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Reviews For Bumpy Ride
Reviewer: WeechesterFanatic (Signed) · Date: 19/02/10 09:47 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

I love this! Just my kind of fic. Wee!Dean in distressed and Daddy made it all better. And to top that, wee!Dean still had time to console his baby brother!

Author's Response:

Hey

Thanks. It had a little h/c in it for both the baby Winchesters and I did nice John in this one, not like me! lol

Mary xx

Reviewer: ziggy (Signed) · Date: 15/01/10 10:09 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

Great little one shot.  Loved how you gave us how Dean's fear of flying started, but John knew just how to stop him going into outright panic, telling him it would scare Sammy!  Great how you wrote John, I always see him as loving his sons and doing what he thinks is best for them but often misses the big picture - they need love and affection - with his need to keep them safe.

Flying isn't my favourite passtime but did manage to do 24 hours straight, going to Australia on my own last year - and the return trip of course!



Author's Response:

Hey

I always wanted to do this fic since I watched Phantom Traveller and finally got round to it. I wanted a nice John in this, one that was still in the transition from father to hunter. Glad you liked it.

I hate flying, it's boring and I never feel safe. Fly to the US one year and it was seven flights there and back. Never again! I would love to go to Australia, but that is some flight!

Take care, Mary x

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 02/12/09 10:00 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

Scary but so cute, loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked!

Mary xx

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 10:13 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

Love the story! I can see where Dean came to be afraid to fly! I'm wondering where their final destination was in Canada? Seattle is in washington, so I guess they could have driven the rest of the way to Canada. 

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, that was my intention! I had actually written more of this with the aunt collecting them but I didn't like it! Forgot that it would leave then stranded 100 miles on the wrong side of the border! Sorry.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 07:32 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

Ah, the wonders of modern flight.  No wonder Dean is so scared of flying!  I liked John in this story.   Very nice.



Author's Response:

Hey

Flying freaks me, I flew to the USA and my husband made me fly from JFK to Dulles in what can only be described as a sardine tin with wings. We had to go down onto the apron just to get on!! Hated every minute of it! So I feel Dean's fear!

I thought I had to write something with nice John in it, before the hunter took him over.

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 12:38 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

yet one more reason i hate flying. thanks for writing

Author's Response:

Hey

TeeHee, I don't need anymore reasons! lol

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 11:34 PM · On: Bumpy Ride

No wonder Dean would have a fear of flying after that tale:)  Poor John, too, with 2 kids in tow!

Author's Response:

Hi there

Yeah, not the best idea for a 1st flight, this was actually based on my second one! It wasn't pretty, lots of ill people on board.

Having flown with kids I feel all of John's pain in this one too.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 11:12 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

Awesome Mary! Absolutely loved it!

Know I know why Dean hates airplanes and drives everywhere! (I never been on a plane so I don't really know how is it)

Loved the "flying sucks, give me a road trip any day", it's so Dean!

Dany



Author's Response:

Hey dany

Thanks.

Dean and me are both in agreement - give me a road trip anyday! Mary xx

Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 28/11/09 08:12 AM · On: Bumpy Ride

No wonder Dean hates flying. :)  I've never been on a plane.  Just the thought terrifies me. 

I like the way John is portrayed here.  I think he did the best he could with the boys.  It just wasn't always what we would think of as best.



Author's Response:

Hey there

I just wanted to write something that was justify Dean's fear.

I hate flying, it all the hanging around in mid air that gets to me!! I hate heights too which doesn't help.

I tried to have nice John in this one, the transition from loving father to hunter was still under way here.

Mary xx

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