Reviewer: SamGirl2011andBeyond (Signed) · Date: 26/04/12 09:56 AM · On: Epilogue
This was freakin hilarious. I like Macy and glad that Leroy finally got found out. I also found the whole thing about the GPS tracker so damn funny. Love this story, Jules. *Favorites*
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing this one, I have to admit. It almost took on a life of its own, along with Macy - lol. She was such a fun character, I just kept giving her more and more to do, while trying not to let her take over the story or take the focus away from the boys too much. And I must confess, I really enjoyed writing Leroy getting the crap beaten out of him by Dean, and then being shot by Macy with rock salt. Took me a little while to plan out the note they left pinned to his boxers when they dumped him at the cop-shop, but I got there in the end. Ah, the GPS tracker - I had fun with Sam's complete lack of mechanical knowledge. And knowing what a supressor looks like, and what it's for, and what it could look like.....that made it all the more sweet - ROFL! Poor Sammy - I do like to torture him. Might have to beat up Dean in a future story, just to change it around a bit. lol Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 24/05/10 10:53 PM · On: Epilogue
And she slides into home plate!
Wonderful story...dusting self off. What a fun ride.
Thank you so much for your talent ad sharing with us. Hm...wonder where you will see me next...flips coin in air...he he.
Take care, friend,
Karen
Author's Response: LOL - I'm not sure where you'll pop up next, that's for sure. But at least there's a lot to choose from, including two marathon stories that would probably take all summer - rofl. Thanks so much, Karen. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this one so much. *helps to dust you off*..... There ya go - all clean and ready for the next one.
Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 23/05/10 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Duh...yeah below the cliffie...LOL.
Exciting chapter.
I'm still laughing over the whole. "Oh, no -- grandma" Thing...ha ha...
That's so great.
Karen
Author's Response: LOL, poor Sam, Dean really got him with that urn. Thanks for that, hun. I'm glad you're still with me on this crazy ride. You're in the home stretch now, though. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 21/05/10 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
A cliffie on the cliffie...LOL
You are the cat..I am the mouse.
Good job girl. Not sure where you are leading me...but I will follow...yep ... even off the cliffie.
Sorry, work slowed my pace...but I am still here!
Karen
Author's Response: A cliffie on the cliffie - well, below it - lol. Thank you, Karen. Things will take a bit of an interesting turn now, so hang onto your hat. Oh, I know what you mean about work. I wish I could win Lotto so I could stay home and write full-time. Fingers crossed - it could still happen. Thanks again for reading - you're just about in the home stretch now. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
The shape groaned, gasped, and coughed raggedly. Then it sat up. The rat fled as a guttural human voice filled the quiet night with lurid curses.
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Wha?
Oh, you do like to play dirty -- don't you? LOL. I love it!
See you soon,
Karen
Author's Response: I do, I do - lol. Yep, Leroy's not quite done with the Winchesters just yet. Stirring times ahead. And of course, there's still Casey's ghost to deal with as well. The boys are going to be busy for a while.... Thanks so much for reading, Karen. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 17/05/10 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
OH. MY. God!
This ....OH. MY. God!
You... OH. MY. God!
You could not have wrote that any more clearly. I felt like I was watching tv...an episode. I wish this was an episode. Crap, girl...I hate you. That's a good thing, by the way!
Sighs,
Karen
Author's Response: LOL, I had to actually take a peek at the end of the chapter to remember what I'd done! And oh, that's right - evil cliffhanger. And there's an even worse one coming up! I love to torture my readers.....well, sort of....yeah, okay, I do. Thank you - lol. Not thank you for hating me - well, you know what I mean. I usually have a pretty clear picture of the scenes in my head, so it's good to know that what's playing out in there has translated well to print, so to speak. I'm glad you're loving this so far. There are some really juicy and fun scenes coming up. Oh, and evil cliffies. *grins* Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 17/05/10 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
I so admire how you are writing this case fic. It is well plotted, I don't think that is any ease feat!
I love, love, love...when Dean say's S.O.B. And you had him saying it a lot here...in an oh, soooo... cute way!
I love, love, love, how caring and tender Dean is with Sam and his injured ankle, without being overly done or mushy.
You never disappoint me. I will be spending the long, long, long, very long...ohhh.... so long...super--duper long...too long..., long , long, loooooooooong.......summer reading your work.
Thank you, my saving grace,
Karen...the rambling one...LOL
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Actually, from what I can remember, this one flowed rather easily, all things considered. And it was just downright fun to do, getting down to the basics of a simple haunting - lol. Well, simple being a relative term.... Thank you - and yep, Dean's favourite expression gets a bit of a workout here - lol. And he is a pretty awesome big brother. That's what made me fall in love with him in the first place. A long, long summer? We're coming into winter down here. The nights are getting longer and colder, and I'm swapping the fans for heaters. It's a funny old world, isn't it? Hope you keep enjoying the ride, hun. Jules
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 16/05/10 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hey you:
Great case story. Loved Sam's dive to the floor only to be saved by one of the ghosts. That's cool and creepy.
