Reviewer: dixie (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ohhhhh - I knew I shouldn't have read this! So sad but excellent. This caught my eye as I was scrolling to finish Six Days, which is also very good. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: I knew I shouldn't have written it but I did! Thank you for the review - it means a lot and I'm glad you enjoyed Six Days too. Jx
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/04/10 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a beautifuly written fic, very sad, the best way to describe this is a quiet death fic, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you - it all felt very ... resigned... as I wrote it. Sam's acceptance of it and Dean's obliviousness to it... It made me sad to write it and I won't be killing anyone again any time soon. Jx
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 03/04/10 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh oh oh, I'm not sure what to say but "Pass the tissues?" seems pretty appropriate. I must say that for a death fic this was beautiful - gentle, calm and without the panic that appears so often in death fics. Definitely beautifully written. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you, Midge. I think the calmness stems from the inevitability of it all in the end. And, all things considered, it was a pretty peaceful death for Dean. Jx
Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh man... I suddenly remember why I stay away from death!fics... but when I saw you did one I just hadda read. This was oh so sad. And subtle. Very undramatic and therefore even more believable. Poor guys. I get why you say you wont write another one again. LOL. When I wrote mine I was drained. It took a lot of me with it. Thanks for sharing tho! Brilliant lil fic! Hugs, Ilka
Author's Response: Thanks, Ilka. I will never write a death fic again - it's like you say, just draining. I love to whump Dean (and Sam from time to time) but I've never gone so far as to kill either of them before. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway :) Jx
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
*wails* Hun, that was great! I was almost shouting at Sam when he was talking about going to the next town, and at Bobby for not missing them for a couple of days, AND at Dean for being so stubborn and insisting they finish the hunt! And then when he got back, and I just knew he hadn't found a signal, could just see his face when he lied, them both sitting there in the cave, Dean all pale and sweaty and weak, Sam all emo and squinching...
A perfect MixItUp! And kudos for doing a deathfic - they're pretty damn tough to write!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cal. I wrote the last paragraph a couple of weeks ago and then couldn't get beyond the fact that OMG - I killed Dean! The rest of the story followed quite a bit later. Jx
Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/10 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ok so I watch 5.16 and then I come on here and read this! Woman are you trying to kill me too? :) I loved this, it so simple and that's the real beauty of it. This line was great - the blood on his lips glistening like macabre rubies in the light. Dean still thinking on his feet faster than Sam even though he's dying. Sometimes you can have too much brains and miss the simple solution. Nice one Jenny, I'll even forgive you for making me cry again, Mary xx
Author's Response: I'm sorry, Mary. I didn't mean to make you cry but I'm kinda glad I did. Means I hit a nerve. Jx
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