Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 04:23 PM · On: Agony

Marvelous!  Wanting to remember things like the sun and not remember what you loved because the loss is so devastating---it really hit me.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know it's not the usual fanfare but it came to me. Hell was a lot like a tortuous prison for Dean so i figured that he'd have lots to work through.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 04:18 PM · On: It's the little things...

I agree, it is the small things that mean the most.  I like how you engaged the senses.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. When I wrote this I was thinking how people in prison felt, so alone, without hope and Dean had it worse never having a visitor but being totured evrday by his jailors.

And when you've got that much time on your own you kinda think about the things you no longer have.