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Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 9

I do believe Markus is finally beginning to see how Sam needs to be with Dean right now, and not back at Stanford. Seems like Dean is getting the best of care, and will have a nice Christmas with his new friends. Too bad the jerks got away, though. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Another awesome chapter! It's killing me to wait for Mondays!!! I'm thinking that this is going to end up being Sam and Markus to the rescue.... And Dean, Dean, Dean... always putting up a front... I just know lying to Ryan is going to be a bad thing... So sad how badly Dean wants to "see" Christmas - great story and wonderful characterizations as always...

Author's Response: Thanks,  Lisa. Always good to hear.

Reviewer: denise69 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

OMG!!! Can't wait for the next update!! I have a feeling that things are going to get worse for Dean before it gets any better... I'm glad that Sammy is on his way to hopefully save the day. Poor Dean!! I have a bad feeling the brothers are not done with him....please update soon!!

 



Author's Response: Go Sammy,  GO!!!!!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 10

OMG!Don't tell me that Dean has internal injuries but lied on his real condition to live for once Christmas like he never had before, that's heartbreaking. Sam felt that DEan was in big trouble, I'm glad that Markus offered him to go searching for Dean. The tension is building up, I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, O.  I'd better get on it then!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 10

You're setting us up for something awful- I can just feel it... Dean's hiding whats really wrong and Sammy's sensing that his brother is really in trouble- cant fake out those Sammy-spidey senses... LOL.

And those Stadler brothers are still out there somewhere... bastards!

And poor Dean...He was, for the first, and perhaps only time in his life, going to experience the real deal. Christmas. Just like the one in the carols, just like the books. Like the ads, only better. His father had been a good man, he'd done his best and Dean had lionized him...but this area that was one of his worst failures, a constant source of hurt for his boys, year after year after year. And even Dean had found it hard to forgive. He needed to be here. He needed to see the excitement, the thrill, and the happiness that the little ones would show. He wanted, just once, to see all the silly Christmas eve wishes of a couple of normal kids come true. He didn't care how he felt physically, he needed this more. - all he wants- but I'm thinking he's just not gonna get it!

Well done Mal- you're torturing us slowly.... but so deliciously!

-Tree



Author's Response: Thanks,  Tree!   Glad to hear you're all squirming nicely,  lol

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hey Marquessa - am really enjoying this story - keep it up

Rachel



Author's Response: Thanks Rachel---always happy to hear that!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 01/02/10 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 10

Why does Dean have to lie about his condition, his badly is he hurt.  What will happen when Sam and that Markus one show up?  Is Dean going to worsen before Sam gets to him?  More soon please. Greta chapter.  Don't like any of Sam's friends.....

Author's Response: You know Dean,  he'd rather suffer in silence than become what he sees as a spectacle.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 30/01/10 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Poor dean, he's not doing so well, it's not good that the Sadler's are on the loose, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks,  (types faster)

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 27/01/10 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow Mal, nice one.  Poor Dean's not doing very well.  I love Stacy, Ryan and Connie but he really needs Sam - the phone's gone, can't be good and the Sadler brothers are on the loose - really not good.  Hanging for the next update Mal.  Awesome.  K.

Author's Response: Thanks, K.  So glad you're enjoying this---ml

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

After what Sam told to him, I think Markus realised why Sam can't come back at Stanford. Dean is not in great shape, hope he'll get better soon and call Sam. The Sadler brother're on the loose, that's bad news. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Poor dumb boys,  lol.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 9

Good!   I'm glad Sam is getting his friends to get off of his case!  I know they care, but, grr!  I think Dean is in horrible shape, and I'm very worried about him, AND I'm worried about him not having his phone.  It's a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks,  (blush)

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

loving this, thank you for updating i eagerly wait thr next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for saying so,   ml

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is a great story!  I really love it.

Can you imagine Sam's friends seeing Dean all bruised up?  Yeah. that would really improve their opinion of him.

 



Author's Response: They would draw a less than flattering conclusion,  for sure. 

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 9

i'm loving that Sam is kinda "coming around" as it were... even nicer that Markus is seeing Dean for more than being some ass that just showed up and drug Sam off...

