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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 09:02 PM · On: How Do You Feel?

FABULOUS! A good story told in clever drabbles.

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, I had so much fun writing this!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 09:01 PM · On: At the Lake

Sweet!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:43 PM · On: Fever

A nice transition chapter that shows us how much Sam cares for his brother.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:40 PM · On: That bad?

Still badgering Sam about the extent of his injuries. Nice job keeping Dean loopy by thinking he's still in the forest and the ground smells like pizza and bleach.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:35 PM · On: Growling Unicorns

What were you smokin' girl? Growling unicorns? Dean smelling himself and thinking it's fresh meat? Meat-eating unicorns? That's so not in keeping with all the princess tales.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:33 PM · On: Sounds Like Sam

"...limb---hand---wait, it was a hand." LOL!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:31 PM · On: What's for Dinner?

Love how Sam diagnoses Dean's state of illness by his insane ramblings.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:30 PM · On: They're Laughing

"The trees bent forward laughing at him." What an interesting word picture.
So much in this one---angst, humor and that skittering little spark of fear.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/02/10 08:27 PM · On: Things Gone Wrong

Cool! Sam tracking an animal tracking its prey.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 06:50 PM · On: How Do You Feel?

Ha, ha! Dean is such a comedian! Loved that Sam fell for it, poor boy.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 06:49 PM · On: At the Lake

Yeah! Dean's not seeing unicorns (hopefully). Maybe he's getting better!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 06:48 PM · On: Fever

Ow! Poor Dean, that is going to be very uncomfortable, but Sam really needs to get his fever down, so in goes poor Dean! I hope it helps!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 05:12 PM · On: How Do You Feel?

heeheheheeee--- awesome--- and soooo Dean!!! Love that end! But Damn Sam!!! Where's the pie???? Do you want him to have a relapse???
Great story Muffy!!! Loved it!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 02:47 PM · On: How Do You Feel?

Loved it, lol.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 29/12/09 05:36 AM · On: At the Lake

Love your metaphors... the lake... nice! Sam smiling is good!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 07:44 PM · On: At the Lake

Sounds like it worked! It's scary when Dean is seeing things that aren't there!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 07:40 PM · On: Fever

*shudder* Oo, that's gonna be COLD....I love feverish Dean. Hooray!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 27/12/09 11:09 AM · On: At the Lake

Glad the cold bath worked, ouch poor Dean.

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 25/12/09 05:17 PM · On: Fever

Oh no no no! Get they guy some serious help! Although.... bathtub and stripped of clothes.... :) Lol!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/09 03:51 PM · On: Fever

NO! nonononononono!!! Not the tub- he needs a nurse- STAT!!! a nurse- nurse I tell ya!!! heehee...
well okay- he's nekkid... so I guess that sorta makes up for you not sending him my way for proper medical care... lol

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/09 11:01 AM · On: That bad?

Loved it, nice little exchange. Mary xx

Reviewer: Smudge93 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/09 11:01 AM · On: Growling Unicorns

Unicorns? Yup Dean's got a fever! lol Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 04:19 PM · On: That bad?

Two very good updates, poor Dean, he's not sounding good.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 02:39 PM · On: That bad?

Bleach and Pizza. NOT a combination I think I'd enjoy. I'm surprised he's not at the hospital. Very cool!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 23/12/09 02:25 PM · On: That bad?

Flat looking trees? - yay!
M O R E please :)

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