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Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Guilt is the very nerve of sorrow

Hey hunny

that was really nice. it wasn't all hearts and flowers but realistic and earthy.

You had their emotions down well too and the dialogue was recognisable Sam and Dean.

Nice job.

bev x



Author's Response:

Hi Bev!!

Thank you for saying that! I don't think the Winchesters are ever going to be all flowery and stuff, but they have their moments. This isn't one of them though. 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Guilt is the very nerve of sorrow

Or perhaps you could have called it "guilt is the very nerve of a Winchester"....

Author's Response:

Heya..

LOL that's a good idea! It seems to be a trait for the Winchester family!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Guilt is the very nerve of sorrow

Nice job!


Author's Response:

Heya

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Guilt is the very nerve of sorrow

I liked this, well done,



Author's Response:

Heya..

Thank you! I try! :)

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