Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 17 Open Wounds
This is about the 5th time I have read this - that is how obsessive I am about your story. This is my all time favorite - it really is like a warm comforter - your skills are boundless!!!! Pls don't ever doubt that - and thanks again for sharing this!!!! Timeless magic! Abi.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 19
I know you have left this site so don't know if you will even get this,but i just had to leave a review. I have loved reading Moonstar,it was a brilliant story.poor hurt Dean and worried Sam. I don't think i will ever forget Linda and her in your face boobs.Lol.
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 19
I have just read Moonstar for the first time, loved it from start to finish, Love me some hurt Dean. Brilliant writing, love the detail, I can picture the hotel clearly in my mind because of that. Thanks for an entertaining read. Silvertayl
Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/08 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
okay i read the whole thing, took ages this is a good story, and i am so glad i could just skip to the next chapter and not be stuck with those killer cliffies, you are so mean. lolz, anyway its V. V. Good
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
This was the very first fanfic I ever read, I can honestly say it was the start to my addiction. I guess I have always measured other writers by what I read here. I know I went through every range of emotion possible. Sorry it's taken me so long to thank you for such a wonderful read.
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 19
Definite attention grabber at the beginning that had he craving to see what happened to get the boys to that point, very curious! Wow…the scene with Dean in the house & having to kill the pregnant woman b/c she'd been bitten…that was powerful. Your writing is incredible, very descriptive and vivid. You definitely got the brothers down really well. Their interactions and behaviors towards each other is very true to the characters and the show. You definitely kept he hooked throughout the whole story, you revealed just enough with each chapter. You did a great job capturing Dean's spirit induced downward spiral/breakdown. It was very well written (from both Dean & Sam's perspective); you really got into their heads. Example of good descriptions. It's so simple but your word choice makes it clear and easy to imagine: “Fine!” Dean snapped. His anger was soon forgotten in the need to maneuver the big car cautiously through the narrow tilting streets. Sharp turns confronted him unexpectedly and the street went up and down with maddening irregularity. The houses, old Victorians, sprawled over the ground almost to the street itself in places. Everything from tiny cottages to huge mansions crowded against each other for what little flat space there was between the valleys and ravines they were perched on. Many of the old houses were in disrepair. A few were in the process of being remodeled. Almost all of them had a sign out front advertising Bed and Breakfast. This scene was yummy, had me picturing it, which resulted in my feeling flush (at the workplace too!): The rain plastered his boxers to his muscular frame and for all intents and purposes he may as well have been naked. Dean obviously didn’t care as he continued rubbing his hands over his body to rid it of whatever bloody memories he could. My thoughts after this: Gawd – I so want to be his hands right about now! Very classy, sweet ending that really wrapped it all up and made me all warm and fuzzy inside.
Author's Response: Wow, ta so much!!! I loved Moonstar and i'm so glad you did to! It was fun to write, especially since I know the own and the hotel so well. yeah the rain scene was a gift for someone, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
I think you have Dean size self-esteem issues!! Girl you rock! Your writing is as deep as Sam (!), timely, clear, fascinating, insightful, sharp, funny, exciting, glamorous, rough, dangerous, bright, dark and loads of other stuff that I cant think of! If I had a tenth of your talent I would be submitting my own stories! I can’t wait to read yours. You bring the colours of Sam and Dean’s bizarre world to life so they jump right off of my laptop screen. And no, it’s only half ten in the morning and I haven’t been drinking! Keep on it! Di x, Bucks, England
Author's Response: Wow, what a way to start my day! Ta so much for the loveliness!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
Finally! It's 2 am where i am right now and i must say it's worth every hour i spent not sleeping and instead reading this story. It's like i've accidentally stepped on some very sticky chewing gum, and had to spend a loooong time to attend to it, and finally unsticking it. LOL is that a good analogy? i'm not sure. But i'm sure that i enjoyed this story very much!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! ta for taking the time to comment!!! That's so nice!
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 19
This is a kind of retro-review. I read this story when I first discovered this web-site. It was quite litteraly THE reason I kept coming back. The story itself is phenominal, the way Dean cracks and bleeds his soul out is amazing to read. I re-read this every now and then for two reasons; 1) Terry is a bitchin writer (!!) and 2) Dean gets naked in the last chapter... what more incentive do you need to read on?!!!
Author's Response: Wow, what a great way to start my day! Ta so much!!!!
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 19
Fabulous, fabulous ride. And they both came out of it alive, always a bonus. I will go to work this morning, smiling, with the vision of Dean - wet in just his boxers -need I say anymore. It was an excellent ending, I can't see why you would think otherwise. It was all rounded up very nicely. I particularly enjoyed the car convo, so Dean, building up his little wall, hiding his pandora's box. And then Sam steering it onto safer waters, food and more food. Great story, m'dear very well done indeed. Thank you for sharing. Jane :)
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you enjoyed the story because I've certainly enjoyed your reviews!!!! Ta so much for your enthusiasm!