Also, Hurt Sammy is lovely! He he.
Always know I am in for fun times when I read you!
See you and the boys in the next chapter.
Karen
Author's Response: Hey, you! Survived the season 5 finale? I read your tag, by the way, and tonight I read your poem - oh gosh, those last two lines had me in tears! I couldn't get Sam's face out of my mind either after I watched the episode on Friday night - and I couldn't get to sleep, I was so gutted. Ah, glad you liked the first evil cliffie, with Sam about to be a pancake. And of course, I wouldn't do that to Sammy. And yes, hurt Sammy is rather precious, isn't he? thanks hun - enjoy the ride! Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 11:22 PM · On: Epilogue
Oh my gosh! I loved it! Ahahahahahaha! Dean is good, I have to admit. ;D Oh, and I have to say, I totally thought Macy liked Dean more. Seriously, I really didn't think it was Sam. I mean, it's a nice choice, but at the end, when she kissed Dean on the lips, I was thinking, "Oh yeah, I knew it." Then she pushes Sam up against the car, and I'm literally, O.O.."Oh." ;D
Author's Response: Aha! Fooled you! I like doing that, as you may have guessed. Stoked that you loved the payoff for the GPS tracker thread running through the story - now you know what Dean found in that little shop on the main street - lol. Glad that I could give you an "Oh!" moment when Macy snogged Sam - in full view of big brother - lol. Thanks so much for reading - man, you're really motoring through all my early stuff.... Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aw, I loved the ending so much! Macy singing, Sam laughing, and Dean groaning! Perfect way to end a chapter! ;D
Author's Response: Lol - I just had to bring that song into it. And to have Macy change it and sing the words to get under Dean's skin was just the icing on the cake. It was a fun scene to write. Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
I just love Macy in this! I love how she takes care of the boys, mothers them, and then keeps thinking about how cute they are. I totally agree, if I was working with them, there would no way, I'd be able to keep my mind out of the gutter. :P
Author's Response: I really liked Macy - I know that sounds weird, since I created her, but she flowed so nicely as a character that I just kept giving her more to do. It seemed to work well without actually taking anything away from the boys, which I would hate to have happen. Ooh, yes, my mind would plummet straight to the gutter, too - LOL! Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/09 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh I love the Chapter End Notes! Wet Sam next chapter...well, that would definitely make anyone check out the next chapter. ;D
Author's Response: LOL - so you're a Sam girl? I'm a Dean woman, but I have a gigantic soft spot for Sam. Hope you enjoy the extra large serving of Wet!Sam. Jules
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story, I loved the suspense and the fight scenes. Great interaction between the characters and Macy was very real. I loved the guessing game about who Macy liked better, it was really tough to tell. The end was a total surprise and I loved because of it. Hugs, Vonnie
Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie - chuffed that you loved it so much. I have to say, I really had a great time writing this one. I love a good old-fashioned ghost story - reading and writing them. Oh, you liked the fight scenes? Thank you - that was my first fight scene, I think. I went back and watched the Sam/Shapeshifter!Dean fight in Skin so many times just to get their moves right, I think I wore a hole in the DVD - LOL...Jules
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 12:08 AM · On: Epilogue
great story. the tracking device; too funny. liked Macy and the bond she had with the boys. so far i have read 2 of your stories and i liked them both. keep up the great work. Renee
Author's Response: Why thank you. Glad you liked this one too. I must confess, I have rather a soft spot for this one - I had so much fun writing it, especially bringing the GPS tracker threat full circle. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 11:05 PM · On: Epilogue
Loved your story!! Really enjoyed the little love scene with Sam - was hoping it was him she liked best, cuz, you know, I do. Great ending, too. So Winchester boys-like! And you really know how to write a good fight scene.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I must admit, if I was lined up against a wall and threatened with a firing squad, I would have to admit that this is my favourite story. I love a good old-fashioned ghost story, and I enjoy throwing a bit of humour in for good measure. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it so much. So - Sammy girl, eh? I'm a Dean girl, but I have a soft spot for little brother too - you can't have one without the other...Jules
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
I appreciate the detailed fighting moves, so many generalize too much and you cna't get a good picture of the fight. And the scene where you had Dean toweling down his baby brother sounded very typical of something Dean would really do.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. This story actually had the first full on fight scene that I ever described. And I watched Skin a few times to get my head around their moves. And of course, I think that some people underestimate Sam's fighting skills, and I wanted to show that he could throw a punch with the best of them...Jules
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ah, the trials you writer's put my boys thru. I hear Dean and Sam in every word, tho, good job so far.
