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Reviewer: Jenn (Signed) · Date: 11/04/10 07:31 PM · On: Dead Inside

I love how you format things, Roweena. You always seem to try something new, even if it's just a small something. The "There are times..." is so awesome, and I feel like a big dork because I can't think of another way to state that.
I so love formatting.
Also love the way you string words together. They sort of tear at you here, because you use such vivid language. It's not just written, but painted. You paint a picture with words, and it's beautiful.
This here was my favorite:
There are times when you are helplessly looking on as your inner emptiness claws its way out, gnashing, tearing and ripping at your heart until it's nothing but a crimson mess of lost memories and feelings.
Great job.
<3 Jenn
(sorry if there is giant font here, I couldn't fix the review)

Author's Response:
Jesus, jenn. Do you know you just made me cry??? I needed a cheer up, very bad. I go on UnGen and I find this? maaaan.... I am being serious here, CRYING.
I dunno what to say other than your words are very very very much appreciated. The line you quoted is my fav too. I must have rewritten it like a million times... Glad it worked for you too!
I paint with my words? Dude, I swear that's the lovliest thing anyone ever said to me... And to get these words of praise when I mostly sweat over my dictionary to find the right expression... well that just makes it more than worth the while.
Formatting, yeah I do try something new every now and then, heh. Again, glad you like that.
In closing, thanks so much babe. I can now go to bed with a much lighter heart!
Hugs, Ilka

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 17/02/10 03:59 AM · On: Dead Inside

Hey Hunny
Poor Dean, he's feeling blue, perhaps he needs to get out into the country and feed carrots to the donkleys and Azazel the sheep! Heehee
Was good to see ya Ilka
Bev xx

Author's Response:
Good lord, I missed your review completely. How could I? I is such a bad girl.... My apologies!
LOL. He might have had a better weekend with us up there, right? He's in a very bad place right now... *sniff*

Hugs, Ilka xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 16/02/10 03:52 PM · On: Dead Inside

You made me cry again, but i loved this, it was beautifuly written.

Reviewer: Sarahzilla (Signed) · Date: 16/02/10 03:26 PM · On: Dead Inside

Wow. Just... wow.
To put into words those kind of feelings is a huge achievement. This is a beautiful piece.

Author's Response:
Thanks hunny. Weird, musta missed some notifications... didn't know you reviewed me. Sorry for that.
I am blushing here like crazy. Heehee. 5 stars and such kind words... glad you liked it. It was an attempt at some sort of poetic prose... if that makes any sense at all.
Cheers, Ilka

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 16/02/10 02:48 PM · On: Dead Inside

Very stark. But fitting given what we've seen. Nice work.

Author's Response:
oooh, hi Nessa. Haven't seen you in my reviews in a long time. Thanks for that. That's a rare treat!
I know, it is very dark and desperate (hence the tissue warning). But yeah, it fits his current state of mind. I hope it won't last too long!
Yay for season 6 again! Booooyaaaah!
Hugs, Ilka

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 16/02/10 02:37 PM · On: Dead Inside

I think we posted our stories at almost the same time :) Awesome! I love this- especially the end. Isn't it true that when you are REALLY at the bottom, then you have to reach faith? At the same time, Dean KNOWS that even the angels say that God is dead! For him, it really is a desperate cry. *sniffle*

Author's Response:
HAHA! Jules, I reviewed you too! LOL. This is awesome!
And yeah, it must have cost him dearly to call out for help. And I would hate to see his prayer go unanswered...
Thx for reviewing, sweetie! And of course stars are always welcome!
Hugs, Ilka

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