Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 12
Very good story. You put poor Dean thru the ringer. The preacher was one nasty guy. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 02/05/10 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
I'm really sorry to see this awesome fic coming to an end, I really enjoyed reading it! Great ending, lots of love for Bobby in this chapter!
Author's Response: In a way i'm also sorry to see this story end as i really enjoyed writing it although the ending gave me a few problems so i'm glad you thought it was okay and yes, i love Bobby, i love the relationship between Sam and Dean and Bobby. Thank you for your support during this story, it really does help knowing that people like what i'm writing. I'm off now to see if i can think of any other ways in which i can make the Winchesters suffer.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/10 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
Great story. The Preacher was an evil Bastard. glad he got what he deserved. Poor Dean he went through hell again. love the protective Sam and Bobby. again great job. Renee
Author's Response: I'm glad the preachers evil nature came across loud and clear, it means i accomplished what i set out to do and of course, he couldn't escape, not after what he's put Sam, Dean and Bobby through. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my story, i'm so glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 01/05/10 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome ending dude... I really enjoyed this story... nice to see the brother watching out for each other. And I didnt get the chance to comment before... but you totally caught me by surprise by the return of the preacher-sans- Kelvin... nice touch there. Again... great story... well-done and I look forward to your next.
Tree
Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you liked the story, twists and all, but what i'm really happy about is that the ending worked for you as i always find it difficult to end a story. Thank you once again for continuing to let me know your thoughts throughout this story, now it's off for me to see if i can conjure up something else to put the Winchesters through.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 01/05/10 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
Jeez, I didn't see that coming at all!
And you really are the queen of evil cliffies, aren't you?
Author's Response: Thank you, i shall wear my crown with pride. I am just about to post the final chapter, hope you like it and thank you for taking the time to drop me a line, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 29/04/10 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMG! Just when I thought things were looking better for the Winchesters, you came up with this cliffhanger! This story just gets better and better!
Author's Response: Poor boys, things just go from bad to worse for them. It's great that you think this story gets better and better, i take that as a real compliment, thank you. The next chapter will be posted tomorrow with the final up sometime over the weekend, hopefully Saturday. Thank you for taking the time to drop me a line, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
Terrible! And I mean that in the best way!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and i know exactly what you mean by 'terrible'. The next chapter will be posted tomorrow with the final up sometime over the weekend, i'm hoping for Saturday. Thank you for taking the time to drop me a line, it really does mean the world to me.
Reviewer: Deans Addiction (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
Holy Crap dude! you cant leave it there!!! Damn you can write...I love this story so much cos you can really feel the emotions written into it and the detail described helps you visualise it like it's an actual episode. Poor Dean...how much emotional trauma can 1 guy endure before it all becomes too much. PLEASE DONT KILL HIM!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, it's really great to know that i suceeded in getting everything i wanted to across. As for whether i will kill Dean or not, well, okay, i'll give you a little spoiler: I never ever write death fics, i love these characters too much to let them die, or should i say, let them stay dead for too long. The next chapter will be posted tomorrow and the final chapter either Saturday or Sunday, i really hope you like them. Thank you once again for takinf the time to drop me a line, it really is very much appreciated.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Now thats just an EVIL cliffhanger... what in the world did Dean do??? And have I mentioned how I just adore Bobby in this... gotta love surrogatePapa Singer... lol... Ok- this bites... One of te hazards of validating the new stories- I read them too fast and then have to sit back and wait on the next update *sighs*...
