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Reviews For A Single Breath
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

This was GREAT!!!!!

as always, your story gives a one, two punch and keeps going-OUTSTANDING!!!!!

I love the banter -always spot on and true Winchester thru and thru....

Poor Sammy, he never catches a break..but Dean is there to help and care for him..

Emotionally charged, action at every ture , and our boys , as usual in the thick of things-AWESOME writing!!!

this was truly a pleasure to read!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

The apple lobbing had me laughing out loud as well as the Keebler Cookie Tree reference.  :)  NIce job.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 13/03/10 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

An excellent story, i enjoyed this so much, loved all of the banter lol.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 13/03/10 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loved Dean's rant back at the motel room after Sam made him promise not to hunt the creature without him - lol. And could really sympathise with Dean at having to make that promise, especially since Sam had gone out there on his own.

Oh, and I had to have a giggle at Dean's reaction when Sam told him what it was - lol. 

What a mean little S.O.B. that was. And it killed that farmer - poor Sam taking on that guilt, realising that the thing had followed him. 

I'm thinking they're going to need a few days off for Sammy to get better under big brother's watchful eye.

Nice one, hun. 

Jules

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 13/03/10 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, Sammy! Man, how the hell did he make it back to the motel without crashing? That darned Winchester stubbornness.

Could well imagine Dean absolutely schitzing over the state of the Impala, and then doing a complete 360 when he slammed into the room to find Sam curled up and obviously in a bad way. 

Big brother to the rescue. Hopefully he'll wait for Sam's explanation and theory on the not-leprechaun before he goes hunting its arse. 

Great start, hun - glad to see you back on the boards. We've missed you!

And how's that wine? Poured a glass for me yet?

Jules

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