Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 02:50 PM · On: Seven
Woah! So is Claire and Veronica both werewolves? Or was I right about Claire just being a smoking gun and it's Veronica that's the werewolf? I'm glad that Dean is getting his emotions back. I'm really looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Aahhhh, just can't pull one over on you, can I? Tee hee! Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 02:39 PM · On: Six
Go Pilot, go! I hope they can put Dean back to himself before he becomes the next dinner of the werewolf. I just laughed when she said she's allergic to silver. Shoulda rung a bell in Dean's head but he's almost completely shut down. Perhaps the teacher is just a smoking gun and Sam is with the monster (somehow I doubt it!). Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 01:29 PM · On: Five
You know, I'm really enjoying the parallel story lines of your story and what's going on in Season 4 and 5. I'm hoping that Dean will find the hope that he needs, seems like the pilot is thinking of something that might just help our boy. I did kinda laugh at The Sam Winchester doing the "boo hoo" comment (even though I cringed when Sam said it in the show). I can't wait to see what the Pilot has come up with, I just want to kick Free Will's whatever.
Author's Response: Sam said it in the show? Damn, did I miss that one? Or I wasn't paying attention, LOL! Thanks again for the stars!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 09:07 AM · On: Four
This chapter just cracked me up! I love how the Pilot and her other officers were able to fight "dirty" against Free Will! It really seemed to work. Poor Dean though, I guess he was a bit embarrassed there at the end of the school visit. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: LOL, I personally enjoyed writing that bit. :) Ta for reviewing!
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 24/04/10 02:10 PM · On: Four
Oh, I LIKE them apples. Like them a whole lot... *ahem* Poor Dean - under attack from all sides. Family heirlooms never bode well!
Author's Response: Tee hee! And it's only going to get worse!! :)
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/10 02:06 PM · On: Six
OOOOhhhhhh!!! Claire and Silver allergies + Dean and not giving a damn = not good!!!! not good at all... Toss in a distracted Sam - I'm thinking Pilot better get her crew in gear quick.... I loved he whole " want a job done right" comment... I think I shouted "YOU GO GIRL" at my computer... LOL. Is it wrong to want Pilot and the girls to kick Dean's ass at this point- well- but not before he maybe get's whumped just a bit. Of course- Sam has to finish his SALAD first- hahahahaha... then come back and put his brother back together. *is it the weekend yet???* Great Chapter Siouxie!!! Tree
Author's Response: O. M. D. This is the best couple of review I could have had; I've been jumping around my computer room for about ten mins straight: THANK YOU! BTW, it's officially Sunday now as it's 1.30am. I'll be updating in about 9 hrs!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/10 01:59 PM · On: Five
Sorry I'm a little late... had to go out of town... but I love that I come back to a two-fer... lol. First- I'm howling... how appropriate is it that Dean's ship is run by women whereas- Sam's is commanded by a man - and they've NEVER even seen hide-nor-hair of a female on the Good-Ship Sammy.... ( I'm snorting here) I loved that the Dean Winchester COULD shout out and reach the other ship in the fleet- what a nice tie-in to reality- Sammy picking up on that whole "there's something wrong with Dean" vibe. Its also a great picture- how well you've painted Dean's utter apathy at this point.. post-Hell and yet in the middle of a hunt. LOVE IT. And now he's shutting down the ship even further- soooo not good- DEAN DEAN DEAN!!!! *Shakes head* *hurries on to next chapter*
Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 22/04/10 03:29 AM · On: Six
Heee! Indeed. Poor Sam, channeling his inner Dean, still there are worse things to channel. And those girls have got their work cut out with his depressed brother. Still I have a feeling the werewolf is gong to give everything a helping hand very soon...
Author's Response: I could channel something of Dean's alright. Oh whoops, did I say that out loud? ROFL. Thanks for the stars - looks like I've bitten one in half, LOL. I wouldn't put it past me. :)
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 22/04/10 12:14 AM · On: Six
You really are the most origonal writer. Love that all aboard the Dean Winchestyer are women. You seem to be leading us to think that Clare is the werewolf but I'm not sure I trust Veronica. Great job
Author's Response: Oooh, you are a clever one! We'll see what we shall see, eh? Thanks for reading and reviewing - and the stars! :)
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 22/04/10 12:10 AM · On: Five
Yah! two chapters, onto the next one.
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 19/04/10 10:47 AM · On: Four
Im still loving this one. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope it continues to amuse. And thanks for the stars!
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/10 09:35 PM · On: Four
I just found this story today and read all four chapters. Great concept! I laughed outloud when I realized that Dean's body is managed/ran by women. LOL ! I hope Sam and the ladies can get him to see a doctor.
Author's Response: Ngaw, thanks! Next two chapters go up on Wednesday. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing - and the stars! Better than pie!
Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 18/04/10 03:36 PM · On: Four
You know, Dean really stands no chance in a fight against his libido!! Score to the ladies, alright!
Author's Response: ROFL! And it gets better (worse!) from here on in, LOL!
Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 18/04/10 03:03 PM · On: Three
"Dean opened an eye, unable to remember where he had fallen asleep. Realising quite rightly that this was less of a surprise and more of a lifestyle choice.." Heh!! Loved the description of the shaky ground, the cracks under his feet after his confrontation with Sam, and the whole Man-in-Charge/free will thing, very amusing!
