Wow!  You have Castiel's manner down perfectly!  I especially like that he wrote he'll wait at Bobby's for the answer.  Ha!!  And adding Angel of the Lord behind his name was another clever laugh.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I can just see Castiel waiting patiently like he waited for Dean by the side of the road....if only I had that much patience. :)

I can picture Dean laughing at Cas if Castiel explained why he'd been talking to children, and his earnest, desperate tone in this letter is a perfect mix of child-like belief but very adult concerns about the apocalypse. Very well done!

Author's Response:

Can you imagine Cas trying to talk to children?  Those skeptical adults would think the guy in the trenchcoat was a weirdo.  Ah, Cas you've got to love him.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

I loved that Castiel considered himself to be stationed at Bobby's place.  Very military-speak, like his former garrison.  Cool.  And so Castiel-logical, that is if Santa really knows all the things the kids think he does then he should know God's location!  Your letter rocked - it made me smile. Cheers

Author's Response:

I'm glad I could make you smile!  Cas has loosened up quite a bit but I still thought if he wrote a letter to Santa he'd be all business. :)

Thanks for the review!

Awwww - and I'm glad that you've had Cas affirm that he doesn't believe Zachariah's proclamation of the Winchesters' fate. I don't either, and I'm hoping like hell I'm right.

That was sweet though, the thought of Cas getting advice from children - lovely mental image.

Thanks so much for sharing - and congrats for the blue ribbon!

Jules

Author's Response:

I don't believe Zachariah's proclamation either.  I'm hoping that neither one of them say yes.  I will be so disappointed if they do but I still trust Kripke to do the right thing.....even if I might not agree with it.

Thanks so much for taking time to read and comment!

this was GREAT!!!!!!!!

I could"hear" Castiel writing this- this is exactly how he would say things

you have really done an AWESOME job!!!!!!!!!!

Let's hope his wish pans out for the boys..

 BRAVO!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *blushes*  Thank you so much for such an awesome review!  I'm really glad you liked it.

*grin*  LOVED IT!!!  I can see Castiel just sitting out there on the porch waiting for Santa.  *snicker*

Author's Response:

Me too!  Wonder how long he'll sit there?  :)

Thanks so much for the review!

Sonya

I think you totally nailed Castiel's voice here... and if he WERE to write a letter to Santa- this is how it would sound. Wonderfully done!!!!

 

Author's Response: OMG!  I got a featured story??  I am so excited!  Thank you so much!  I was really proud of this when I finished it and now I'm even more so!