Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/10 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great story! I really enjoyed that Bobby and Castiel were also in it. They are my favorite supporting characters. I like that on the show, Cas has finally started noticing Sam. It didn't seem like he paid him much attention in season 4 as far as actually including Sam in things. I have recently learned how to read the reviews, and I saw that on my last review where I mentioned the first story, you asked if I had read it. Yes, I had. I might not have left a review for it. Sometimes I barely have time to finish a story and no time to review. I am trying to be better about that, but as you know, life can be busy and complicated. Again, great story, and I look forward to reading the next story you post.
Author's Response: Well thanks for taking the time to review this one! I am with you on the busy and complicated, I've been neglecting the rest of my life for writing, reading and occasionally reviewing FF lately so need to get back to earning some money!! I love Cas and Bobby too...what great characters they are!
Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 22/01/10 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
So now we know Cas smells good. I've actually wondered how he smells since he wears the same clothes all the time. Yeah, I know, I'm not right. :) Good story, AMB.
Author's Response: I'd forgotten you wanted to know what Misha smelt like when I added that bit! But I reckon an angel would smell like something elemental yet lovely - like a pine forest or the sea....and as he can repair the clothing the same as he repairs Jimmy, he'd always be clean and fresh!
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 19/01/10 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yep....wrong move for Yuki to awaken memories of Cold Oak in Dean! That's a day that'll never be erased for Dean! Cas smells good:) HeHe! BTW, what's an A&E? Good job, Anne-Marie! Liked this sequel a lot!
Author's Response: Yes, someone else reminded me I should have used ER not A&E (Accident and Emergency) - teach me to be too UK-centric! And Angels should smell wonderful don't you think....?
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh noes! Dean's not himself at all!! Hope Sam's realization means he'll try to fix Dean, or get help! BTW, As a gal that lives by one of the Great Lakes, I'm geekily excited that your story takes place near Superior.
Author's Response: Nope, he's not is he! As to the location, I'd done some research about that area for my book and liked the look of Copper Harbor, and there was some interesting info about the winter weather that seemed relevant... Maybe I should set my next one in Ohio!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG, Is Sam too late? Is Dean already lost? Great story, loving it. More soon please. Thanks...
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you've found the last chapter now - and liked the ending...?
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
I loved it. I kept wondering if Cas would ever show up. I could easily see Dean holding onto Sam and saying he would die a normal death and stay dead if Sam died. It made me choke and cry. I'm not sure what A&E is though???
Author's Response: Oh! sorry about the A&E - I should have said ER shouldn't I! Here we call them Accident and Emergency departments - hence A&E. I forgot where I was for a moment (a bit like calling Copper Harbor "Harbour" all the time and only noticing right at the end!)
Author's Response: PS I wondered if it was as sad as I thought...I'd made myself cry!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
Holy moly! Get back there Sam! Now you know something isn''t right with the world, and Dean is acting out of character, go back and rescue him, now!!! Loved the intense chapter, going on to read the next.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great sequel! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Does this mean you read the first one too?
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh!!! AMB....that was truly wicked! A Dean without fire is not our Dean, indeed!! Great chapter.....and you've left me hanging off of quite a cliffie!
Author's Response: Thanks Terri! And of course you are right, Dean needs passion of all kinds! Hold on to the cliff a bit longer, new chapter's in its way....
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
I really think you're doing a great job on this sequel. There's more depth to your descriptions and the story seems to flow more. The tension's building in the whole story, and with Betty and Dean:) I hope Dean's heat isn't like Austin Powers' mojo.....I read on.....
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
I so love your sense of humor thrown in: "Dean missed Sam’s second perfect bitch-face. Pity really, it was a classic." ;) I glad Dean was upfront with Sam, for once. But I'm worried about Yuki Onna's plans.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
How terribly sad! I want Sam to come to the rescue! Dean needs his fire. I had a feeling Betty was bad news. Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: We writers are cruel to Dean sometimes, I know... Next part is on its way very soon...
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the descriptions of those weary Winchesters. And like Dean....I perked up when there was mention of hypothermia. Uh oh. Here comes trouble. Nice way to draw me in!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 16/01/10 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
OMG, that was so intense, Are they going to be able to save Dean, Is he changed enough that Sam notices it? Post again soon Please ...
Author's Response: Will do.... I like intense!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
Uh oh, what kind of debt is Dean talking about. Seems like he kinda knew what they were getting into, especially himself. I'm very intrigued to see what happens next and how they are going to get out of it. Hurry back!!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting - I am working as fast as I can!
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting chapter I'll be looking out for the second chapter to see what is going to happen. Post again soon.
Author's Response: Many thanks, Maureen - chapter 2 being posted as we speak!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Umm, interesting set-up. I haven't read your prequel so am intrigued as to what is coming to catch up Dean from the recent past. It has a whistfully sad quality about it...Dean believing there is nothing for him beyond hunting... Nice start Bird x
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I am deep in a wistful sad Dean mood at the moment, but pulling out of it temporarily for the next chapter...briefly anyway!
Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good start, AMB. Actually stronger than the prequel, IMO.
Author's Response: Cheers SRH - is there a pattern here d'ya think? Going stronger for sequels...
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
ok- you got me curious. I'm liking the premise, and the set-up. Two exhausted brothers, Dean driven as usual and distracted. Now you hint that there's something from his past laying in wait... I sense some whumpage ahead... Bring it on! Sounds like you have a good one in store!
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope to fulfill expectations...if you want to know something about the past that might be lying in wait, read the prequel - Waiting for Armageddon...! Love to know what you think of that too. Very new to all this FF malarky.
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