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Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

I've been haunting my email - dying for this update and it totally did not disappoint. Glad to see Markus coming over to realize what Dean means to Sam. I'm hoping that they get a real eye-opener with how Dean spent his Christmas...

Poor Dean! The nightmares! and of course the kids would bond with him instantly! I'm still wondering if there isn't more coming his way...

Can't wait for more....



Author's Response: Aw,  thanks!

Reviewer: denise69 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 8

I have been looking forward to your update!! Loving the story,,,,,,

I have a feeling Dean is not out of the woods yet!! I'm also hoping for a brotherly moment!!

Update soon, can it be tomorrow???



Author's Response: How about soon?  lol

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 8

Poor Sam...such an awful situation for him... and Adam is such an ass.... but I'm glad that Markus stood up and Sam realizing how  much he misses Dean...

and then Dean... missing Sam... unconsciously needing Sam- when he's hurt.  love the little girl- wanting to give him her Teddy named Sam... that was sooo sweet...

I just can't help but to think that this is far from over... and its all soo nice and sweet- but its like I'm waiting for something awful yet to happen....



Author's Response: Come on...would I do that to poor Dean?  It's christmas.....

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying this story.  Poor Sam (memorial for Jess) and poor Dean (ouch!).  Your writing is wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 15/01/10 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

You got the chapter posted quickly, and I didn't get a chance to read it until now!  What a great chapter!  I'm glad Sam's friends prepared him for what the Memorial was going to be like.  I suspect it's going to be difficult.  I of course loved getting Dean all fixed up too.  Lovely!


Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!  I try to keep the story from dragging out between updates.

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 12/01/10 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

So glad that Dean has Ryan taking care of him...especially with Sam off.  Glad that Sam and Dean vacation from each other has got Sam thinking about what Dean means to him and who Dean is...great update as always

Author's Response: Thanks.  Man,  so much for my attempt at writing a short one for Christmas.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter,  so Sam does think about his brother even when trashed or because he is trashed, poor Dean, he's obviously not too bad. Looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: Sam just needs reminders

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm starting to warm up to that Markus guy a little bit. The idea of a memorial for Jess including Sam is sweet - bittersweet...

Damn you Dean. Why didn't you admit that you have all symptoms Ryan asked for? I'm afraid he might run into trouble and Sam might even get a call from a stranger soon.

Thanks for updating regularly! I can't stand long waits if I enjoy a story so much :) 



Author's Response: That's what i'm here for!  ;)

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh no no noooo! Thesse bastards! Poor Dean. Can he ever get a break?

Author's Response: Not in my sandbox.  lol

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

Silly Dean, saying he's not Concussed so he can sleep, hope he doesn't regrat it, i think it's going to be an emotional day for Sam at Jess's memorial lunch.

Author's Response: Silly boys.  sigh....

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 11/01/10 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Poor Dean, there's got to be more to those injuries after all those kicks!  Nice update Mal, looking forward to the next one.  K.

Author's Response: Thanks, K.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

A luncheon in Jess honour, it's going to be a very emotional day for Sam. Ryan, Connie and Stacy're taking so well of Dean. Wonderful story Marquessa, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks as always, O.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

I've been haunting my email waiting for your update! I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop for Sam... and I'm thinking that Dean may not be out of the woods yet either.... I'm thinking that Sam is going to be getting a phone call about his brother from a stranger... Dean should know better than to downplay a concussion.

Author's Response: Thanks Lisa,  Dean should no better on SO many things,  lol

Author's Response: Know better,  he should KNOW better

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awhhhh....love that Stacy, Ryan, and Connie are taking such good care with Dean. Sam is so confused as to what his life is and what it could have been. I'm looking forward to the next part!


Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!

Reviewer: denise69 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

Was I happy to see that you updated!! I have a feeling that Dean is still not out of Trouble with the Brothers!!! I hope Sam meets with Dean soon. Miss brotherly moments!! 



Author's Response: Thanks Denise

Reviewer: bernie (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great story as always!  I enjoy your stories immensely!

Author's Response: Well Thanks,  Bernie!  Hope you continue to enjoy...mal

Reviewer: usaexpat (Signed) · Date: 10/01/10 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

glad that Dean got to call Sam and leave the message at least before he got beat up.  So glad that Ryan found him quickly...wonder what else you got up your sleeve with this one...good update

Author's Response: thanks,  darlin'.  and thanks for reviewing on the other site, I don't get alot of traffic there...mal

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/01/10 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm glad that Dean tried to call Sam too, they missed each other. Poor Dean he took a hard beating from Sadler and his buddies. Thank goodness, with Ryan being a paramedic he's in good hand and Stacy'll take care of him, no doubt about that. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response: I felt bad for our Dean as well.  But Christmas has a way of making up for things.....

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 6

Yikes! Sounds like those goons really worked Dean over really good. I wonder if Ryan still plans on taking him home or to a hospital. I can't imagine those kind of injuries not attended to by a doctor! Poor Dean, looked like he was going to have a nice Christmas, and them Wham!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks,  Moira

On a total tangent,  we have a red brick general store in my community.  Since before the nineteen hundreds,  people have carved their names in the bricks.  The most clearly incised name here is "Moira."

Fame is an odd thing,  isn't it..?

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sam sure has some mixed emotions there. At first I was horrified how he was seeing his life with Dean, almost like Dean was a ball and chain, and then he gets "clarity" and realizes that he truly needs Dean, especially to save him. Dean seems like he is having a good time. I wonder if he will still run afoul of Gary and his goons again. I hope he can spend Christmas with Stacy and Ryan. Looking forward to the next chapter which I see is already up!!!

Author's Response: at this point, poor sam is in a complicated place...

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, I just knew those mean sonsofbitches were gonna come back for him...they really worked him over, poor babe!

So sweet, Dean wanting to call Sam to let him know he was having a great Christmas, to enhance his brother's.

You've created some very likeable original characters in this tale, and at least Dean's got somewhere sage to lay his bruised and bloody head for the night!

Loving the story and looking forward to the next update.

Jane x



Author's Response: Thanks Jane.  I truly appreciate the reviews.  As always,  i have to  add that i cannot return the kindness.  I just can't read while I'm writing because I fear that I will become derivative of all the talent and ideas out there.  Thanks...mal

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awww, poor Dean, just when he was having a nice time for a change, but at least Stacy and Ryan are nice.

Author's Response: Dean will always live up to his mayhem potential in my world,  but he will also always find his champions.  Thanks,  mal

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

Wow, I would have expected worse damage to Dean considering the beating he took.  Looking forward to more, Post again soon,  Is Sam even thinking about his brother or is he too busy being normal?

Author's Response: Yeah,  Dean's hurting.  But Sam is too,  in a different way...mal

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh, this chapter made things intense!  Poor Dean!  And on Christmas!  You wrote the fight well.  Dean didn't have a chance, really, but he did some serious damage, and I liked that.  I'm also really happy that Ryan is taking Dean in.  I'm anxious for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks P!   happy to oblige---ml

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 08/01/10 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 6

Been away for the holidays, just catching up and saw a new one from you - had to read it all the way through - awesome Mal, missed your writing.  Can't wait for more, you do hurt Dean so well.  Nice to hear Sam realise what Dean has done for him. Thanks K.

Author's Response: Thanks tomash.   Always a pleasure to hear from you----mal

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