Author's Response: Thanks! And you let stars - I luffs you. :)
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/10 02:11 PM · On: Four
Souxie, great update. liked the prom dress line and the fact that you had the lovely women in Dean's body giving him a as Sam would say ""you got a class one bon." LOL Renee
Author's Response: Tee hee! That seems to have gone down - or rather, up - well! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/10 10:03 AM · On: Four
Souxie.... where to begin... I loved the opener- your descrition of the scene in the diner- between Sam and Dean - cracked me up but yet was so angstily spot on... I found myself smirking at Sam's "Great plans and machinations were outlined, fought over, voted on, and eventually pared down to one" Followed by...successful execution of Operation Get Dean To Eat... It was shades of MBV.. and the whole "when a dog quits eating speech... And I alternately found myself absorbed in picturing the look on Dean's face as this was going on... that bland indifference - so well-crafted... that only hides the underlying agony of lost hope... ( I think I might have missed the time-setting of this story- not sure if its S5-ish or post-hell) but I can totally palpate Dean's frame of mind here. But my favorite bits continue to be- (and do you EVER knock it out of the ballpark) with the Skipper and the Internal body stuff. When you threw in Free Will (i.e. Dean's internal voice- loved that cocky voice- btw) the exchange was PRICELESS!!!! And when the Skipper opened the floodgates and used sex against DEAN- of all people - that boner bit at the end... OMG- I was dying from laughter... YAY her!!!! play dirty girlfriend! This is probably one of the most originally crafted stories I've read in a LONG time... I'm soooo hooked... and I hate that its a WIP- but I promise I'll be as patient as possible.
HUGE kudo's dude! This Feature is well-deserved in my book. Tree
Author's Response: *GASP* *IS SPEECHLESS* *takes a 5 min break* Uhm - thanks?! I have to admit, after I read your review (which made me jump around my computer laughing maniacally) I turned off my Mac to go to bed. It was then that I realised you meant this had been favourited - so I had to get out of bed and go see. And I got a ribbon! Weeeeee! Thank you thank you thank you for giving this a chance (not that you don't normally with everyone!), as I get the feeling some people have been turned off (if you'll pardon the parlance) by the 'chicks on the spaceship' (?). I will be putting in up in lumps of two chapters cos I can't wait to get to the end - does that make sense? Anyway, THANK YOU for the favourite and having time to read it! *goes back to jumping around room in excitement*
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 15/04/10 12:57 PM · On: Two
Oooh, now that's a low blow... Let's hope it works! Love the snark in this chapter from both boys, defensive Dean and worried-but-not-showing-it Sam - hurry up weekend!
Author's Response: But low blows are the best! Or at least, the most enjoyable, ROFL! Thanks for keeping up!
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 15/04/10 03:44 AM · On: Two
love the "total lockdown of the entire emotional processing station" sounds just like Dean. And Sam really knows how to get through to his brother. Awesome job I'm having a few computer issues so if I don't get to review each chapter, please know I am reading (On stolen time at work!) and give yourself stars.
Author's Response: Ngaw, thanks for getting this far! And thanks for the stars! Glad this is going over well, I was worrying over how it would be received. :)
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/04/10 03:13 PM · On: Two
Poor Dean! He really needs to see a doctor. I thought it was a hoot when the internal beings couldn't get to his emotional program, that it was shut down and sealed! So like our Dean. Dean is still a fine looking man even when ill! Hopefully, he will take Sam's advice soon and get to a doctor! I'm really enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Ngaw, ta! I'm just glad people are 'getting it', LOL. Thanks for reading, reviewing - and the stars!! Better than pie! :)
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/10 02:49 PM · On: Two
hahahaha... I'm surprised Dean didnt smack him... Love it... snarly Dean and smart-assed (caring in his own way)Sam. The comment about the Abolut Silver was awesome too... had me rolling! Surprised Dean hadnt thought that one up himself!! Too slow... must be hurtin'.... Ok- cant stand the mystery- what's goin on with my boy???? Tree
Author's Response: You came back! Awesome!sauce you! All will become clear.... well, alright, it won't, it'll be a little less muddy - at weekend, when the next chapter goes up. :)
Reviewer: adder574 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/10 01:48 PM · On: Two
Sounds like things are getting worse for Dean. I laughed at Sam's way of getting through to Dean. I hope Dean takes Sam's advice and gets a check up. It sounds like he really needs on. I liked the way, when Dean wouldn't talk to Sam, his workers couldn't figure out his emotional state. Im loving this, please update soon.
Author's Response: So glad you got the connection there! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Next update will be at weekend :)
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 13/04/10 07:22 AM · On: One
Holey hell, I always trust ya hun! Lovin' it so far - high-larious!
Author's Response: Tee hee - thanks! Hope chapter 3 doesn't disappoint!
Reviewer: Renate (Signed) · Date: 12/04/10 11:39 PM · On: One
Of course Dean would have female avatars manipulating his bodily functions! He should drink more cranberry juice.
Author's Response: LOL - don't go there.... yet! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/10 08:05 PM · On: One
Dude- This is AWESSSSOOOMMMMEEEE.... not that I generally expect less from you... As a nurse- you totally have me here... loving the analogy and I cant wait to see where you take this... Bring it ON!!!!! Tree
Author's Response: Thanks! To have your name here is like HEEEE! ROFL - Just glad everyone's getting the analogy here. Thanks for reading! *bows down*
Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 11/04/10 06:29 PM · On: One
ha! I've got this mental picture of the Enterprise with girls with pony tails. Make it so!
Author's Response: Tee hee - I had The Hunt For Red October in my head all the time I was writing this, ROFL. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - and the stars, of course! Better than pie! :)
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