Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
This is a great story. It had ture meanings behind it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
To even imagen that the character of Dean can still be hooked up for longer then a year to a beautiful girl. This story is almost like a Sonent. I like it. Thanks. Almost, like Dean is Romeo and Cat is Juleit. Shakespear Sonent " Romeo and Juliet" except this has nothing with money nor rank in socity. Its more of hunting evil son of bitchs. I sincerly Love it Emensly.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
The Character of CAT is really needed. The setteling concept of word and thoughts that you have placed is remarkable that the sens's leave an alerting call. The dialogs that are in this story is again amazing. In how the thoughts of the sibling conqure to settling one anothers worrie. This is an aoutomaticly a killer story, and keep doing it cuase it does leave a killer mark for e to keep reading your material.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Thank you for placeing a couple of lines that has left a setemant of FAMILY. It is even chilly to feel what they are feeling as if the moment of its arrival where to be merly mila seconds togo for its prey itself.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 10
This is the type of story's that most writers that I have read should place more of. FEELINGS, and not be afraid of them. This is defently a ture peice to keep around and I have enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Again, thanks for all the wonderful reviews, Sam. SO glad you enjoyed this one and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. Catch you on the next one. - Kel ;)
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
"You've given me so much, things that I thought I'd never have. You're forgetting that I was alone, before you. I lack for nothing in my life; as long as I have you to love me. What we have is so much more than I thought I'd ever have. You gave me a family, a brother, every time I wake up in your arms, I send a thank you to the fates that brought us together. I don't need more, I never have and I never will." What a qoute . . . man that would be a great hallark moment. I always thought that Dean had only eyes for a few girls, but the only one he trully loved and would die for was not for CAT; but for his MOM.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
The spirtual effect that is laced around SAM is quite interesting.The determination that you have placed on Dean as to say that it is only for two not three. "Three is a crowd." a but harsh of a comment that Dean would state to sam though. MOtives are understandable.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 7
Sorry, missed my place. Its intreaging of the establishment of a bar and Dean assists a damsil in disstress . . . hich establish a very heroric, which establishs some sort of grace. He feels that he has failed not only SAM, but also his girl. He feels that the sudden independance of steping out of the realm of hunting for a bit will accomplish an establishment of reliving stress then to go back to the hotel.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 6
This rating sucks . . . I think the one that read's the material should decied don't you think? At the end of this story . . . I'll give you mine with my email if any ?'s need to be answered. I can not believe how emotioinal your words can truly effect the scenere of a grauios story such as this.
Author's Response: Sam, I'm just thrilled you're enjoying these stories. They're a bit rough as they were some of the first I'd ever written but honestly I always felt proud of them. Glad I've been able to move you and thanks for reviewing it means a lot. - ;) Kel
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 5
There was always a home that was all and only HOME to the boy's and special visitors. That setting of the car was stupendus and worth the reading, the visual and mental visions are superbe. Deffenitly a story that jI would like to have permisoin from you to copy and re-read it and place it under the pillow at night.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 4
You even scare me . . . I am not the auther of this lovely story, but to emagine these great concept single liners of yours they are great and you still have me hooked up like a fish. It makes me wonder if these lined stories or lines come to your ind unexpected and bam!! you drop everything and write. Now to me I appluade you for that. THank you for this great story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
It is interesting how different both brothers' react to other peoples comments. Sam is more reasonable. Your sensiblity of chooseful words between the damsel and dean are very misteq and powerful. That is a good position to be in. The reader enjoy that as I have. Your structure of the story is hugely magnatiued with a lot of energy. That is good to keep a reader hooked on.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a turly sincery, but the simple love for not only one person but for two and that is truly something good to read and trully look in and gather more info on Deans' womanly side.
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 14
This is just so amazing, so like a book you'd spend money on! You need to get published !! Thank you so much for this, off to see if you've done the next one, i so hope you have! LOL DIx England
Author's Response: Yup, there's one more..lol. So glad you enjoyed I really put a lot of time and effort into this series, I'm glad to see it appreciated - K
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
Thanks .... loved it.... look forward to reading The Chosen
Author's Response: Hey thanks for reading, I'm not sure when I'll begin the Chosen, but I won't make everyone wait too long - Appreciate the review - K
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm so worried about Cat.... I would have reviewed the other chapters but I keep rushing to the next...
