Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
now my head hurts.
Author's Response: LOL - thanks, bookworm. Our Dean is going to be a little upset when he comes to. And I really don't want his headache....Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
Dean, Dean, Dean... when will he ever learn? Great chapter, but as always, while I don't mind waiting in the rain with an unconscious Dean, Please update sooon! Love the two spirits angle. I'm thinking, though, that this is not going to turn out to be the easy salt and burn it looks like just at the moment....
Author's Response: If you're going to wait in the rain with an unconscious Dean, then I can only say one thing - MOVE OVER, GIRL!!!!!!!! And no - when do I make it easy for those boys? This hunt has a few twists before it's all over and done with. So - do you want to hold the umbrella, or shall I.....Jules
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
WOW AWESOME CHAPTER! Thank Gof for the friendly spirit, or our Sammy would have been dead! Those boys are going to have a rough time with the salt and burn seeing as how Sam has a bum ankle and Dean just got knocked unconcious. If Sammy heard what happened outside the motel door, he is going to freak!
Author's Response: Salt and burn postponed for the night, unfortunately. And the boys are going to have a rough time with the investigation in general. And yes, Sam heard, but he - well...read on - chapter three going up as soon as I reply to all the reviews.....Jules
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Another great chapter Mizpah! I loved the way Dean looks out for Sammy even when he is sick. Damn girl, why ya gotta go and beat these boys up so bad? Update quick please
Author's Response: Who, me? (scuffs feet) Well, um - I have more beatings planned (loosens collar nervously). The boys are in for quite a ride in the next few chapters - and there are a few twists coming. Glad you are enjoying it...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
ouch, look what happens when you put your tongue in the wrong mouth... Yeah that surely hurts... Good chapter Jules, so an evil spirit and a friendly one, that's kind of new, curious to see where it's going. Well once Dean will be back on his feet of course... And thanks again for the little english lesson from the past chapter.
Author's Response: Hullo, Fredo! Hey, no probs with the english lesson, although in my case I suppose I should call it an Aussie lesson - lol. And you should be amused by a reference I have included in the next chapter about just where in Europe the factory owner disappeared to! No more loopies to France! luv ya...Jules
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yes, you started out with a bang on this cliff hanger. Can't wait to see how Sam survives the fall. What I really loved was the big bad police officer friend and the brothers response to him. Very funny. Also the title's reference to Ghost busters, very cute. Jenny
Author's Response: Thanks, Jenny - the Ghostbusters theme was running through my head rather frequently as I wrote this. And there are a few more cliffies coming up - sorry, can't help myself...and yes, there aren't that many people Sam has to look up at, so I thought it would be amusing to put one in there - I was inspired by the look on Sam's face in Folsom Prison Blues when he encounters his rather large cell mate - that boy has such an expressive face!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow!What a start. Poor Sam, I hope is not badly injured. Who's this spirit haunting this factory. Very intriguing storyline, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Oceane - and there are a few more little twists to be revealed.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay, Jules! You're back with a new one and I couldn't be happier! Love what you did with this first chapter! The big cop scares me as much as he does Dean, but Dean needs a little excitement. And Sam...hanging like that and then falling...WHAT!? Update...NOW! Please...
Author's Response: Stephanie - he's falling - and falling - and falling - and then.....(evil laugh). Now you know I wouldn't kill him, right? Right. And that cop is going to be trouble too. Got a few things up my sleeve for this story - so let's see where it takes me. And I have a very funny twist planned for the epilogue - all I'm going to say is: poor Dean!..... Jul
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was a terrific first chapter! The ending was just pure evil!! Ha Ha Can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I had that particular evil cliffie planned since I wrote the first line - actually, that was the first line! Hmm... right, - moving along - the next chapter should be up soon - hope you enjoy it...Jules
Reviewer: reader (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story so far!!! Please hurry and update can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, reader. And thanks for the review. The next chapter should be up soon - just need to get a few more details worked out, and pad the chapter out a bit more.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
whoa....you're just leaving me hanging like that? Please update soon. I need to know that Sam will be okay! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Hi, Kayla - yes, I've left you hanging, I'm leaving Sam falling, Dean pinned to the wall - (sigh) so much angst, so few verbs to describe it all! Don't worry, Sam's in good hands - the next chapter should be up soon...Jules
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
OH how evil. To leave this chapter with Sammy falling head first from three stories up onto concrete--that is so not nice. Your story is off to an awesome start. I can't wait to read your next chapter so please update soon!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Sammygirl - no Sammy pancake planned - now or ever. I stick to three golden rules: no Wincest, no deathfics, and I like to twist your minds a little. So I have a little something planned for the youngest Winchester that doesn't involve meeting a grisly end! Bear with me - the second chapter should be ready to post in a few days. (and it will have a cliffie too - sorry, can't help myself...) - Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Jules, back on duty, so cool. And faithful to yourself with a great start and a damn evil cliffie ! Oh and by the way, don't ned to send your ga-ga-guys in France, we actually have our share here ! PS, what does PMS mean, read it several times and just can't find out.
Author's Response: Hey, fredo! Your review made me laugh - don't send the ga-ga's to France, hey? Perhaps I should have sent him out here to Australia, where he could get lost in the outback - lol! Thank you for your kind words - I love reviews! And PMS is Pre-Menstrual Stress - I sort of figured that Dean is always ribbing Sam for being such a girl, so it would fit that he would accuse Sam of having PMS. - Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
This could be the most evil cliffie ever. I was going to say how nice it was to have you back, but that's going to depend on how quickly you get the next chapter up!!!!! I love the scene with Sam and Dean sitting in the sun at the very beginning - made me feel all warm and tingly too... *ahem* Love Dean kicking Sammy's ass back into the hunt. Telling Sam he was like John was inspired. Can't wait for more - really!!!!
Author's Response: Hello, lam - all warm and tingly, hmm? Well, who wouldn't? More will be added soon, don't worry - and I wouldn't turn Sammy into a pancake - trust me. I have something up my sleeve, and it's not just my arm - lol. Glad you liked it - it makes writing worthwhile, getting reviews like this....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start look forward to more - K
Author's Response: Thanks for that - more will be added shortly, I promise
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