I'm a tad worried about Dean though... its just too easy that he got up and about - then couldnt eat... things NEVER go that easy for him... and the lost cell phone... that's not good either...

You just keep toying with us!!! Meanie!



Author's Response: Meanie..?  ouch,  lol.  And like you would have it any other way ;)

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yay, so glad to see an update. Sorry missed a review to the last chapter - RL...

Loved this one again. Wonderful dialogues. Markus is a way better person then we first thought. I hope Sam will head out to Twain Harte to check on Dean. I have a feeling he is not doing too well and could need some assistance in dealing with the Saddlers. I adore Ryan and his family. You always do so well in creating and describing various characters. 

Looking forward to the next update. Soon please? :)



Author's Response: thanks, S.  Ryan is loosely based on my own brother,  who's a firefighter.  Only Ryan's more fun,  lol  (sorry Anth!)

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 26/01/10 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hopefully now Markus will shut up about what a loser Dean is and how Sam should stop being with him.  I have a feeling that Dean's fever is going to get a bit worse and the fact that he can't find his phone is not going to be good.  good update


Author's Response: Thanks as always.  I may just stop posting at the other site after this one.  It's kind of a downer to have so few replies.  People here are more vocal,  bless'em----mal

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 9

So, so, so happy to see an update! I am totally in love with this story -- but you knew I would be...

So... Dean. I'm thinking he is far from as ok as he thinks he is. I love Connie -- as well as Ryan and Stacey. And those Sadler brothers on the loose? I just know we haven't seen the last of them... wonder if they know wher Ryan lives.... hmmmmmmmm.......

I'm thinking that Sam is either going to get worried about Dean or just plain really miss the big galute! I'm still holding out hope that Markus will become a complete convert to the awesome that is Dean Winchester!

As always, fingers crossed that RL leaves you enough time to update sooooon!



Author's Response: Holy cow,  thanks!  Markus grew up in a privileged world,  but he's learning.

Reviewer: denise69 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love your story!! I always look forward to them!!!

Why do I have a feeling that Dean has not heard the end of the Sadlers!!!! Hope Sam comes to the rescue!

Update soon, can't wait!



Author's Response: Thanks!  Sorry the next chap took so long--ml

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 25/01/10 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

Sam's still not suffering enough for leaving Dean to go spend a cosy Christmas with his buddies.  Is dean going to be OK?  Please post again soon.

Author's Response: Oh,  Sammy is suffering.  But he deserves a little autonomy,  even if he can't function all that well alone...

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 24/01/10 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 8

I hope the boys at least listen to their messages to know that they were thinking of each other.  I hope they get back together soon.   Loved that he was calling for Sam, and the little girl loaned him her bear named Sam.  Very sweet! I'd love it even more if the real Sam could get there and be there for his brother. 

Author's Response: And I wish Christmas holidays were a few weeks longer,  so the story  wouldn't be so late,  lol

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter.  Is Dean not going to phone Sam when he is in this state?    So are they just going to Christmas apart and then get beck together as if nothing had happened? That sucks... 

Author's Response: Yeah,  that doesn't seem right....

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Sweet little children and awww...Bethany gave her bear to Dean to sleep with, how cute. I'm glad that Sam defended Dean, at least Marcus realized he's a good and a great brother for Sam. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks.  Maybe Markus will see the light...

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 8

The scene with Dean and the bear was so sweet...love the thought of him with a bear.  Glad to see that finally Sam is standing up to his friends and defending Dean...good update

Author's Response: Thanks,  always.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 8

That was a lovely chapter, apart from Adam being such a snob.

Author's Response: I gave Adam a kick for you off the page.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

Well, I'm so glad that Sam stood up for Dean! That was quite nice. I really wanted to smack Adam, how dare he say that about Dean! The jerk. I'm glad that Dean seems to be having a good Christmas even though he is laid up. How sweet of Bethany to loan out her teddy bear to Dean, just too sweet! I can easily picture Dean asleep with that bear! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Considering how little value Dean places on his physical health,  I think he could be having a fine Christmas regardless..

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