Author's Response: That's sweet, hope you enjoy the rest ;) As always let me know what you thought, I live for the reviews - k
Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 14
excellent!!!! woman! u are amazing and creative>>.... u are talented , never doubt that!!!!!!! hoping heard fron u soon!!!!!! good job!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Awww, Thanks Rebecca, I love the way you guys dig this story line. I'm gonna be working on something else for a bit, but trust me I'll get back to it ;)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 14
this last chapter was great, don't you dare let us wait too long ! The three of them, the battle to come, this storyline is fantastic, i want more, and more, and... a little bit more !
Author's Response: Thanks much Fredo, more to come. I'm going to be working on something else for a bit. But I will be baaacccckkkkk - Thanks for reading K
Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ok .... You Know That Rocked! Well It Did! Well Done! Don't Wait Round To Long For "The Chosen" .. I'll Have Withdrawal Symtoms ... I'll Guess i'll Have To Reread It .. :)
Author's Response: Shouldn't be to long, just need a bit of a break - Thanks again for your loyalty, it means a lot to know someone's reading - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
I loved this ending - not that it was over of course!!!! - but how you wrapped it up. You did, after all, promise us more. If they are rounding up the other psychics, will we get Andy? and good Ava? That would be very cool... How totally Dean that he would be the only one not to see that he was the Guardian. Perfect. Sweet. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks Iam, I'm not sure about Andy and Ava, this story started at the IMTOD so, technically my Sam and Dean never met them, however I may bend the rules for Andy if only to write a story with the words 'Gay Porn' LOL. Thanks as always for reading, and Hurry up I'm checking e-mails daily for an update to 'Fester' - K
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
No, it can't be over :( . Seriously loved the story and can't wait for the third installment. Of course Dean is the Guardian and of course he wouldn't see it or want to be the one. But it is obvious to us readers and everyone inside the story too. He is such a reluctant hero. If I was Sam I would be a little angsty about being the Chosen one who has to face and defeat the Demon in the end. I always wait for your stories - you do such a great job with the relationships, character development and the story line. What a great flow and great ending to a wonderful story. Jenny
Author's Response: Thanks much Jenny, a review from you always brightens my day, don't count your chickens about Sam being the Chosen yet, I'm not promising anything. They still have many pyschics to find. - K
Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh My Frigggin' Gosh! One More Chapter To Go? NOOO! I Love The Story! It's Been A Story I've Been Hooked On Till The End! You Have A Talent ... Seriously Dude! Please! Please! Keep The Cat Chase Stories Comin' Because They Just Rock! Here's My True Bristolian Accent Coming Out Now ... "Gert Lush" Iz All I Can Say! Lol x
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment. Cat's definately not done, I'm just gonna take a little break, before I begin the last in the series (maybe the last, who really knows till I write it) As always I appreciate the way you guys have shown your support for Cat - Thanks for reading K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
I just love Bobby!!! It doesn't hurt that I also loved Jim Beaver on Deadwood - awesome if you haven't seen it (rather a lot of language though if that bothers you...). This was an awesome chapter! Naughty girl having Sam look in the wrong place for Dean's pulse... Looking forward to the next chapter - I'll bet Dean has some harsh words for Cat's inattention to herself...
Author's Response: I'd heard Dead wood was great, didn't know Jim Beaver was in it. Now I'll definetly give it a hance - Thanks K
Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a few chapters. Been reading and loving it, of course. Dean and Cat in the car was great - how could he not want to protect her - but realizes to try too hard would be to lose her. True, yet heartbreaking. Then this chapter, wow, So many things came together. Cat trying to fulfill her promise to Dean. The pain and angst for Sam if he realizes what Dean asked of her. The possibility of her love breaking her worse than any Demon could. Deans's willingness to die or suffer anything to protect Sam and Sam watching helplessly. Even Bobby's comments and feelings were perfect. As usual you rock!! Jenny
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jenny I was a little lost for a while, so I took a break, It worked out for the best. The story started flowing again. thanks for the review and the appreciation. Next chapter Tomorrow or Sunday - Thanks again K
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. Great job
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad your diggin the story - I always appreciate a review - K
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