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Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 06/06/10 02:56 AM · On: Thirteen

hahaha - glad i caught up with this one again! And I ALWAYS know where my towel is. It's just the boys' that sometimes gets temporarily misplaced...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 10:17 PM · On: Thirteen

Fabulous story!

I know what marry and bang mean but what is cliff?  Explain it to me in dumb american so I can understand it. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 10:08 PM · On: Twelve

So are we ever going to find out why Dean's been fainting and dying?  

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 10:01 PM · On: Eleven

"She looks real dangerous, Sam.  She might even lick my eye out."  Ha!  Dean is back!

And isn't it just like Sam to go from wanting to kill Claire to helping Dean save her in only a few seconds. 

The fight scenes were very well written.  I was able to follow them easily, picture the action in my mind. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 09:45 PM · On: Ten

Melding EP and Free Will together was a fantastic idea!  

"Can you drive and wolf-shift at the same time?"  I hadn't thought of that.  How well do wolves drive?  

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 09:35 PM · On: Nine

Fabulous chapter!  I almost believed that Veronica wasn't going to hurt Sam.  She was a very convincing wounded party.  But I hoped you weren't going to trick me with a third person being the evil werewolf while you decoyed us with Claire and Veronica.  

I'm off to find out what happens to our boys. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 09:24 PM · On: Eight

Ooooh tricky!  I like how you tied her husband's death into a Winchester kill.  Nice!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 09:13 PM · On: Seven

Veronica?!  Really?  Now we have two suspects.  You have me completely baffled.  

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 08:56 PM · On: Six

This is really making me bonkers.  Sam is acting like Dean and Dean isn't acting like anyone in the show.  Snap out of it, Dean!  Hello- werewolf babe straight ahead.  Do something!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 08:46 PM · On: Five

I"m not sure if I picked up on the Raimi connection before.  Cool!

What the hell is wrong with Dean?  Barely cares about sex and doesn't care at all about his Baby?  Something is seriously wrong! 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 08:40 PM · On: Four

A very amusing chapter!  The flirtation was very saucy.  I'm glad something about Dean is working right.

So is Claire a werewolf?  I know, I know - read and find out.  there has to be something special about the crystal or you wouldn't have mentioned it.  

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 08:19 PM · On: Three

A prom date whose dress is too tight---Hee!  That was a good one!  "You know what pisses me off most?"  "Whisky's more expensive than beer?"  Another golden quip!

Having Dean's body fight against his stubborn free will is an interesting idea and you're going about it in a very intriguing way. 

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/10 09:43 PM · On: Thirteen

I really enjoyed this story.  It was clever the way you kept jumping between the boys and their "crew" that kept them going.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 01:47 PM · On: Thirteen

awwww - she get's him... so what Dean needs... somebody that get's him...  and I just loved that line- as tragic as it is... "I'll tell you about the days I'm thinking about chucking myself on silver railings if you tell me about the days you want the world to end just so you can sleep." I often wonder how long its been since Dean's slept a truly peaceful sleep... since he was 4 maybe?

Nice to see that things are ship-shape again- or at least close...

Absolutley LOVEEEED this story!!! Wonderfuly imaginative... totally original!  The characterizations inflected on the various portions of the ship were just so spot on and yet were just pieces of the whole that make Dean- Dean... adorable!...

Thanks again!

 Tree

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 01:38 PM · On: Twelve

ahhhh.... I just love the whole..."I couldnt save you from the demon blood.. couldnt save you from Ruby...." Only Dean can dredge up blame and dump it on his own head... never mind that Sam has Free Will of his own...  God love that boy's ability to guilt himself...

And damn how I loved the way they can toss accusations at each other.. I just KNEW the whole Madision thing was coming out... knew that was getting thrown in Dean's face... might as well had it tattoo'd on his knuckles...

But I'll admit... not sure why Sam isnt just a TAD more worried about the whole HEART STOPPING thing... come'on Sammy- arent you supposed to be just a bit more freak'd by that...

 okay- going on to the next chappie...

Tree

Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 08:36 PM · On: Thirteen

Souxie,

another great story.

I liked how Dean had all women on his ship.

Glad they didn't kill Claire.

Renee

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 08:25 PM · On: Thirteen

thankyou for yet another truly amazing and original story, I don't know how you keep coming up with them but you always manage to surprise and entertain me. Catch you next time.

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 04:59 PM · On: Thirteen

I bow to your greatness even as I apologise for not reviewing each chapter!

This story is awesome. True, it is strange and quirky (hey it's you!) but just great and I love the tie in at the end by Dean regarding his brother and Clare almost as much as I love the new way you found to show us the internal workings of a Winchester!

You're crazy girl but it's all in a good way! Mary xx

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 12:15 PM · On: Eleven

Hey Siouxie... sorry I've been M.I.A... but these past couple of chapters were just FABULOUSSSSSSS!!!... I just adored the fight between the sorta pathetic- giving up younger version Dean and the more sage, stronger older version.. only for the two of them... both halves of the stronger whole... to come together to fight for survival of the ship... the symolism was just perfect... I had to read it three times... the scene playing out in my mind. I could almost even see bits of Bobby, John, even an aged Dean in there- all imparting words to the younger Free Will that just wanted to toss in the towel... Wonderfully done!

And then... he took the helm- just like only Dean does... back in control... damn the torpedoes and full steam ahead... his brother in peril.. nothing to stand in his way.

I also loved the whole "worrying levels of Resentment" - holy crap- is that ever a functional/dysfunctional system aboard the good ship Winchester? LOL...

I'm still kinda concerned about both SHIPS... The Dean Winchester might not be about to go down... but she's/he's still taking on water... wasnt in the best condition before leaving port...

Is it Wednesday yet? heehee!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 08:33 AM · On: Ten

Yeah! Seems like Dean's internal workings are...working!! I hope he can get to Sam before Claire turns into a werewolf. It's too bad that Dean will have to end her, she seems quite the lady. I just laughed my head off with the "Sasquatch" number thing. Tee, hee. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 08:23 AM · On: Nine

Gulp, seems like Dean and Sam are both in precarious situations. I hope the Pilot and Head of EP can straighten out Free Will before Dean becomes the werewolves next dinner. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 02/05/10 11:48 PM · On: Eleven

great chapter, love the visuals of Clare turning into the werewolf and killing Veronica, very descriptive. Looking forward to Wednesday

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 29/04/10 12:50 AM · On: Ten

love Sam being in Dean's phone under Sasquatch. Glad to see that Dean's ship is back on track, looking forward to the action now that we know we've got the yin yang of werewolves in Clare and Veronica. cool

Author's Response: Heee! Glad it's going over well. And thanks for more stars! :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 06:27 PM · On: Two

Maybe Sam will finally get Dean to see a doctor.  Hitting him in the libido is a sure way to make him take care of himself.  

Author's Response: Heee! Do not underestimate the power of Sam, LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 06:11 PM · On: One

Very interesting pov.  I like the way you go about telling us Dean has something wrong with him without telling us what it is.

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