Wow, that was dark and painful.  Poor Dean.  It never really occurred to me that the boys would have jobs that didn't quite go right (though it should have...I'm just showing my newness to the fandom :D).  This is a chilling example.

Your writing is excellent and I got great pictures off it all, gory though they be :D  I'm eagerly jumping to the next chapter.

Nutty
(newbie) 

Author's Response: Well hi! Welcome to UnScripted Genius and welcome to my world! I'm glad you liked it, hope you enjoy the rest!

My god i don't think i've ever read anything that made me laugh as hard as that linda line. Great job on ending true to supernatural form: Dean beautifully cheapening the moment  with an unbelievably crude comment.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. That's my Dean.

Terry- just finished this - very COOL! I loved the whole story- well crafted and you even gave me nearly naked Dean out in the rain. *sigh* AWESOME, awesome dude!

 

Author's Response: Giggles in girlish satisfaction. Ta. I'm glad you liked it, writing it damn near killed me.

I truly enjoyed your story.  Great job!

Author's Response: Goddie! I aim to please!

Okay, I finally got to read the whole story through and may I just say WOW!!! You certainly know how to keep it suspenseful and tearing at you heartstrings the exact same time. You did a wonderful job conveying the emotions and the story was just a wonderful read. I enjoyed it immensely and I can't wait until your next one!

Great job!

Oh, and the boob line from Dean at the end was great! A great way to end the story!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I'm glad the ending didn't disappoint!

WOW...FREAKY!!!!! Ok, Dr. Becker is certainly someone I would not want to piss off! I had chills go through my body as I was reading that!

The little old ladies were sooooo cute! I actually know ladies like that!

And seeing Dean this vulnerable is really scary and something entirely new!

“You sound awful.” Sam said.

Dean cleared his throat. “Thank God, I thought something was wrong with my ears.”

These lines were so funny and so like the Winchesters!

I'm not a big fan of the oozy wounds, but you did a great job describing it. My stomach did flip flops for me at that one!

The dream was freaky. Really makes me start to wonder...And Sam hitting Dean--I loved it. And we all know that Dean will more than pay him back for that one!

Author's Response: You're such a terrific reviewer! I can't keep up with you! Thanks for taking the time to comment on each chapter. That's really nice.

The smell Dean is dealing with is defintely troubling especially since no one else is smelling it. And the poor Impala...why won't it start up? And the bird flu line...wonderful!

It wasn't too long. I liked it. The kid sneezing in Dean's face was great! You would swear that he was facing off with a monster from his reaction. I like that Sam is ribbing him. Definitely lightens the mood up a bit!

Author's Response: Dean was definitely a little schizoid in this story. I see humor in everything.

That's so sweet that Sam is taking care of Dean. It's usually the other way around!

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I won't reply to all your reviews, you're so sweet! Glad you're enjoying the story!

That was intense! I feel so sorry for Dean having to do that to the poor woman. But then if he didn't then she could have easily killed him and Sam as well. At least now we knew where this guilt is coming from.

 

Great chapter!

excellent story. i hope u will continue it. i need to find out what happens with dean and margaret.

Author's Response: I have the rst of it written I just gotta post the chapters, I'll try to get it up as quick as I can!