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger but i promise all will be revealed in the next chapter which will be posted hopefully on Friday. I too love Bobby and cannot resist having him in my stories, i love the relationship between him and Sam and Dean. Thank you for reviewing and i really hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/10 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 9
I just LOOOOOVEEEE Bobby to the rescue... and I seriously hoping that he truly did put an end to the preacher... I was cheering. Sam's grief and horror as his memory of what happened to Dean was just palpable... I could feel it pour off the screen as I was reading. His desperation to find his brother was raw and emotional... and then when he actually found him. And Dean.. so alone... feeling as though his last vestige of family - Sam - had left him as well. That everything he'd held dear had betrayed him... he truly wanted to die.. to just slip away... I just cant wait for the update now. Awesome story hun! Tree
Author's Response: Wow, i just love your review, thank you so much. I am planning to post the next chapter within the next few hours and then the final two over this coming weekend, real life allowing of cours. Thanks again for such a wonderful review, i greatly appreciate it.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
No worries, dear, I loved this chapter! I hope you can post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked the chapter after all the heartache it gave me. Hopefully the next chapter will be posted Wednesday and then the final two over the weekend. Thank you for taking the time to drop me a line, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: DeeUnNatural (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
NOW WHY do you want to leave me like this. 'absence of a pulse." Dude, I'm too old for this. Great job
Author's Response: Hehe, i love your review. I am hoping to get the next chapter posted sometime on Wednesday and then the final two chapters next weekend, real life allowing of course, at the moment it's looking pretty promising. Thank you for dropping me a line, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 25/04/10 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow, another evil cliffie! Poor Dean and Sam too, they both been through the wringer in this fic. I hope things will start to get better in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, another little cliffy on this chapter, sorry, couldn't help myself. You'll be able to see whether things get better in the following chapters soon as i'm hoping to grab some free time before next weekend in order to post chapter ten and then there will only be two chapter left which i will post next weekend. Thank you for reviewing, it really does mean a lot that you took the time to drop me a line.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 23/04/10 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just a quick note that I'm still enjoying your fic very much! Thank you for the regular updates!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's always good to know that my story is keeping interest. As for the regular updates, i never begin posting a story until i have completely finished writing it so that i can post quickly although i have to say that it's been a little longer between updates than i'd like as i seem to have no time during the week so am posting only at weekends that's not to say that if i do get time in the week i won't post as i like my stories to posted quickly and regularly. Thanks again for dropping me a line, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
This sooo isnt looking good for Dean... such trumped up charges... skewed to make him look bad- and I suspect just to get Sam to do fall for the Preacher's plan... I'm afraid if Sam see's the torture his brother is being subjected to- and going to be subjected to... he's going to go ballistic... (kinda hope he does at least!) Also hoping Bobby shows up for real--- Another awesome chapter and just delightly whumpage! Tree
Author's Response: I glad you liked the chapter, whumping and all. I'm hoping to get another chapter up tomorrow, along with some more suffering for the boys of course. Thank you for taking the time to drop me a line.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 4
As soon as Bobby started the story I figured it was the Preacher or his side kick. So which one is the side kick and the preacher? Seems like they can take the shape of others. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yeah, i guess i haven't explained that too well but you're right, the preacher and his followers can take on the shape of others. Glad you're liking it so far, hopefully i'll have the next chapter up very very soon. Thanks again for taking the time to drop me a line.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/10 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ahhhh and I was sooo hoping that Bobby showing up was gonna be a good thing... Damn preacher- just using him too to mess with the boys' heads... At least there's some promise that they realize that the preacher and his creature are messin' with them... but maybe too late now that PreacherBobby has Dean and apparently another version has Sammy too... Not looking good- and how much more abuse can either take- Love the story- very tense... nicely crafted together... even though both brother can see through the lies... they're seemingly helpless to stop it. Looking forward to the next chapter! Tree
Author's Response: Thanks for that great review, it's always great to know that the story is working with those who read. I am hoping to get another chapter up sometime this weekend. Thanks again.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/04/10 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hmmm....wonder what happened to the young man's family? I'm worried about what is going to happen next and hopefully, eventually the Preacher gets his just dessert along with the other spirit (or is he not a spirit?). Hurry back!
Author's Response: I love that this chapter left you with questions. As the story continues you will have answers, i didn't wait to reveal everything in the last chapter choosing instead to do so at various points in the story. The next chapter should be up soon, just a little tweaking to be done. Thank you for reviewing, it really does mean a lot that you took the time to drop a line.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/10 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very cool chapter--- love how the preacher is setting up the brothers to make it look like they're going at each other. I cant wait to find out who the mystery person is and what this whole "sins of the father" thing is about. Doesnt bode well for Dean... And this Preacher guy- so not good- gotta be a demon or in cohoots.. Hope the boys just get out of there - back to Bobbys.. he can help them... Waiting for more! Tree
Author's Response: Hi, Glad you liked the chapter, i must say, i really agonised over this one, it just didn't seem right but after re-write after re-write after re-write i simply decided i had to post before i sent myself crazy so it's really good to hear that it turned out okay. Thanks for reviewing, it really does mean a lot.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 08/04/10 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, just awesome! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for your great review, i'm glad you're still liking it.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/10 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is a great start... very creepy - especially this "preacher" guy... Can't wait to see what's up with him and how he's connected to Dean. Seem's like he's got it in for the elder Winchester... Loved your Bobby in the first chapter... right in character.. Looking forward to more... Tree
Author's Response: Thank you for your great review, it's always good to hear that the story work and is keeping interest. Not too long to wait for the next chapter, i just have to tweak it a little before posting.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant start, I'm hooked already!
Author's Response: I'm really you like it so far. I promise not to keep you waiting too long for the next update as the story is complete so i just have to tweak before posting subsequent chapters. Thank your for taking the time to drop me a line, it really does mean a lot.
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