Author's Response: Thank you. My careful research has paid off, then. lol. I knew the hours spent watching their every move and eye roll was worth it....Jules
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Definitely don't want to see Sam Sqashed, must keep reading...
Author's Response: LOL - no, I could never do that - hurt them, yes...kill them, not without a foolproof backup plan and a full medical centre on standby...Jules
Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 15/01/08 07:23 AM · On: Epilogue
that was brilliant . loved the story line . always love the banter between sam and dean it makes me laugh . enjoyed the character macy she really gave the boys a run for their money ! fantastic job .
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I am actually planning a sequel to this, bringing back Macy and Leroy. But I only have about two hundred words written so far, so it's a long way off yet. Glad you liked it...Jules
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 02:48 PM · On: Epilogue
Fantastic, so funny. Love the GPS!! Love that it was actually Sam who got the girl, i had my fingers crossed for that one!! Fab story, fab humour! THANK YOU!
Dix
Author's Response: LOL - I think a lot of Sammy girls had their fingers crossed on that one. I know it was rather cruel to do that to my Dean, but.... Oh, and you loved the GPS? I had to bring that one to fruition - I'd been carrying that theme all through the story, leading up to that scene. Poor Sam. This one was fun to write - just a simple little ghost story - LOL. Seriously, thank you very much. I'm glad you loved it....Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 07:33 PM · On: Epilogue
What a fight, I never thought that it would be Macy who'd end it, lol. Loved Dean's touching thought, a tree to remember their dad. A GPS in the ass, Sam's thought about it, priceless. I enjoyed very much this story, terrific work Jules.
Author's Response: Liked that twist? Of course, to be fair to Dean, Leroy did cheat - again, by grabbing the gun. The tree idea was actually given to me by Usagy, from the sn.tv forum - she suggested it for my Steve's memorial, and I worked it into the story. And of course, Dean knows his brother so well, he knew Sam would want to do something like that. Seems everyone liked the GPS tracker scene - (does a happy dance) - glad you liked it. I just couldn't resist bringing that one full circle - I mean, Dean kept threatening it all through the story - poor Sam!...Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 10:46 PM · On: Epilogue
It was the perfect ending for this story! I love the prankster in Dean. And I so was not expecting Macy to pick Sam. Can't wait for the next story you write! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks for that - I hope not too many people figured out what I was going to do there - I was careful not to let Macy give too much attention to Sam, but at the end, well, I just had to have that happen. Thanks for all the reviews, Kayla - I am glad you enjoyed this one. The next one won't be for a little while - I have churned out 10 fics since mid-December 2006, and I'm a bit flat. But I will be back. ....Jules
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 02:14 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a really great ending. I loved the way Macy helped Sam and Dean out with the cops and the hotel owner. She was a great help to the boys. I thought the part where the chief read what Sammy wrote was hysterical, Leroy was definitely going to get whats coming to him. The last part with Sammy and Macy was awesome. I loved how you had them come together so hot and steamy, especially in front of Dean. That was great!! Great job!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for that - I liked Macy as a character, so I gave her a lot to do. And yes, Leroy had to go down big time for what he did - Justice was served - in a fitting way. As for the hot and steamy kiss - well, I had to do that to my poor Dean - he thinks he's so hot (well he is) so I always had it in mind to have Macy go for Sam at the very end. Poor Dean... Hey - glad you liked, hon.....Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 10:46 PM · On: Epilogue
Jules, thank you so much for such a great story! I absolutely loved this ending and it had me laughing so much. The way you had Sam and Dean going at each other in the car was priceless. And what a kiss Macy laid on Sam...WOW!!! Sure made me wish I was Macy! And the GPS tracker...I have that whole scene pictured in my head...it's so great! Great, great job and I look forward to more!!! ~Steph
Author's Response: Hey, you! I just had to have the GPS tracker scene, and with Sam not knowing much about cars, I just let my mind wander through the various pieces of a car, wondering what would be most likely to be mis-construed, and came up with a harmless little supressor. It seemed to work. Thanks, Steph - glad you liked. And I think you 'd better get in line for the part of Macy....
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 09:13 PM · On: Epilogue
Awesome ending to a great story. I have to say that Macy definitely picked the right brother to lay that kiss on (guess you can tell by my penname huh) I also loved the fact that the sherriff kicked leroy in the ass! Made my day!
Author's Response: Yes, I knew that the Sammy girls were going to be screaming either of two things: "Pick Sam" or "Get away from him - he's mine!". And of course, the Dean girls would be screaming "Pick Dean." I wanted to throw that twist in there - hope not too many people actually picked the outcome - lol. Loved the kick? I liked the kick. It sort of cememted that fact that the sod is really in deep doo-doo this time.
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