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 18 Scattered Pieces
Oh how gross is that, what an absolute nutter he really was. Icky, icky I need a cuppa to wash down the next chapter, and a biscuit too. *g Love that Dean is now back with them, but how long?! I'm loving all the drama and angst that this chapter brought Boy do they both need a holiday, at a different hotel, after this one. Jane
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 Open Wounds
I'm so glad now that I left this chapter to go to bed last night, as hard as it was half way through, but if I'd have got to the end I would never had got to me bed, as this is just way too cliffy and tantalising and where-we-came-in to leave and not continue. Happy Thursday morning and what the heck is going on here. It doesn't look like a possession, as such, but it must be because Dean wouldn't be so emotive and let his guard down, nor would he consider leaving behind his most precious possession, his brother. So something is playing with his head. Can't wait to find out the end. Jane
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 Rising Storm
Eeek, i don't like the sound of the tap tap tapping, and that sudden hot windy draft down the passage way. Please don't tell me that the Mad Doctor is haunting the hospital too, that would be just so absolutely awful. I'm sure you have some horrid thing up your sleeve. Half of me wants to know but the other half is dreading reading on! Tea, first, I need something to steady the nerves. Jane
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 Death Bound
What a horrific death poor Margaret and her boyfriend suffered. I could feel the claustraphobia she must have felt and the thought of insects crawling up your leg with no way to push they off and them having a 'take out' on your boyfriend. Not a good chapter to be eating anything to methinks, but grandly descriptive. So, our poor boy is really feeling the drain and desperately needs Margaret out of him, I just hope that they are not too late and Dean is irrepairable!
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 14 Trade
Oh, that last bit, 'not anymore...' I hope thats Margaret in there with Dean and nothing else! So far she's been kinda okay, wanting to be found, I feel, but this last bit had a deliciously scary, not quite sure, edge to it. Am very intrigued, so, onward to the next bit. Jane
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 From A Dark Place
Safe, ish!! I hope, though as Dean said Margaret doesn't mean any harm to him, I guess she just wants to be found. And David and Linda are just totally perplexed as to what is happening with Dean and their hotel. Looking forward to the next chappie, which will be tomorrow as I've had my tea and its early bedtime. Jane :)
Author's Response: I'm so enjoying your reviews! They're like a little story themselves.
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 12 Puzzle Piece
Ack!! I gave myself one more chappie before tea and bed, and now it looks like I'll have to foresake the tea and read another chappie. What a tease you are indeed. Poor Dean feeling and seeing it from Margarets POV. I just hope that Sam finds him sooner than later as he's not appearing to be in any great shape. I can understand Margarets need too, either she or her boyfriend are buried in that wall she kissed and wants them be found. But that doesn't explain why people where knocked off balcony's, unless that was her trying to take them over, and, as she said of Dean, he's weak and they were not. Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 11 A Delicate Balance
Oh that was very good. I once wrote a POV for a multiple personality, arguing within itself, it was incrediably difficult to put to paper, so I understand your concern with this; but I think you definitely cracked it. This is where I scream for Sam to come back early. It's not looking very good from Dean's POV. Hopefully, the fever will consume him and he'll drop and she'll just have to leave him alone. God, he's so vulnearable! Love it. Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 10 A Daze Work
He's not doing too good is our Dean. A poorly head, hand, stomach, throat and I bet you he will still want to do the grand tour, with Margaret probably in tow waiting a chance to pounce again. Worried, I am! Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 Abyss
::shivers:: That was a bit on the spooky side. Margaret taking over his body like that, but at least Sam was able to erm... well, knock her out of him quick enough. Well, it sounds like Margaret gets her kicks out of other peoples pain and we all know that Dean has plenty of that hidden away inside of him. I wonder if Sam will think to research Margaret's name tomorrow, and it would appear that Dean remembers it all, but still unsure if it was real. Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 Are you okay?
HOWL!! '...like watching dumplins bob to the surface of a stew.' very droll, I loved that description. I like the filler chapters, a necessary to make the action, I always think. Dean's going to have a hard time of it, when the action does arrive, 'cos not only is he a poorly bunny he's got the smell from hell up his nose and that can't be good. He appears. to me, all unsettled,. Hopefully, sleep will help. Loving the description of the stairs, I was pidgeon toeing it in my head as they walked up them. So, yes, I am back not so late now though ;) Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 Surprise
With the car failing to start I reckon the old ghost/s are wanting the boys to stay. Not sure if I like this smell that only Dean can whiff, its a bit too Dean exclusive for the comfort zone. Love the descriptions of town and hotel, a place to stay if it weren't haunted, huh. The corridor sounds a bit onimous, something to do with the doctors experiments perhaps? 1 am now bed is calling, I did well though, more tomorrow when the dark starts to descend, hell I can't wait; bring it on as they say. jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 Contamination
Oh hell!! What a place to leave it, I now need to know what the heck they are looking at, what a tease! I had to laugh at Dean's reaction from the sneeze but at the same time it really wasn't funny, he worries me. Great imagery with with t-shirt being stripped off i have to say! The hotel sounds like its got quiet a history, lots of death and intrigue, plenty to keep the boys busy. Roll on the next chapter. Jane :)
Author's Response: My God...don't you ever sleep? I can't keep up with you. I just get one review read and there's another one! I'm glad you're enjoying it, it gets worse form where you are.
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 5 Mourning After
HOWL!! I've joined Dean in a sugar fix, chocolate. Hell, I need more, fic that is, not chocolate. So, one more chappie, then bed, defnitely. Dean needs rest, lots of it, I just hope that he gets it, and soon, his poor hand, and not to mention his fragile state of mind need time out. Jane :)
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 Inventory
Oh they are both hurting so much, but Dean is really down there on the floor. Was wincing as the stiches went in and hells bells I know that feeling of wanting to fall into bed with your clothes on, dead beat, curling in on that pillow. I was so there with Dean. Okay, its well late, hence the kinda relating to Dean thing, but I must go onto the next chapter, because darn you make it just so readable and un-puttadownable, and I just so need to know what comes next!! But then its BED cos my kid has a footie game tomorrow and its an early start. Curse the fab SPN writer! LOL. jane :)
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