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Reviewer: lnimpala67 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hey this story is really interesting! It's really cool reading about Sam and Dean with a sister! Plz update soon!!! I'm hooked!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start, I can only review this one for now as I was just browsing. I will get round to reading and reviewing all of them though.
I love ur name by the way, Tall Tales was hilarious. Purplenurples! I wish I thought of that. Lol

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

good,excellent!!!!
more please!!!!!!!
keep going!!!please
update soon!!!

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Carley? Winchester? Nice! It's kinda new for me to think that the Winchester brothers have a sister, and reading your fanfic, it actually also have a wee!chester part!
Gonna wait for the next part, am really curious on who the guy in Carley's house is. Husband? Or a guy similar to second father Bobby Singer?
Hope you can update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

Nice! My curiosty is TOTALLY peaked! Keep it up kiddo!

Author's Response:
So does that mean this sound okay? :) Thanks gen!

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great story!!! Speachless... I'm getting hooked, so please write some more asap!!!!!
kika

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

good
waiting for more?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:)

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

The story is great...but hte grammar needs some work. You've got the bones down for a really great story but it needs to be fleshed out a little more.
Do you have a beta-reader?
If you'd like I can help you out a bit. I'm no pro but I can corret your grammar and maybe make some suggestions on the fleshing out. Let me know.
Gengen

Author's Response:
No, I don't have a beta-reader. And YES, I would REALLY appreciate the help with the grammar and fleshing out.
That's usually why I never finish stories that I start...because I always have problems with the grammar and fleshing out. Actually, I'm kind of comtemplating maybe just getting rid of this one and starting another one. I actually already started it but haven't posted it on this particular site. But if you think you can give me a hand with this one, maybe I can keep it going. :)
Thank you!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

Interesting start I look forward to knowing how the boys have a sister that was never mentioned.
Keep it up!

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

oh my gosh!!!!!
cool, she is a hunter too!!!! wow!
post more please!!!!

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow, this is great. I'm also writting a stroy with a sister, but it's diffrent
good luck!!!
~kika

Author's Response:
Thanks! Good luck to you too.
Yours is pretty good so far too. :)

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hurry with the next chapter please
I thought this one was funny

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

i waiting for more!!!!!!
great story!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

good, but short.
waiting for more . soonnnnn!!!!

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sam & Dean with a sister -- can't wait to meet her. Clever idea of Sam having a GPS secretly put in his computer. Looking forward to see what Dean said to make her keep the bracelet. Typical Sam and Dean: Dean impatient and Sam irritated.

Author's Response: Thanks for thee review!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting beginning, looking to see where this leads, bambers;)

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

til now impresive!!!! now u have my atention!!!!
now, i am curious!! what is goin t happen????
please don't be long to posted!

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