Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed)
08/05/07 11:07 AM · On:
I really enjoyed this story! Dean was definitely the protective big brother putting Sammy on that counter and then watching hm throughout the night.
Author's Response: thanks for your review, .....been a log time since i've had this much fun.....next one will be a bit more ambitious and hopefully improved
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed)
08/05/07 09:08 AM · On:
Very good work! Keep it up I hope you keep writing because you're very good at it!
Author's Response: thanks, gengen ....stunned how these things kind of write themselves.........hopefully better one next week......
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed)
08/05/07 08:13 AM · On:
very cool!! rats are definitely on my list of things i wouldn't want to see!! and believe me i've seen several grown men running from those darn scary creatures...and i still laugh at how they left me, the only girl in the group behind in their flight to get away!! loved that you gave Dean a fear of them!! so very awesome!! great job!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Bambers, can't get enough of you guys ....told terry the yard will soon require a machete and the cats are learning to vacuum.....i used to own large reptile and would have knock out the rats b4 feeding ....totally repulsive creatures...guys can be such wimps unlike our Dean (and Sammy)....thanks for your review
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
08/05/07 08:04 AM · On:
Well, you've creeped me out - Good Job - K
Author's Response: feeling a bit high being reviewed by my favorite authors.....i know you guys are taking pity on a newbie.....but your wonderful group are my inspiration......terry dragged this one out of me and polished the edges in a BIG way...hopefully next one will be much better
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed)
08/05/07 07:31 AM · On:
This was so much fun. I love stories that give a glimpse of their youth. I could see it all in my mind; Dean perched on the fridge and Sam on the counter. Rats are such nasty business. Thank you for sharing your story and welcome to fanfiction. I am really looking forward to what you write next.
Author's Response: thank you for your kindness....it looks a bit raw but I promise to improve......Yours are fantastic ...i want to aspire to be as great as Terry and Tree...but that will take a long while.......appreciate your gentle encouraging words.........loved your bio page, by the way
Reviewer: fredo (Signed)
08/05/07 07:29 AM · On:
i thought i only hated spiders and clowns, but after that i may add rats to my list ! Nice litle story, hope this first attempt will be followed by many others, see you around...
Author's Response: thanks, fredo ... your reviews are always so nice to read.....it was nice of you to give a 'newbie' a chance....i've almost completed a new one that i hope will also be to your liking..just want Terry to do a quick read first... god bless
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed)
08/05/07 07:13 AM · On:
Yea! I'm so proud!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Terry...for making a canvas purse(got a ways to go to "silk" ) out of a sow's ear....... your "sight" and encouragement AND added input were my impetus to even start on this path....