There he goes again, 'you need some food,' does he never tire of looking after Sam. He so desperately needs looking after himself it makes my heart cry.

Sam succuming to the smell of the greasy burger despite his promise of waiting for Dean, it just wasn't going to happen, cos Dean's so wrapped up in making sure they are sorted with cash and a place to sleep.  But at least one of them is barely refereshed to make sure they get a place to lay their heads.

Deans face mashed up against the window, great description of a guy thats just all done in. Loved it.

Ack, do I go to bed, its late you see, or do I read on the next chappie and enjoy the glass of wine by my side. Well... I was never a gal to say no to a grand story or a glass of wine, so it looks like I'm in for the ride that the next chappie brings. ;)

Jane

Hey, Terry!  What an awesome story!  I don't know how I'd not read this before, but I'm sure glad I have, now!

It had all the good stuff...blood, oozing wound, sick!hurt!Dean, angsty!Sam, just great.  Loved it.

There's the Peabody Mansion outside of Chicago (Peabody Award & Peabody Coal) that has quite a history.  My son is a deputy sheriff up there and goes to that place a lot.  The staff is always glad to see him and let him have the run of the place.  It has been rumored to be haunted and some weird stuff has happened there.  He scared the crap out of himself in the attic yesterday.  When he told the staff, they said they don't go up there. 

Anyway, I've been there and that's what I pictured when I was reading this.  I've been on those kinds of roads, too. *shudder*

Just very well done, my dear.  I liked your author's comments, too.  They made me laugh out loud.

Thanks for putting this out there for us!

Nana

Author's Response:

Well I can't promise a Moonstar for your story but I'll do my best. I'm really glad you liked it, it was a lot of fun to write!

I work out a lot of angst in the suthor's notes.

 

my favourite, out of the hundreds i have read.

Author's Response: Ta so much. That's such a nice thing to say!

No torch and pitchforks...I can just move on to the next chapter!!!! This is so great...

Oh, creeeeeepy!!!! The tapping thing is creeeeepy...can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow. I'm getting very excited for the climax!!!!

What a cliffie! My goodness, this is VERY interesting and suspenseful...quite a story!!

Hey, I like infected wounds too...setup is great, though! Hurt...yes...lots of hurt is very good...okay, I'm gonna stop now...I enjoy it too much when the Winchesters are in pain and angsty...

Not a crappy chapter at all! I really liked it...especially Linda and David...!!!

Whoa! What's this cliffhanger about? (Yeah, I finally got around to reading more...sorry I took so long!) I like this chapter a lot...especially Carla...!!!

Whenever someone writes about how Dean feels it always makes me sad because he really does truly believe that he's worth less than Sammy...you captured that essence perfectly. I mean, it's depressing, but you got it good. Excellent chapter.

Huh, well, dark is good! You got the emotions just right, I think. That would be terribly horrifyingly awful...I can see how this (coupled with other "bad jobs") would drive Dean over the edge. Again, dark is great!

I've never written a review before, but just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. I liked the descriptions of the places, even though you claimed they were long and boring. They made everything seem very real. Thanks for a great story.

--- Trillian.  

Author's Response: Well I'm doubly flattered that you broke your silence with my story. Ta so much and I hope you enjoy any other stories of mine you read!