Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 06:43 PM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Poor Dean and Sam!!!! Dean for being either really sick or injured (or both), and Sam trying his best to take care of his brother. Well done!!
Author's Response: HEY!!!! *sigh* yeah poor boys... but don't we just like them like that!? :))) yeah I love me some Sam that takes care of Dean... mmm
thank you so much for reading this and leaving a review!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 12:26 PM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Very good, i liked this, Dean must be hurt pretty bad to keep passing out like that, makes me wonder what happened.
Author's Response: Hey You!!!! (I really should post more often here.... ) huh, well as I said in my previous review reply: maybe he's sleeping off the affects of meds, maybe he's having a fever, etc.... there are a lot of possibilities! that is why I did this story like this... because everyone has his own kink... some will say Dean has a fever, some will say he was hurt and Sam doped him up on meds, some would say he was drunk... etc.... but if you read really closely, I did write that Sam was on the phone (probably Bobby) and that he was nervous, scared and probably a little out of his mind (pacing, running his hand through his hair, pressing the phone to his ear real tight):))))) so in my mind.... Dean was hurt really bad and Sam was out of his mind with worry.... but then Bobby like idk talked to him and told him that whatever was wrong with Dean, it's gonna be okay! LOL...... but well you can totally add to this... what would YOU like to be wrong with Dean!? there are all these possibilities, dontcha think!? and I love writing stories, where I make the reader THINK about things, and I don't just handle everything to the reader on a silver plate! :))))) thank you sooooo very much for reading!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 07:19 AM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Ummm? So what's wrong with him here? Is he hurt? Is he drunk? The ambiguity is intriguing. I like the repartition and cadence of the piece, its both reassuring - like a heartbeat, and a little worrying as he keeps dipping in and out of conciousness. Nice original piece. bird x
Author's Response: Heya!!! *giggles* I KNOW... gosh I can be so mean sometimes, huh!? but I really love to write stories where I make people think about stuff, about what happened to the boys and if you read really carefully (not just this story, but all of my stories) I do give these litle hints that can make you understand a story better.... but still... I really really love to write stories, where the reader has to think a little....... thankyou.... yeah.... idk what I was thinking when I wrote this.. it just came to me... and the paragraphs just HAD to have the same structure... I think it just works best! :))))) yeah whoah, Sam was worried! poor Dean... :)))) and I would be worried too, if my brother would be like that.... thank you again so much for reading this! hugs, S.
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 14/01/10 03:25 AM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Each awakening adds more to the intrigue, but either he's got food poisoning or is sleeping off the effects of too much booze...or something else? But I guess we'll never know!! lol Jacq
Author's Response: hey! hmmm those two theories are awesome... they just add to the list: maybe he's sleeping off the affects of meds, maybe he's having a fever, etc.... there are a lot of possibilities! that is why I did this story like this... because everyone has his own kink... some will say Dean has a fever, some will say he was hurt and Sam doped him up on meds, some would say he was drunk... etc.... but if you read really closely, I did write that Sam was on the phone (probably Bobby) and that he was nervous, scared and probably a little out of his mind (pacing, running his hand through his hair, pressing the phone to his ear real tight):))))) so in my mind.... Dean was hurt really bad and Sam was out of his mind with worry.... but then Bobby like idk talked to him and told him that whatever was wrong with Dean, it's gonna be okay! LOL...... 'm glad you enjoyed this!!!!!! thank you so much!!!!!
hugs, S.
Reviewer: ilurvemysammy618 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 08:19 PM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
lol. he barfed on sam's shoes :-)
Author's Response: hey!!! :))) hahahah, yes he did!!! :))) LOL :))) I don't know who to feel more sorry for... Dean for puking or Sam for getting his shoes dirty! :))) thank you for reading!!! hugs, S.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 05:20 PM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Very funny! A nice balance of humor and tender care.
Author's Response: hey!!! thank you!!! oh well you know me.... humor and hurt and comfort! can't do nothing without that! :))))) LOL xx S.
Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 13/01/10 03:06 PM · On: Slipping Into Darkness
Aw, poor old Dean, what the hell happened to him? Great slipping in and out knowing Sam is always there, looking after him.....
Author's Response: hey!! ahahah *shrugs* I have no idea what happened to Dean! LOL :))) I just had this idea in my head and I wrote it down and idk... LOL... :)))) Yup Sam is always there.... :)))) just.... there.... thank you so much for reading this!!! and leaving a review!!! awesome!! hugs, S.
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