Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
I found your story yesterday and couldn't stop reading until I'd gotten to your cliffhanger (and you do them so well) Gosh, poor babies. They've got bruises upon bruises, but hey, anything for each other. I like your Dean speak. Think you've gotten it down pat. Okay, I'll be biting my nails until I see your next post. Poor me, with no fingernails.
Author's Response: Nilah - dont bite them all - better save a couple for tomorrow- hahaha!
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Wow! I am new to this but I thought that was really a great chapter. But can ya do me a favor and lay of the poor Dean torture. I mean the poor guy has been thru enough don't ya think. Love it though.
Author's Response: D6 - Glad you found us and I am pretty new to all this too. I think you'll find a lot of good fic around here- most of it even better than mine. Sorry bout the torture!Dean - but trust me - I love heroes so theres just enough to justify what Dean is about to do next.
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
wow, great chapter. loved the action, cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks Devonshire - you wont have to wait much longer!
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Eeep! Okay, that was a good cliffie. A good fight, too. And I very much want to see how you end this before we see Kripke's version. This has been a good ride!
Author's Response: Thanks GS - I hope you like my version of the ending - Im trying real hard to post it before tomorrow night -Im pretty sure my version wont be anything like Kripkes -
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Well, that was damned naughty. I thought you'd finished it, and nope, more torture - for me, that is hahahaha!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Lovely fight! That last shot with the pole is gonna leave a mark! Nice verbal blow from Dean to Gordon about Gordon's sister. If that had been on the show I would yelled, "NICE SHOT!" at the tv as I am prone to do on a fairly frquent basis.
Author's Response: T - gotta feel good about you complimenting my fight scene- hope you still feel the same after the last part.
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Oh, I so love this line: “Don’t get up dude. I got this totally under control!" You can just hear Dean saying it! And yes. That was a truly evil cliffie.
Author's Response: Thanks Iris - I am so happy that folks like this story - especially all my friends at VS- the end will be here soon!
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
OMG, those poor tortured boys! Wow, you're really keeping us in suspense with this one!!!
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
Yes, that was evil. Very evil, Tree...very, very evil! But damn, if it wasn't delicious! You know how to keep me on the edge of my seat. You are doing such a great job with Gordon and are making him that much better for me. Now, we just need Dean to get back up or Sam to find some way to kick Gordon's ass! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks SNSam - Well- the torture is almost over - trying real hard to wrap this up tomorrow- hope you like the end!
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/07 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics
That's just evil, you bitch! So much sufferiing...excuse me while I find my rock to crawl under.
Author's Response: HT - You know that I like my heroes beaten but victorious - you love the end - I promise!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
Tree, how can you leave us like this, shattering glass falling on the boys. Are they ok. The suspense is killing me. Gordon must die, die, die. I'm looking forward for your next chapter, can't wait.
Author's Response: Oceane - come on- I might like to hurt em- but you know they'll be ok in the end- almost there! Hang on!
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
love your story, and love your very evil gordon. i hope they dont kill him in hunted, i would love to see him more. he's just such a good bad guy.
Author's Response: Thanks Devonshire- and the more i write this- the more I want Gordon dead- dont know if he should stay or not in the show- if he lives- u know he'd keep coming back and the boys already have enough crap hunting them- Hmmm- we'll see soon i guess --- PS. thanks for Stalker- lovin it!
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
Loved this:
"Paybacks a bitch, but she's also one of my best friends..." HA! This is great -- looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! - that line just seemed like something sooo Dean - spit in the devil's face ya know! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: PlanB (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
You are the master of the cliffhanger. Keep up the suspense! I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks PB - glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
You know, I was about to resort to pleading to you for an update and you gave it to us! And may I say, an awesome job! I really want to kill Gordon...he is such an evil SOB! I love the torture you're giving us but I hope it gets turned around on Gordon soon. I sense Dean needs to take out a lil frustration and I know just how he'll do it... Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks SNSam for being patient with me - and yes- I have no intention of dragging this out much further- oh- and you are right- the can opener is on the can and the whoop ass is about to be served!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
Bitch
Author's Response: Only from you - is that a compliment! Thanks T!
Author's Response: well- actually you and HT! haha!
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 07/01/07 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
Haha, something as serene as orchids and something so chaotic as shattering glass, what an image. Poor bleeding boys. No snakes in this green house, is there? I saw a bad scifi movie, LOL. Orchids and snakes, bad combo...
Author's Response: Hmm- snakes- thats a thought- but nah- even I am not that cruel. Thanks bunches- and I kinda liked the blood and orchids ref too.
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 07/01/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids
And once again, Tree torture's fellow writers with her evilness. Good job yer my buddy hahaha... And the glass...OUCH!
Author's Response: haha- all for u girl- all for u!
Reviewer: irismay42 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/07 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek
Holy CRAP, Tree!!!!!!!!!! Not sure I could have coped with much more Sammy!Torture... Made my toes cock up (as my Grandma used to say...!) Funny, I can handle Hurt!Dean... Not so good with Hurt!Sam!!! Superb chapter. Gordon - your Gordon - is a work of truly evil genius (yours, his and a touch of Mr Kripke's...!) And you killed Lenore!! Gah!
Author's Response: ooh- toe cocking! I must have done something right! haha! Thanks for the kind words Iris!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/01/07 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek
OMG!Terrific story so far. The last chapter was intense in torture. Gordon is a sick bastard. Poor Sam, poor Dean. What a cliffhanger, can't wait for more. Great work Tree.
Author's Response: Oceane - glad to see you over here! Thanks for the kind review - glad you're enjoying the story - hope that last wasnt too intense for ya!
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek
OMG! WOW! What an awesome chapter! My stomach is in knots rights now. And by the way...that's a great thing! Way to create the suspense and to make me hate Gordon even more than I do now. That being said, the boys need to get it together and get out of there! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks again -SNSam - yep - I'm writing this thing and hating Gordon more and more with each word I write - Glad you're liking it! Thanks for the kind review
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Motivation
I don't know what you're upset about with this chapter! I thought it was great and it tells us what happened after Dean was knocked out. It was a great fill-in chpater and I very much enjoyed it!
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 09:52 PM · On: Premeditation
A wonderful start! I am so excited to see a Gordon Walker story! He has been my favorite "villian" on this season of Supernatural so far! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks SNSAM - I really hate Gordon too and have been thinking about this storyline since Bloodlust was over.
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek
Holy Crap! Okay, I was worried when there was a bloody fingerprint on the note... and then you added BARBEDFREAKINWIRE and Indian torture... but when Dean reached for the wire cutters I was like 'Dude, do you THINK the very thing you're needing would just be SITTING there for you?!' Poor guy, so focused on saving his brother -- clouds his hunters judgement and now... Now, I supposed I anxiously await the next installment...
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 01/01/07 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek
Holy crap! I now know whose gonna be head torturer when I take over as dictator. I do appreciate originality and style! Barb wire is a nice touch. I had a barb wire fence collapse on me one time. Major owie.
Author's Response: I knew you'd appreciate the barb wire T - stay tuned its just starting
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