Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/10 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!  Really?  Lucifer has guts to ask Santa for someone else's body.  I don't think Santa's going to be fooled.

Fabulous idea!  I really wasn't expecting this part!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 20/12/09 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice one lol.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/09 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

haha this was great! poor Lucifer, poor Nick, lol

 Jess

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 09/12/09 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well I hope Santa turns this one down!  Nice one

Jacq

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 06/12/09 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOL!  I should have expected it, but you caught me by surprise!  I love it!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/09 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Marlana - Good one - nice play on the title too! - I wonder if Lucifer might give it a go and write a letter to Santa- after all- what does he have to lose? I loved the line- "the skin is already flaking off... how am I supposed to rally the demons looking like this??" Poor guy....

Thanks for breaking the mold and being original! Merry Christmas!

Tree



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked it.  I wanted to do something different and this popped into my brain out of nowhere.

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