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Reviews For Fizzled
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/12/09 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 2

Really loved Dean's gradually returning stream of consciousness right at the beginning when he wished for a college brain to figure out how he'd landed in hospital - lol. 

Can understand his worry over Sam and the fact that the doc was dragging the explanation out - or so it seemed to Dean, heading for bad news. Luckily it didn't turn out that way, and the doctor was understanding enough to reunite the brothers in the same room. 

And awwww - a bunny. Poor Sammy, he's so gentle. I'm believing more and more that the Sam we saw in S4 wasn't really Sam. It's nice to have him back again, even though there's a lot of crap going down around him. 

Loved the bit of Dean-revenge at the end with the intended drawing of a bunny on Sam's cast.

Thank you for this. 

Jules



Author's Response: Yes we really needed kind gentle Sammy and a bit of a fluffly ending. But stay tuned because due to some nagging over at fanfic.net I wrote another chapter and theres a twist too it. Thanx for reading and reviewing. Thanx Charity

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/12/09 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really good descriptions of the pain and Sam's struggle to get to his phone. His worry for Dean came through clearly too, and his desperation fuelled by a hefty dose of guilt over his past mistakes.

And I'm really intrigued as to how they got in that state - and where's my Deany-babe? I think I'm just as worried as Sam....

Great job on Sam's confusion at the end with all the voices running in together. 

Jules



Author's Response: Yes I tried to make things vague and show to the audience the fear of not seeing Dean as well. I'm glad I got you worried too. Thanx Charity

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