Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 7

What can I say Muffy... awesome update!

Things really went from bad to worse. Oh no no NOOOO! Another cliffhanger to another amazingly written chapter! Please don't leave us hanging in there too long. The boys need help! :) 

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

THAT BASTARD!!!!!  I knew Jeff wasnt to be trusted when he never got around to making that poultice for Dean... I hope Sam kicks his ass- maybe Joe or the bats will appear and tear hima new one...

Either way- Sammy needs to get to town and get that mummy... although- I'm glad he's figured it out and how it all fits together, cause I sure as hell havent yet.

And poor Dean... dying and he knows it... yet ready as usual to sacrifice himself to save everybody.

I loved the way you had Dean's convo with Joe just blending so well in between Sam still being by his side and trying to keep him grounded in the here and now. For most- trying to write that convo would have been confusing- but it just played out so well in this...

okay- guess I have to sit back now and chew my nails for a couple more days...

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Holy crap! I was relieved that Dean was out of the cave until all the  unexplained "accidents" started to pile up. I wonder if Joe is behind all of this? Is Dean the sacrificial lamb? Looking forward to reading t he next chapter.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/09 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

IS confused- I think.... okay- Dean is the key- he's gotta be "the balance" right- replacing Joe as the sorta sacrificial lamb... which is bad... badbadbadbadbad! Not sure that's what Sammy figured out... but I'm thinking sooo....

Also not liking how bad Dean's physical condition is looking (although- its Hurt!Dean- so I'm loving it too!) What happened to Jeff making that poultice- the worthless bastard- come' on - the boys came to bail his ass out- the least he can do is help out Dean a bit!!!

And now- the boys are caught out in that supernatural squall- soooooo not good...

*sighs* - I read this too fast- now I got to sit back and wait again!!! *cries*

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

Riveting chapter. It's getting worse by the minutes. Everything is in fire or has been shut down. I'm wondering if Joe is behind all this to keep Dean to leave. Maybe he thought that Dean is key to fix whatever needed to be fixed. I'm looking to more.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 5

okay- so Dean's rescued- but sooooo not saved... I'm not likely the whole attack-bats thingee... wth is up with that... and who's controlling them. I thought maybe its the whole Evil entity- but maybe its Joe's bunch trying to keep Dean around? Obviously Dean is tied to the place now - thanks a lot Joe! - and something is pretty determined to keep him there- hence the exploding helicopter, house, etc.... ( was a little worried when Sam went to start the Impala!)...

But the bats... totally creepy there... and now they just beat the crap outta Sam...  YIKES!!!! 

NEED>>> MORE>>> NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/12/09 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

**Swallows hard** OMG Dean, you wouldn't kill him, right? RIGHT?! What a gripping chapter Muffy. Hm, I still don't know about that Joe guy - he is creepy. Glad Sam and Jeff are to the rescue. But will they be in time? Can't wait for the next update :) 

Congrats on making it a featured story - well deserved! 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

Please, please say this isn't a death fic!! I hope Dean is just unawares and will eventually be fine. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

First of all - Sam! Get your ass back and dig out your brother... no time outs to carbon date some ratty old bones- so long as they dont blong to Dean- you dont give a rats ass- you dont eat, sleep or look at bones until you find Dean... come on dude!!! Geesh!!!!  hahahaha...

And then- What's up with this Joe dude... and what's he trying to "show" Dean with the whole dreamroot trip? I mean- nice of him to be healing Dean and all- but WTF??? is up with the whole- reliving of his death and burial ritual??? And were those his bones Jeff was going gaga over???

This is a totally freaky story - and I'm loving all the ritual and lore... it totally rocks with the whole Indiana Jones/Mummy/ SPN interaction... *although now it does look like I'm having to share it more now with a few other readers- hahahahhaa*

Well done dude--- keep posting aways... oh and note the pre-Christmas present at the top... this story is well-deserving... just wonderfully constructed! As always - I'm hooked AND in awe!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hmmm...so many possibilities with the dream. I hope Sam can find Dean soon but will Dean figure out what Joe is trying to tell him before he does? I do believe I've read this story on the other site? Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 19/12/09 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

Two very exciting chapters, you've got me hooked, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Don't worry I won't keep you waiting long

Hugs

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/09 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

So- I'm the only one reviewing huh? I guess that means this story belongs to me! I claim it- its mine! MINE MINE MINE!!! lol...

Well whats not to like.. except for yet another cliffie- although at least this one isnt as evil...

Poor Sam- nothing like looking for a Dean in a stack of rocks and then not even finding him... I can picture him looking frantic-shaggy mop plastered against his face as he's tearing away at those boulders...

And Dean- well you certainly gave me the HURT! - I'm not so sure about Joe yet. I mean I dont think he's out to hurt Dean- that seems pretty obvious- but I'm not entirely sure if he's real or not.. course- he does seem to be healing Dean- sooo??? hmmmm... but then theres this whole Vision-Quest thinggee going on now... and really- how bad is Dean hurt? And how did Joe get into the cavern? That must mean there's another entrance somewhere- right?

Again- assuming Joe is real????

GAH!!- okay- guess I'm waiting till the next posting...

Awesome story Muffy- and the detail- WOW.... just loving that!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am SO happy you are enjoying this one! I'm glad the attention to detail isn't too annoying :). I do love to hurt poor Dean, and there is nothing more awesome than a hurt Dean and a frantic Sam.

And, hmm, Joe. Yeah he's a bit of a mystery isn't he!

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