Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/05/10 07:08 PM · On: Adeline
Oooohh! So creepy! I thought it was very interesting until the last part. then it got downright spooky. It gave me shivers. Way to go!
Author's Response: HEY!!! I LOVE CREEPY AND SPOOKY STORIES! and it gave you shivers!!! *beams* *hugs you tight* haha, I was kind of worried about this story, and if people will last until the end of it... idk, I just thought that maybe people will get bored somewhere in the middle and stop reading and never get to the punch line! LOL :))))) thank you soooo much!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/10 07:30 PM · On: Adeline
That was very well written. I didn't have a clue that it was a ghost/spirit watching the boys until the end.
Author's Response: HEY!!! thank you!!!! well you know what they say!?: leave the big punch till last! don't reveal everything in the first few lines! LOL 'm soo happy it worked AND that you liked this!!! thank you!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 12/03/10 10:57 PM · On: Adeline
Good job on that twist!! One always has to watch out for creepy little girls!! The motherly advise for Adeline was right on the mark! LOL
Author's Response: HEY! oh man, DO I love making twists... and I love creepy things!!!! yey!!! and hahhah, Kripke always says that there's nothing more creepy then kids, especially little girls! LOL aww thank you! yeah... Adeline has been dead since like idk 18th, 19th century and things like that were probably told to little girls...well, 'm just glad we don't live in that time anymore! LOL thank you so much for reading this!!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 10/03/10 08:50 AM · On: Adeline
That was great, I loved the sooo creepy child showing what she was at the end...nice one Jacq
Author's Response: HEY! wheee me loooooooves creepy stuff and I mean Kripke himself said that there is nothing more creepy then kids! :))) thank you so much for reading this! LOL, yeah...well you know what they say: save the best for last! LOL, :) hugs, S.
Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 09/03/10 12:06 PM · On: Adeline
Creepy kid monsters...*shudders* I thought she was too creepy to be a real kid. :) The Weechesters were adorable. :)
Author's Response: hey! ROFL..... well she has been dead for a really long time, and her Mommy is kinda still stuck in their century so yeah... she's kinda creepy, looking at her from the POV of someone who lives in this century! :))) and Kripke always says: there's nothing more scary then creepy little girls and I totally agree with him! :))) aww thank you! I wish we'd get more flashbacks at times when the boys were kids! :))) maybe in S6 we will! :) thank you so much for reading! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 09/03/10 08:15 AM · On: Adeline
Didn't have a clue what was going on right up to the ending lol, great fic.
Author's Response: HEY! hahahaha.... then I did my job awesomely! I wanted this to be one of THOSE stories where the big punch line comes at the very end and just sucks the air out of your lungs! heeee thank you so much for reading this! hugs, S.
Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 09/03/10 06:18 AM · On: Adeline
So don't want to know her mommy! But I guess I don't have to worry about it 'cause I'm pretty sure John was the one doing the limb riping! Oh, and you're 5 year old Sammy sounds adorable! Dany
Author's Response: HEY!! Man, her Mommy scared the crap out of me and I don't know her either! LOL..talk about weird! I was told that I should do a sequel..'m still considering it... because I mean I think Adeline is kinda cute in her weird, creepy way! LOL :)))) so maybe I'll put in John riping limbs and stuff scene in there.. OR NOT!!! because NOTHING is ever the way it seems to be! :))))
I have nooo clue how a 5 year old boy acts and stuff, so you saying that just... *squee* thank you! thank you so very much for reading this!!!! hugs, S.
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