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Reviews For Salvation
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/08 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

This was so very good.... Sometimes I feel its good to read a non supernatural story, good to see Dean and Sam in them. This Story was really so very good..... (I almost cried to see how much dean is ready to sacrifice for his little brother) it almost reminded me of the movie 'basketball diaries' - the way leo suffered in that!!!! Good job. Looking forward for more Dean & Sam's stories...... keep posting. :)
Pranami

Reviewer: RoweenaC (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

So, this time no horrible recovering for Dean? I'm a bit surprised ;))

Well maybe this'll turn out really good... No wait, it's awesome already............ Cheers!

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

I love your story. Drugs are so distructive, they don't just change the life of the addict but also of his friends and family. You did an awesome job describing the impact on Sam and Dean. I love how they always put the other one first, which is what in the end saves Sam! Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

Good, solid story. Nice characterizations of both Sam & Dean.  Loved the angst, both physical and emotional. 

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

very riveting writing!  Sorry that it's over, you left some loose ends but it's like any good story or movie...the best ones make you think.

Thanks for a very entertaining and thought-provoking story.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

A wonderful way to finish a terrific story. The dialogue between the boys was beautifully written, a nice balance of angst and humour. and I love the name you chose for your story. Salvation indeed. Well done, and many thanks.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

Knew Sam would redeem himself, but it sure was a battle. Great writing!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Yep, nice to know I was right! Another great chapter, it's dragging me along!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

Dean is such a selfless damn hero. I have  a feeling you are about to make things get much worse! Woo hoo!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

What a great chapter, you have really nailed the angst and turmoil. And although I obviously feel really sorry for Sam, I am REALLY sorry for Dean. *sigh*

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved this line:

"Screw confidentiality," Dean snapped, proving that subtlety wasn’t his strong suit. "He’s my brother. If there’s something wrong with him I need to know. He said he had a seizure. Why?"

Dean is in full-on protector mode, gotta love that!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Uh oh, this is bad. They're both unconscious, and I think Sammy's addiction finally caught up with him. Poor Dean is going to have trouble handling this I imagine!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have been trying and trying to get to this story, so glad I finally made it. A great start, you write about Sam's dependency very convincingly. Now that I've started I'm reading straight on!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

That was a wonderful and very emotional story. Dean was there for Sam and Sam fought his addiction to save Dean's life. I love the brotherly bond. Great work neonchica, I'm looking forward for your next story.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 8

Good job and well done!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 8

hey a job nicely done here, i liked this story.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

I really enjoyed this story and was sad to see it end. You do a really good job in capturing the interplay between the boys. Good for Dean to feel guilty about liking Sam on drugs - avoiding his chick-flick moment at too high a price. And good for Dean that he leaves Sam with just enough guilt to keep him from using again - we hope!

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

What an awesome ending to the story!  Having Sam being the one to get rid of the last of the pills was awe inspiring.  You couldn't have ended your stroy any better!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

Yay! I'm so glad Sam ended up okay. You did an amazing job writing this story...it was a pleasure to read!

~Kayla

Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 14/05/07 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

So glad Sam finally improved enough to see how bad Dean was. Loved the image of Dean as an angel in white jeans and white leather jacket. LOL It seems like both of the boys are best when they are concerned about the other. Another wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 7

Very very compelling writing.  You've got me on the edge of my seat!  I'm hoping Dean will be all right and I'm rooting for Sam too!

Great job!

gengen

Reviewer: bettty69 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awsome chapter. Great brother bonding!! You go Sam!! I hope...

Always looking forward to a new updated chapter!!

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

Nice to see that Sam is finally starting on that path towards winning the battle.  It's a shame it took Dean almost dying to get him started!  

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yeah Sammy!!!!! I knew that he could get his sh** in a pile for Dean!!! Loved how you back tracked at the beginning to show that Sam had noticed Dean before leaving the room - a nice bit of narrative slight of hand! Great chapter - and fast too - maybe like the next one....Pllleeeaase!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

At last, Sam is getting better. Great update!

~Kayla

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