Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oooh he is remembering stuff! Drawn to the house...their house! hahaha love his reaction when he realizes she is a psychic and the disbelief he has...another Dean trait! And I loved the whack you with a spoon call back to the Epi! love the puzzle analogy, very fitting. wow! my heart is pounding with Drake on that reveal! Loved that you used the kids to do it! and the litte boy playing firefighter was so perfect! Poor Drake is so shake by all this!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 20
The scene with Bear...another heart-breaker! I was yelling "Turn around Bear, tell him you didn't mean it!" but he didn't listen... I LOVE MISSOURI!!! You wrote her very well! Poor Sam! I am totally with him on the wanting to punch John..tho it's not John's fault he doesn't remember Dean...but come on trust your son! With all you've seen...why couldn't it be possible? Oh No! dead people with Drake's name scrawled in blood on the wall...SO NOT GOOD!! Fred Hinkle gave me a chuckle! hehehe Oh NO! that was Jamie's parents! SHIT Jamie is possessed! this is SO not good!!!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok not sure why but Cas telling Sam he reeks and should consider taking a shower made me crack up! I LOVE the new super improved Cas! and how he is all cryptic...typical Cas...when Sam asks about him being juiced up! love the comeback with Cas saying he won't heal him if he is bothered by the why of his powers return. I love how Drake is all amazed that John slugged Lowey to get his necklace back! I also like how he turned the convo back on John with the drinking comparaison and how John is like don't you judge me, meanwhile he is full on judging Drake...But John is kinda a "do as I say not as I do" kinda guy. Loved the bed and breakfast comment! Poor Drake and poor Jamie! everything is so messed up! The Sam and John reunion was great! Uh oh where is Drake going???
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 18
More Drake-John banter! hehehe Drake is snarky love that! Poor guy jonesing for a fix tho! I can't believe he gave Lowey that necklace! I think Drake is gonna need some detox! John saved Drake from himself! I love that! and I love how John seems unsure why he does it...I mean why does he care so much about a kid he just met who is makin him crazy? It's very telling. Drake all sneaky getting Missouri's number! Another great chapter!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
Poor Drake! He's so broken! You are beating him down! Love the scene in Sam's room with Drake tryin to figure out what happened! "Well, one thing’s for certain, it was definitely not a Wendigo," Nice banter between Drake and John! Love how he is in John's face! Hahaha love the John McClane comments John totally is him at times and he totally prolly could take McClane! Love that Drake's Dean soul is hurt by the fact that John doesn't remember him! And I love that John seems more affected by Drakes comments than he is wanting to let on...like in his soul it hurts him as his soul remembers who Dean is! Great chapter!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bless Drake for tryin to protect Bear! WOOHOO! CASTIEL YOU ROCK!!! na na na na na! *thumbs nose at Lucifer! Seriously, this is a frickin roller coaster ride! One miute I'm laughin my ass off the next I'm all teary! BEAR!!! This chapter has broken my heart!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hahaha love the scene with them checking out his trunk! Maybe he makes ice cream! TO FUNNY! "Dude, libraries are creepy all full of books an’ nerdy geeks who actually wanna read them." Hehehe Nice part with Lucifer and Sammy! Sam is channeling Dean's snark!!! hehehe his aftershave *shakes head* Kudos to Sam for resisting the blood! OMG the scene with the 3 of them tryin to figure out the computer! Crackin up here! reminded me of Zoolander but BETTER! Seriously I would have to paste that whole scene here it is ALL TOO awesomely funny! OH NO!!! Not Cindy! Dude you can't do that to Bear!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 14
Ahh Drake the invincible...*shakes head* picking a fight with the security guard...not good... Yay! Bear! Loves me my Bear! Intervention!!! "I was gonna ask the same thing but then I just figured it was some sort of drug thing I wouldn't understand, so I left it alone." hehehe Bear! LMAO the handcuff part made me burst out laughing! hehehe and the shirtless thing... Poor Sammy! Ugh so Drake inadvertantly led Lucifer to Sam...not good...SO NOT GOOD!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love the Missouri part of the convo, it's similarities to when they figure out about her in Home. Lol Bear the philosopher! Hehehe loved how it starts off all Forest Gump and the just goes way off! I love that they are calling each other on their shit! The back and forth about the suicide atempts and how Drake tries to prepare Sam for what's gonna happen when they get to the hospital... The whole waiting room scene is very Drake channeling Dean! Wanting answers NOW! Say what you want little man but you care about Sam!!! UGH Lowey! Can someone please kill his ass! Tell me he gets killed! grr stay away from my Drake! *clears throat* I mean...Drake...*sheepish grin* Love the Drake-Dean talk! hehehe Drake thinking he is hallucinating! great stuff!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
Poor Sammy! Drake defo still has Dean’s Winchester hard-headed streak refusing to leave Sam of course! Nice way of killing Death, love the idea of his eyes reflecting things back to them making them see who and what he wants them to see. Sammy all trying to save the day and then Drake running to his rescue! I had no confusion with the knife thing, but thanks for pointing it out just in case as it could have been…confusing lol
Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 12/05/10 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 23
Glad you made it back for an update - great as always, love this story. K.
Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 12/05/10 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 23
I was afraid you had abandoned the story and I was determined not to beg. I'm glad I don't have to. I wonder what it will take to convince Drake . . . Confirmation from Michael in the form of John? Ezeckial? Can't wait for it to happen - and can't help but wonder what will come after . . .
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 11
DON'T DO IT SAMMY!!! This is so not good...I really have to go now and I can't read more until later...seriously cliffies are evil! That said here are some other parts I liked from this chapter before you ended it with such an avil cliffie. Heart lurching into his throat, Drake hastily closed the compartment lid, and slammed the trunk. Sam the Satanistic psycho serial killer is my new best buddy. Shit, I'm so screwed! THIS made me burst out laughing! Great chapter! I am so loving Bear...can we have more Bear? he makes me smile I love the relationship between him and Drake! Drake move your ass and get back to Sam would ya!!!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 10
Dude! This is no better a place to stop than the last chapter! You are killing me here I am gonna be late! But I can't leave not knowing...Damn you!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
Shit shit shit! I was gonna stop after this chapter and come back later...but now... Good thing I didn't read this when you first put it up...cuz I gotta tell ya I would not have been happy to wait for an update! Looks like I'm reading another chapter beore I go!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awww Sammy! Poor guy is hurting! What is it about guys that makes them say the first thing that comes to their head? Seriously, stop, count to ten and think before you speak boys! Hehehe on to the next chapter!
Reviewer: broswinchester (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
*sigh* this chapter was quite the heart-breaker...everyone having their own lil emo moment ;) It was nice to get some more insight into Jake. I loved how Gary seemed to put him in perspective...as Drake has him up pretty high on a pedestal and not that Gary took him down from it but he did show that Jake had faults. All-in-all a great chapter! Sorry it took me so long to get back to this!
Reviewer: Lbdba (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 22
Excellent Chapter!
Reviewer: eeyore (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 22
Hi, I just read your entire in one sitting and I have to say it is awesome. I love your storyline and the characters' interactions with each other. I think you are doing an excellent job with Drake as parts of him are Dean, but he doesn't seem to be completely Dean. I also like the effort you put into Drake's friends.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 22
*squeal of deelight!* What a tremendous chapter! Drake calling Bear and Bear forgetting everything except that his friend needs him was surprisinjg and heart-warming. "Drake, what the hell are you doing there? "Th-think mm'dyin'." What a gut punch. My breath actually caught in my throat. "No, you're not...at the moment, I'd have to say I'm your own personal Savior." The Calvary to the rescue. yay, Cas!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 21
OMG!!!!!!!! Luuuuuv it! all the little clues just pile up until they bury Drake. I also thought it was perfect that the little kids from his old house told him who he is (or was). All the snippets of memory and the pieces of conversations that he's had with people bear down on him until he can't logically deny the truth.
Reviewer: dreamlitnight (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 22
Great update! I love the kids telling Drake who he really is and now Cas coming to save him. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/04/10 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 20
Drake gets a little taste of being a Winchester, playing on the other side of the law. Cool! And you threw in the fact that Drake didn't like traveling and we all know that Dean loves the open road and driving his baby. Just one more little touch that shows you put a lot of thought into your characters. I like discovering the ways that Dean and Drake differ and how they are similar. I wasn't expecting Jamie to kill her parents. Wow! Geez, Drake's life is beginning to suck as badly as Dean's did. I love that you ended one of the segments with Sam's, "he took the damn car!" I had to laugh at that one---too funny. I could just imagine how pissed Sam was.
Reviewer: Tangled up in blue (Signed) · Date: 16/04/10 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 21
Waiting patiently. Waiting, . .. Waiting . .. Waiting . . . Take your time . . . (drums fingers on desk) No rush (taps pen erratically)
Anyway, I love this story. wonder if Cas will show up now Drake is freaking out. He always seemed to show when Dean was freaking - plus it might be fun to add on the shock of Cas being an angel. so . . .
Waiting. . . . Patiently . .. . just let the creative juices flow as they will - It's not as if I don't have a life -I'm not like checking the updates twice a day cause you know, that would be . . .uh pathetic . . uh . . . yeah.
Reviewer: StellaJane07 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/10 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 21
Hi! I just wanted to say that I really like your story! I can't wait to find out what happens!
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