Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/05/10 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
Witches---Dean's very favorite villain to toast. Clever putting the bit about Bobby threatening to shoot John in the ass. That gives us a better idea of when this takes place. Thanks for clearing up the ghost story about the soldiers. I wanted to know more about it.
Author's Response: Oooh, I must've been good - a shannon reviewing spree! Awesome! Glad you liked this one - it was a real departure to write from the outsider PoV; I've read so many wonderful fics, I just hoped I could do the style justice! But Beth was a very engaging character to write, and the rest of the scene became so vivid in my head because of that, that it was a real joy to do. The ghost story really resonated with me when I found it - the similarities to the boys' relationship were so striking, and to their history as well I just had to use it! One day, I'll go to that house... maybe one day, the boys and Beth'll go there too... now you've gone and got the bunnies plotting! lol Thanks always! Your reviews make me grin ear to ear! Cal
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/05/10 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
"God," I murmur and he does that snort-laugh again."No, Sorry." That was so unexpected and funny that I had to laugh. And then he prays and I laughed even harder. That was so very Sam-like. I like how her opinion of Dick/Richard shifts after she realizes what he's endured and why he has reason to be a jerk. That's so human, to see people differently once we gain compassion for them because of all they've suffered. Fabulols description of how Beth feels when the creature begins to take her. The confusion between Sam and Dean about how to dispatch the creature is also very realistic. We've seen the boys have such moments often in the past five seasons. I could picture the entire scene in my head as I read it.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/05/10 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
I grew out of self-pity right about the time I grew out of thrash metal and getting through a tube of black eyeliner every week. This tells us so much about the heroine and what she's been through to find herself. Your descriptions engage all the senses. It's amazing! I feel like I'm there. Kudos!
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 30/04/10 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 3
I am so late on reading this! But thanks for asking 'my' question on what was being summon. I've got to say I never heard of Aztathoth (got to make some research myself) but the explanation works for me! Glad that Beth decided to go back to school and carry on with her life, just that probably hit Sam a little to close. Really liked the conversation between Dean and Beth too. Anyway, loved it! Thanks for this one and I'll see you on the next story (that I already saw but haven't start reading yet. Real life...) Dany
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it, and the explanation for the summoning - I'm always wary of just dumping a shedload of information in readers' laps, or over-explaining things, so it's great to know that it was still intriguing without being too vague. Hope you enjoy the next one - it was a real joy to write! Cal
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 09/04/10 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hi, thanks for this last chapter, I really enjoyed reading this fic.
I'm looking forward to your next story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Look forward to seeing you on the next one...
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 08/04/10 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
The story turned out so well! I love the final conversation between Dean and Beth. I think that really pulled it together. I'm sorry about the font- I forgot to change it back to white when I was done :) THANK you for calling me the queen of OC! I'll take that as a compliment for sure!!!
Author's Response: Oops, well spotted. I had a nightmare posting last night, so I skipped my usual preview for the final try... Ta! And it most definately IS a compliment! Maggie rocks! lol
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 04/04/10 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ok, now I'm curious! What the heck were those people trying to summon? Is Beth alright? And I have to wait till next week to know? Arghhh! Dany
Author's Response: Yep, 'fraid you just gotta wait. heh. Curiosity is good though - lets me know I've done my job on this one! Hope you enjoy the last chapter on Thursday, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/04/10 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
Weird, seriously weird but fascinating at the same time. Glad Beth found Sam and together they found Dean in time, but what on earth happened at the end. What were the baddies trying to summon? and was it what transfered into Beth only to be expelled again? Really hoping the epilogue I'm looking forward to explains everything in simple layman terms, since I think I can only cope with simple.
Author's Response: heh, yeah, it took on a strange life all it's own, this chapter. Hopefully, everything is explained in the last chapter, though I can't guarantee it's simple! Somehow, it never quite seems to work out that way, no matter how hard I try! Glad you were intrigued though, and I hope you enjoy the end. Ta!
Reviewer: ShiLewis1990 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/10 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your story so far. I hope to read more.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, I enjoyed that. Best thing I've read in a good while. Not sure which bit I like best: The spooky description of their prison; the little clues about Beth being special but the description of Dean as beautiful by an outsider certainly ranks up there. Always enjoy a 3rd party pov and you have done a very good job with it. Definitely looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks hun! Gotta say, describing Dean from the outsider's PoV was one of the best bits to write! Hope you enjoy the next chapter...
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
No, no, no! You can't leave me here! Where's the rest of it???? See what happens when you do something you never done before? It turns out great! Hope you update soon, pleaaaase?! Dany
Author's Response: I do love a good cliffie... *evil laugh* Don't worry though - the story is complete, and will post weekly. And thanks! I was a teensy bit nervous about this one... so it's great to know you're liking it!
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 26/03/10 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant start, loved it!
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