pretty stars.
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 17/06/10 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
OMG those hags have got a lot to answer for. Sam is not gonna be a happy snow bunny after this? Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Are you sure you're enjoying it though? You only gave it 2 1/2 stars--am I doing something wrong?
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh.... thats just NOT right... leaving it there like that! I was sooo excited to come back home and see another chapter up and you leave me with such an awful cliffie.... mean mean woman!!! Especially after you give me stripped down Dean too.... now he's turned into a nearly-naked popsicle???? Update soon!!! Tree
Author's Response: haha Mean, mean woman. Yep. Glad you're enjoying it though.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/05/10 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 3
Strong, stoic hunter or not, it hurt. Hee! Hee! I can see the pouty little boy look on Dean's face. "He is lost. Never to be found. Lost and so very, very alone without his brother. Freezing. Slowly freezing. To death." What an evil trick. They very successfully lured Dean out into the blizzard. It was him they were prophesying would die alone slowly without his brother. Intriguing chapter! I can't wait for more. "He is lost. Never to be found. Lost and so very, very alone without his brother. Freezing. Slowly freezing. To death."
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/05/10 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 2
This chapter takes me back about five months to January. Brrrr! I can feel that icy wind ablown'. I felt like I was there and very frustrated with Dean's impromptu strip-tease. (Never thought I'd say that!) Hmmm... interesting that only Dean can hear the hags. So my guess is that you're playing mind games with me. Either the hags really are still alive and Sam can't hear them, or they're dead and you just want me to believe they're alive. Or... can the Cailleacha hags be ghosts once killed?
Author's Response: LOL Keeping you guessing a bit, huh? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/05/10 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fantastic start! The Winchesters started out in the frying pan and it didn't take them long to drive into the fire. what?! The Cailleacha are still alive? Dirty trick!
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 27/05/10 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 3
What have the hags done with Dean? And poor Sam comes back into the cabin to find him gone, oh dear. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks.
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/05/10 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I like these winter hags. What nasty creatures!!!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/05/10 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, Dean's in bad shape! I hope there's something for a fire in that cabin!
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/05/10 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
*shudder* I hate snow. It does, however, make a great start to a story!
Author's Response: Thanks for coming along for the ride. :-)
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 26/05/10 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
Fantastic chapter, where have the winter hags taken Dean? how is Sam going to find him? More soon please. Can't wait. Thanks...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Maureen. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
I just found this and I'm enjoying it. Love me some hurt Dean, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you like it so far.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/05/10 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey Ness. Get 'em indoors hun and warm them up...poor boys! Write somemore... bev x
Author's Response: Thanks, Bev.
Reviewer: JennyF (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm hooked on this one - from the deliciously hurt Dean, to Sam pulling out the John voice, the vague confusion as Dean just gets worse and the strength Sam is going to have to pull out to get them through this. Waiting for part three :)
Author's Response: Very happy to hear you're enjoying the read. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved the first two chapters and can't wait to read more, poor Dean he's already in a bad way, how much worse can it get. Soon Please, Thanks...
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
I thought this was a fine chapter. I like the premise and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Nothing wrong with this honey, it made me feel cold and I'm sitting in a nice, warm room with a mug of coffee! Poor Dean is really struggling here but at least they've found shelter. That's a good thing right? Right? More when you can, Mary xx
Author's Response: So happy you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/10 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
You had me with the HurtDean.... Dammit- where's more... I NEEEEED more.... write faster or I'll have to sick those Cailleacha hag's on you... so love the word 'hag'. Ok- seriously- love the start of this... nothing like whump, desperate situations and a strong Sammy to take care of an injured Dean... one of my favorite scenarios... Bring it on! Tree
Author's Response: hehe Usually you can count on me to put some hurt!Dean in just about everything I write. It's like crack to me. lol Thank you for reading and leaving a review. I'm really happy to hear you've liked it so far.
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