First the werewolf, then the kid sneezing, then the smells---I can't wait to see where this is going!  Just when I think i'm cresting the top of the coaster I find another stretch  uphill.  I'm holding on so tightly my fingers are leaving imprints imbedded into the safety bar.

Author's Response: Smirking now, cause I know what's gonna happen

The bathroom humor was hilarious---been there, done that, got the ticket stub to prove it.

Why is it no matter who you're dealing with the scariest words in the English language are "I've been thinking."  When my husband say those words I want to run from the house screaming.  You brandish them like a sword!  Great job!

Don't worry about chapters not being filled with action or angst.  I think sometimes the chatty chapters are the best.  They show the depth of the characters relationships by their words to one another and their interaction.  It all comes together to make the story great!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this cause it only gets worse from here. I think you'll like it!!

It took me all day but i finished all nineteen chapters..........I couldn't stop reading it......Excellent story.

Author's Response: Ta for wasting your whole day just for me. I'm glad you liked it!!!

Loving that the good doctor is there - Great story - K

Ahhhh,,,,, I'm loving this story but gotta take a break. Kids to feed, baths to run and books to read.  I'll catch the rest later - thanks for the great story  - K

My Mom had the ability to torture and withhold things you needed, Terry. Thanks........I'm back to my childhood now, thanks to you.....

God, Terry .......how do you sleep when you're writing...??! I have to FINISH this today or I'll be just like Dean,sitting huddled on the floor, arms wrapped around my knees, rocking like a madman, mumbling incoherently to myself...

I love that you draw things out. I can't even put into words the loss I feel at the END of your stories. Very similar to the exhilaration you feel on an awe-inspiring amusement ride, followed by the letdown of knowing it has ended. WOW!!!

Terry, you bring out the sadist in all of us.Our poor Dean !! It's not that we enjoy watching him suffer, it's just that it always seems to bring out that masochistic, STRONG side of him even more, and to enjoy how HIS Sammy ministers to him. Not being much of a wimp about major "owies" myself, I have made more than a few people ill with what I can deal with. Like Dean, I feel there's added strength of character in suffering in silence. I once drove 1200 miles with only gas/potty stops while having a kidney stone attack.  Amazing how your brain can make you function.

Author's Response: Laughs, yeah, if I'm lying down I'm dying.

Wow.............don't ever apologize for setting up the stories the way you do.......you're awesome!!!  The actual show is usually only 1/4 to 1/3 action and the rest devoted to the boys, their thinking and relationship. I bought the dvd set of Season I for when I needed a fix. I've found that if I play it  softly while I read your works, I can really enjoy myself. Now if only I can find a way to keep your well-written body of work around forever as well..... I'm going to go broke on printer ink !!!!

I have just finished reading Moonstar again, and although I think I have referred to a couple of things in this story in passing during other reviews, it really deserves its own comments on its own review page! You did an awesome job describing Dean's state of mind and the way he blames himself for everything that goes wrong. That stuff can really eat away at you, as it does to Dean. And although I am hopelessly Dean-centred I loved Sam in this one - especially the take-charge tone he adopted when he informed Dean of their program after this hunt  - nothing but sleeping and eating until Sam said otherwise! Fantastic.

And it goes without saying (but I'm saying it) that the fight on the roof was just awesome, and the spiritual cleansing in the rain was very.... spiritual. What an image.

Thanks Terry!

 

Okay, so I cracked, fixed up my printer that was connected to my poor sick computer and wrangled it to print this off for me so I could read it in bed.  It was sooo good!

I love the imagery of the town.  I wanna visit.

The plotline was excellent.  The whole story of Margaret (::insert shiver here::) and Stephen and the crazy doctor (die, you bastard, die!) and the finger.

Also the image of Dean curled in on himself in a dirty corner of that morgue...::bites lip::

Yours is only the fourth fic I've read since falling head first into this fandom sometime last week :D but it is one of the best.  Oh, um, your other fic 'Cry in the Night' was number 5 and shares the title :D 

Thanks for writing, thanks for the angst and I'm off to poke around here some more :D

Nutty
(who really needs to write some SPN fic of her own)

Author's Response:

I'll be honest I love Moonstar. One of my persanl faves. I'm so glad you liked it. It was strange to put a story in a setting i knew so well.

 Please write something! I'd love to read your stuff. This junk is addicting!